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01:45 Fri 30 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
ROFL @ that nice one paula

Now to wait for dave's response lol
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01:49 Fri 30 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
Dave (aka Squeezy)


There was a young lad named Dave
The cold weather he surely did brave
Cos off came his Trackies
Washed cars for a Maccies
All because of a Burger he craved!!!


))(( XD

SORRY! Lmaooooo




Quoted cos u knocked it off the page!

.......and Potty..he really does wanna strip to wash cars for Maccies I SWEAR HAHA
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11:05 Fri 30 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
There was a young lass named Paula
Who cleans all the wheels cuz i'm taller
She scrubs those alloys
For more happy meal toys
An some nice warm buns to enthrall her!



PMSL!
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11:09 Fri 30 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
IM L M A O !!!!!!!

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18:26 Fri 30 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
ROFL u2 r nuts lol but funny keep em coming pls
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19:39 Fri 30 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
heres a poem from me to you
dont take the mick
it dont suit you
to whoever you are
you maybe near or far
but dont know how you travel
might be bus, might be car
now the poem ends
so time to say ta-raaaa
justsumgirl
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17:55 Sat 31 Jan 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Tids? LMAOOOOOO @ That one!
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11:45 Sun 1 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Oh deary deary deary me
Just found this on page 3
Come on peeps give us a line
Gather words and make 'em rhyme ! ! !


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11:56 Sun 1 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
i sit and i wonder in my room all alone
hearing the rain bring the thunder my soul is so cold
i wish i could see him, i wish i could hug him
but even tho he is gone, my father still knows i love him
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11:57 Sun 1 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
bricktricity said:
i sit and i wonder in my room all alone
hearing the rain bring the thunder my soul is so cold
i wish i could see him, i wish i could hug him
but even tho he is gone, my father still knows i love him




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18:33 Sun 1 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
bricktricity said:
i sit and i wonder in my room all alone
hearing the rain bring the thunder my soul is so cold
i wish i could see him, i wish i could hug him
but even tho he is gone, my father still knows i love him


Aww thats so sweet
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07:02 Mon 2 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
thank u
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17:31 Mon 2 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Back it come to page 1



thats better
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22:36 Mon 2 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Here's a poem, from me to you,
A little poem about doing work that i don't want to,
Lazing about is all i really want to do,
As i wonder where did my holidays all get to?
No more time to sit here all day,
I have to go do work, where i get no pay,
Eight and a half hours of being on my feet constantly,
And the whole time i think, why aren't i free?
Free to stay home and watch tv,
Instead i whinge like a child, oh my, why me?
The holidays have gone, no more fun to be had,
Thinking about the early mornings just make me sad,
This poem's not good, some work i should do,
So for now, i do bid you adieu.

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06:47 Tue 3 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Be gentle with me please, this my 1st ever attempt at a poem


Paula wants us all to write a poem
The words to put together, I don't know 'em
I would ask a friend to help write one so fine
But I know that the work wouldn't be mine

I'm not a born poet like PPPaula
Or whatever name you might call her
She makes it seem easy the words to rhyme
But she keeps me up well after my bedtime

So for now I leave the poems to you lot
And I'll go and play "Who's geeky or hot?"
I'll go on other forums or practice my aims
My favourites are Gen Chat & Fun and Games

Edited at 12:49 Tue 3/02/09 (GMT)
justsumgirl
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12:57 Tue 3 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Melz ~ WOOOOOOOOOOOO SI :D


g_k said:
Be gentle with me please, this my 1st ever attempt at a poem
Paula wants us all to write a poem
The words to put together, I don't know 'em
I would ask a friend to help write one so fine
But I know that the work wouldn't be mine

I'm not a born poet like PPPaula
Or whatever name you might call her
She makes it seem easy the words to rhyme
But she keeps me up well after my bedtime

So for now I leave the poems to you lot
And I'll go and play "Who's geeky or hot?"
I'll go on other forums or practice my aims
My favourites are Gen Chat & Fun and Games




OMG G, Its grrrrrrreat WOOOO SI You can defo post here again, luv that one
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15:34 Tue 3 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Hiya, i've not been here for a long time but i've put pen to paper so thought i'd share...


I thought my life had turned around
He swept my feet from off the ground
He said nice things to make me smile
But his words were hollow all the while
I thought our love was as good as the best

BUT

He broke my heart like all the rest!




Am off again now, hope ur all well *hugs* for Paula x
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15:44 Tue 3 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
</3
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15:55 Tue 3 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
orchy said:
Hiya, i've not been here for a long time but i've put pen to paper so thought i'd share...


I thought my life had turned around
He swept my feet from off the ground
He said nice things to make me smile
But his words were hollow all the while
I thought our love was as good as the best

BUT

He broke my heart like all the rest!




Am off again now, hope ur all well *hugs* for Paula x


Touching :( I hope you read this thread Lou, hope ur ok, log in to check mail *HUGS BK* x
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16:57 Tue 3 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Awww all lovely well done to u pair
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