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19:03 Thu 7 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
LEGENDARY

wibble wobble wibble wobble

Jelly on a plate
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james_jagger said:
i love pool
it is so cool
its fun to play
laugh all day
i eat my dinner of my plate
while i play this game oh how its great
theres me and paula summer and potty as we play games of killer
but when theres gossip summers a spiller
but as im nice id like to say
your brilliant and you make my day


ill put this onto this page :P
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21:18 Thu 7 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I JUST LOST A WHOLE POEM!
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i dreamt of that girl
but now shes here
i cant let her go
because im near

justsumgirl
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21:32 Thu 7 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
SLEEP


I closed my eyes and tried to sleep
But a flicker of thought made me weep
I pushed it to the back of my mind
I need to stop visions of this kind
Eyes wide open staring into space
Hot tears are trickling down my face
My head it hurts and i feel so sick
I just need sleep and i need it quick
Sleep deprivation will make me mad
Especially as im feeling so bad
My eyes are puffy teary and red
I'm tossing and turning on my bed
Maybe i'll make a warm drink
Anything to not make me think
If that wont work i'll be a mess
Cos i'll get cranky i must confess
A dim light on and a soothing tune
May send me to slumberland soon
If all else fails as i try to sleep
I'll have to count them good old sheep!!!


~Paula~

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beautiful paula
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A drunk man in an Oldsmobile
They said had run the light
That caused a 6 car pile up
On 109 that night
When broken bodies lay about
And blood was everywhere
The sirens screamed out eulogies
For death was in the air
A mother trapped inside her car
Was heard above the noise
Her plaintive plea it split the air
"Oh God please spare my boys"
She fought to free her pinned hands
She struggled to get free
But mangles metal held her fast in grim captivity
Her twinsd were nowhere to be seen
She didnt hear them cry
She prayed that they had been thrown free
Oh God dont let them die
The firemen cut her loose
But when they searched the back
They found therein no little boys
But seat belts were intact
They thought the woman had gone mad and was travellin alone
But when they turned to question her
They found that she was gone
Policemen saw her runnin
And screamin above the noise
Pleaing to everyone
Please help me find my boys
Theyre 4 yrs old n wear blue shirts

Edited at 12:52 Fri 8/08/08 (BST)
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< Post removed by Paula for Karri to Continue >

Edited at 13:03 Fri 8/08/08 (BST)
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poem cont:
Their Jeans are blue to match
One cop spoke up "Theyre in my car"
And they dont have a scratch
They said their daddy put them there
And gave them each a cone
Then told them both to wait for Mom to come and take them home
Ive searched the area high and low
But I cant find their Dad
He must offled the scene I guess
And that is very bad
The mother hugged the twins and said
While wiping away a tear
He could not flee the scene you see
For hes been dead a year
The cop just looked confused and asked
How can that be true
The boys said "Mommy Daddy came
and left a kiss for you"
He told us not to worry
and that you would be alright
Then he put us in this car with a pretty flashin light
We wanted him to stay with us
Because we miss him so
But he just hugged us tight and said
That he had to go
He said some day wed understand
And told us not to fuss
And said to tell you Mommy hes watchin over us
The mother knew without a doubt
That what they said was true
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cont:
For she recalled their dads last words
"I`l be watching over you
The firemans notes could not explain the twisted mangled car
And how the 3 escaped without a single scar
But on the Cops report was scribed
In print so very fine
An Angel walked the beat tonight
On highway 109
justsumgirl
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08:05 Fri 8 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Id posted Eerie but good...Its sad too.

Did you do that yourself Karri, or is it copied?
Its a deep poem that
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08:14 Fri 8 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Ahh wow didnt realise u were all so talented u never know u may be spotted lol

Just remeber us if u do lmao
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10:23 Fri 8 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
i dedicate this 2 summer :) xx

A look from you is as blinding as the sun,
As stunning as your eyes I lose myself in.
A look from you is as pure as the clear blue sky,
When I'm with you.

Every minute I'm not around you,
I feel like I left something behind.
Every time I'm not looking at you,
I feel like I am blind.



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10:35 Fri 8 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Omg, thats great, so touching.

Again, I dunno what to say bar thank you.
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:) hehe just 4 you
justsumgirl
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10:43 Fri 8 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
MORE MORE! Great stuff JJ
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justsumgirl said:
MORE MORE! Great stuff JJ


Why Thank You Paula
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SOLOMON GRUNDY

Solomon Grundy,
Born on a Monday,
Christened on Tuesday,
Married on Wednesday,
Took ill on Thursday,
Worse on friday,
Died on Saturday,
Buried on Sunday.
This is the end of Solomon Grundy.



classic

Edited at 16:04 Fri 8/08/08 (BST)
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BEES

A swarm of bees in May
Is worth a load of hay;
A swarm of bees in June
Is worth a sliver spoon;
A swarm of bees in July
Is not worth a fly.


LOL
justsumgirl
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11:09 Fri 8 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
LOL

Can we please have some funny ones??

Anyone?
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