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07:10 Mon 7 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
a thousand years has passed it seems
since i was haunted in my dreams
not of some dark and erie place
im haunted by your perfect face
no matter what i try to do
i cannot rid my thoughts of you
how can i make you leave me be
im haunted for eternity

and is it wrong for me to wish
that i could see the end of this
for you to go and not return
my life no longer your concern
tell me what it is i must do
to finally see the end of you
have i not suffered all i can
im now a shadow of a man

and still you try to take from me
the one thing i can truly be
for in this dark and twisted place
i see nothing but your face
for in the darkness you are there
to tourture me with your harsh glare
i have accepted i condone
to wander on this earth alone

and so i ask you on my knees
to go away and let me be
so give me time to rest in piece
and offer me a sound release
a of sleep, when your not there
to haunt my dreams, with your stare
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17:03 Mon 7 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Just a little something from me
Sometimes it's really hard to see
The heartache of those who choose to voice
Personal details of their choice
That sometimes breeds jealousy, mistrust
I just don't think that's very just.
It's here you come to have some fun
To play a game when the day's done.
It's not a place to cause grief
Just 'cause it'll give YOU some relief.
Don't shed light on personal issues
'Cause most people here won't hand you tissues
Some words of sympathy you'll get, I'm sure,
But posting it here is NOT the cure.
Seek out those with whom you're irate
For only words will close the debate.
Don't hide away if you don't want to been seen,
We see it often - It's becoming routine.
Facing your fears will erase all doubt
Hatred is something you can live without.
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19:05 Mon 7 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
People we know, People we see
Luckyman? & Weirdo?, My dear CG
You guys rock, But IM still Captain P

Then theres Melz N Bob, What a great team
Bob with his Purple Pants, They keep Mel Keen

Big_Poppa1 << I Love this guy
Has me in stitches, Almost makes me cry

We have Paula N Stella, What a fun couple
Correcting me on gen, It gets me in a muffle

Young man Tiplz, Newest tart to our forum
He's been after my body, Obv. Cos im "Yum Yum"

Talented "great player" Had some lil squobble's
But come to think of it, We've had more highs then falls

Cheeky chops what a Diamond! A true brave lady
I behave myself when shes round, Cos she'll whip me "Oh Baybee!"

Miss Stephilipa, A great friend of mine for life
Sends me "Heavenly links" But there not my type

Mr Guevara, The Tony & Guy Lover!
Fab writing poems, When he's away (We suffer)

Guests are the smartest, Cos they have no membership
They never deal with the addiction, Cos Most of us take the...Pee!
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19:58 Mon 7 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
A Certain Emotion

Does a certain emotion really exist?
Or is it a feeling that God chose to miss?
When he packed us full of sorrow and joy,
Did he create an emotion, between girl and boy?
I'm sure I have felt it, but maybe I'm wrong,
But when the bird's sung I knew every song.
The grass was much greener, the sky seemed more blue,
Was this a result of my emotions for you?
A feeling so curious, alien and strange,
It seems this emotion is too complex to explain.
Can it make you act rash? Are you head over heels?
Has the crazy feeling put the motion to wheels?
When do we know that this feeling is true?
Does it live in us all? Has it ever touched you?
How does one verify, that they felt Love's touch?
How do you know you love a person so much?
Is it based on trust,and the care for another?
What is the love between a man and his mother?
Could you explain love in just one thousand words?
About how it brings joy? And how it can hurt?

Continued...
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20:00 Mon 7 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I dont think its possible - its a mystical thing,
Can you really feel it - when your heart sings?
Is a love a journey, that grows over time?
Or does it just appear - like love at first sight?
Maybe one day, the word LOVE will be defined,
And we can all feel it until the end of our time.
But inside my heart, love is still just a seed,
Waiting for growth, and a particular need.
Then it may blossom, and be given away,
And so until then I shall yearn for the day.
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20:16 Mon 7 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Wow, awesome.
justsumgirl
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04:03 Tue 8 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Mr_G

