ty ty Paula

Fire Surrounding you heart
Pain gives you pleasure
As you're ripping your enemy a part

You cry divinity, to justify your means
Controling lies mask your thoughts
And those lies are ripping at the seams

Bury your kind heart in darkness and sin
Drink the blood of the enemy
And in return feed on their evil within

And no one ever knows
Which way the holy river flows
Just take lives of the innocent
In the name of your God, almighty and benevolent
Edited at 02:27 Tue 13/01/09 (GMT)

Edited at 02:38 Tue 13/01/09 (GMT)

I miss this thread soooo much I need to get with the program and visit more often.

I miss it too and am here!!! lol

Wd Dre

thank you, I keep posting poems from my blog here before I correct typing errors...ah well

Great poems from all, Nice to see ya back Dre

Here i am yawning
On this dirty sunday morning
Trying to get my breakfest fix
Listening to DJLethal doing his mix

Go to work full of fate
Trying to love something i hate
With a smack after i was hired
Now here i am my butt is fired

Come home is my rusty banger
Keys get lost compelled to open the door with a old hanger

So it's told life is crap
Hear all this
Told all that

So i drink all the day
And wake up in the morning
Do the same as Yesterday
Starting with yawning

Edited at 16:34 Fri 16/01/09 (GMT)

Also dear's here is a story
About a man from Knockagory
Had a sheep he wanted to keep
The local council
Made him weep

So he calls his friend
To lend a hand
Only to find
The guy is mad
Pulls out a gun and fires away
Hits poor sheep
From far away

So he cries all night
For the sheep is gone
Into sheep heaven
Will be for so long

Edited at 16:33 Fri 16/01/09 (GMT)

thanks pete

nice job zpdiac

Come on people Lets get our poem on!!!

I like zodiac's poetry
It has a nice flowetry
to it

HA HA NIALL!

Good stuff Dre and Zody

Thats right niall Patrick Kavanagh has nothing on me lol

Nice niall

Well done zodiac

More More More peeps

well done zodiac pleas emore keep this thread alive.

young_gun why don't u write a poem

From girls to Tesco


It's the season to be jolly
Trying to hook up with a girl named holly
She hates flowers
And trips to the sea
Always complaining about sweet oul me

So the foot will be kicking
The door will be open
She will fly like a bird
Damn i ain't joking

Single again so nice it be
Away from the agony
She will always be

So i write a book
Of this weird journey
Famous il be from the girl that broke me
Coming to this it will be
Her asking for the majority of the royalty

So i call my lawyer
Court this way comes
She takes everything that makes life fun

So now i sit in my box
Asking for money wearing no socks
Begging for hope that will no come
Seeing her in a BMW
Thats weights a tonne

So sit i sit like that guy from the script
Never be moved and never submit
Tesco my home were i ask for change
Beating and broken hoping for the best
You know their Slogan
Every little helps

*This is not a true story*

Be good for a film though haha

lovely poem

My name is Callum and my eyes are brow,
and I live in a very clam town,
My name is Callum, I have blonde hair,
and I'm right handed what isnt as rare.

My name is Callum, and I like sport,
except from Cricket when i get caught,
My name is Callum and i am eleven,
and I love my life its almost like heaven.

When I met you
You were delicate flower
You smelled of sweet jasmine
Your hair flowed in the wind
And your love was as sweet as honey

Now You ignore me
I stare out the windows
We're out of touch you see
I'm farting rainbows!
So just leave me