Another poem from the one an only Ste
The man that on poems first inspired me
To think of a few words and make a start
They will surely rhyme if from my heart
A few years now Ste has posted here
The best poem poster by far thats clear
I for one look forward to reading his stuff
And of his stories there just arent enough
Guevara, his tales are somewhat reknown
For touching emotions one or more own
He seems to compose with ease and grace
Can make us feel relaxed in this here place
He once told me not to let this thread die
Read back on his posts you will know why
Cos im almost sure tho he's hardly here
He reminices about poems meant so dear
Please just for him can you raise a glass
Ste, your amazing and ur poems are class


~Paula~


(Great poems..the_one,Pit and Katie)

I done some on prev page too



Edited at 11:18 Tue 8/07/08 (BST)
justsumgirl
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04:05 Tue 8 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
RANDOM


Tears streamed down her cheeks
Been building up over the weeks
She had been waiting all along
She knew it would all go wrong
She could feel it in her heart
She just knew they were to part
She knew this time was a test
Time had come she couldnt rest
Up all night teary eyes blinking
She sat there done all her thinking
Waiting for the next day to come
Knowing for her it would be glum
She knew she had to face it though
She had to be brave and just let go
A day she wouldnt forget by far
That day she sold her beloved car!


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Some great poems on here ive read
Many have stuck in my heart or head
Some days when i am feeling blue
I'll just sit here and have a read through
Some are natural composed with ease
Some tougher with words they tease
More often than not they raise a smile
My favourite thread by a clear mile
We all have rhyme in some small way
Post a poem and make someones day


~Paula~
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04:10 Tue 8 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
ME!

Justsumgirl, is all i may be
Understanding, try to be to thee
Silly, sometimes this i know
Trusting, believe i am that also
Sensitive, tho you may not feel
Unhappy? thats not me for real
Mischevious,yes can be that too
Gentle, i can be that with you
Irrate, i admit i really get this
Rude manners i give them a miss
Loving, someone is my choice
Love or hate me raise your voice
I am not here to fight or offend
Get to know me i'll be your friend


~Paula~

justsumgirl
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06:19 Tue 8 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
MY IPOD!

Oh my dear ipod i love it so
Always listening on the go
Everywhere it goes with me
It makes me smile so easily
A multitude of songs it holds
Some recent some are old
Mariah, Leona, Beyonce, Celine
Sing for me with voices supreme
2Pac, Kanye, Snoop and Diddy
Make me dance till im dizzy!
Slow or fast songs, happy or sad
Any music really makes me glad
When i go jogging its on my side
Clipped on tightly as i take each stride
Earphones in and i'll sing along
On Shuffle it plays whatever song
Create a playlist add a few more
Makes me wanna hit the dancefloor
This wonderful invention affordable cost
Without it id be unduly lost
You see it helps me tone my bod
Yes, i truly Love my ipod


~Paula~
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07:26 Tue 8 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
wooooooooooo go Paula lol
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07:26 Wed 9 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Time

Time is but a blessed curse, for some it is a dream
for it can flow like raging river, or trickle like a stream
one things for sure, though time itself, no pity will it lend
from the biginning, through the mid, until your time here ends
as slow as fog, it hazes life, and at the best of times
it seems as though it will not end, the irony of time
and yet when joyful times come forth, it speeds as fast as light
as time sits back, and cackles, while the good times fade from sight

and how to battle time itself, what weapons can be used?
a way to manipulate time, can time be abused?
but no, time is eternal, and will stop for no-ones prayers
for those who wish their life away, time be no friend of theirs.
so make the best of what you have, for time takes it away
before you even blink your eyes, now starts a brand new day
so hold tight to your memories, and keep them close to feel
for truth be told your memories, one thing that time cant steal
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23:40 Thu 10 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Erins War

Alone i stand, on battled field, my sword grasped in my hand
as thoughts race through my clouded mind, i seek to understand
the muskets roar, the ring of steel, now echo's in my mind
I stare now at my fellow man, the lives they left behind
As tears are shed, and hopes are born, of future yet to come
we stand now here, victorious, the battle has been won
And Erins tears, like rivers flow, her sons lost to the dew
e'll not forget these hero's, fought and gave their lives to you

As years wear on, the feild, once red, with carnage, war and pain
now sit in peacful solitude, green as her eyes again.
yet to the north, the fight goes on, and here the people stand
once again, united, both the people and the land
The fienians battle, for their home, despite wounded heart and soul
For Erins Isle, they will fight on, to make her island whole
As brothers die, to save their land, their last thought Erins face
for Erin will remember them and mark their resting place.
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23:41 Thu 10 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Cont.

And now these hero's, who fought so our people might be free,
now rest in Erins loving arms, for all eternity

Now gather round, you children here, and listen to my tale,
for those brave men, whom died alone, within kilmainham jail.
and knowing full well what would come, at dawn, they gave a smile,
gave their men some encouragment, then marched outside to die
Now Erin holds them to her breast, comforting their soul,
as their children join the fight, and try to reach their goal.
And though it seems we're now at peace, but Erins noble men
who crave for freedom fir their land, will stand and fight again
And on they'll fight, until the day, they unite this land,
or leave this earth, forever more, guided by Erins hands.
So now young children, my tale is told, but listen here to me
forget it not, old Erins Isle, and her yearning to be free.
justsumgirl
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01:53 Fri 11 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Fab! I loved the Time one


EYES

Eyes they say are like the windows to our soul
Some say eyes tell the truth maybe not the whole
Eyes come in different shapes different colours too
Look into my eyes you'll know what they say to you
They may look at you teasingly a wonderful lil spark
They may look at you scarily casting the light dark
If they look at you happily, shining and so bright
You can safely say you have done something right
Some people have sexy eyes making a heart race
Some have decieving lying eyes a disgrace
Eyes like chocolate buttons a smooth and silky glare
Piercing blue icy tone are eyes that like to dare
Hazel,two in one knowing not wat colour to be

Edited at 07:03 Fri 11/07/08 (BST)
justsumgirl
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02:04 Fri 11 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Contd.

Grey they always seem to have an eerie look to me
Green eyes i think are great when teamed with dark hair
Gives a very sensual look tho i think you'll find its rare
Dry eyes glossy eyes closed shut or open wide
Eyes they are important because they are our guide
For those of us lucky enuff lets make our eyes smile
For as we grow we may lose sight of all that was worthwhile


~Paula~
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06:46 Mon 14 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Woo I was in Pete's poem!!

Thanks!
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04:28 Tue 15 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Well here i am
To do what i can,
Oh hang on let me get,
My toast and Jam
Bugga of Pete
Its all for me,
Wee feet where have you gone
You better get back
This is were you belong,
Stelly me fellow,
Bet your pleased to see me,
Waits for the Nannas,thats hid under your seat,
Come on stelly
I will count to three (lmao)
Now how can i forget,
You know who,
Yes the rockman himself,
Well hello tids
And *shouts Boooo*
Dont forget Tids,
When you want me to wuppp you at pool,
So give me a shout
Im sat on my stool








I know its a bit erm...but ive not done one for ages and Wee Feet told me i had to do one




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08:41 Thu 17 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Thats fab Jill, But i dont like Jam, So have the lot!
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14:35 Fri 18 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
sitting in my office
on a friday afternoon
not that long to go now?
i`ll be on my way home soon
get in the door, kick off my shoes
put kettle on and watch the news
dinners cooking, chores are done
now its time to have some fun!
turn pc on and wait and see
who`s around to talk to me?
is dave not here? the little sod,
with croissant pic and his "i am god"
he`s a good lad tho? love him to bits
even tho he gets on my t**s
ah ang is here? thank god for that
its always good to have a chat
her humour is as bad as mine
and often find we type the same line!
in members bar we will find ben
on the practice table again
does he not play anyone? is ranking too big?
omg? oh no? is he wearing a wig?
colins arrived his work complete
he settles down upon his seat
another victim i`m sure he`ll find
to beat in the tourny and damage their mind
i love this site its great its fun
only thing is i get a numb bum
funky is brill the best place to be
we are all one big happy family.
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