Well, lets hope they dont delete the old one, I got about 300 poems on there!!!


Anyways, just like before, stick your poems on here.

Cheers.

Here's a link to the first 'Write a poem' thread: http://www.funkypool.com/viewTopic.do?topicid=5779&page=1

Edited by forum moderator pool_life, at 14:24 Thu 2/08/07 (BST)

The last post ??

A Message to Admin, please don't lose that thread
Because some poems on there, may never be read
And that will be terrible, for the regulars that post
Because some of those words, mean a lot to most
Words of passion, and friendship, just for a start
Feelings and emotions that have come straight from the heart
Verses and Rhymes, people write, that just flow
So im begging you please, don't let this thread go
For two people I know, will appreciate this
Off Paula I know I will get a special kiss
But for the other, it wont be his last hurrah
The brilliant poet, the man called Guevara

~ Stell ~



Sorry mate didnt catch it !!!!


Edited at 18:34 Wed 1/08/07 (BST)

hehe top poem mate...

So here beggineth a brand new thread,
Were all used to original one instead.
As stella described, that thread meant a lot,
And there's so many poems that I have forgot.
For quite a long while, I posted in there,
On numerous topics, like beer and hair.
Also serious poems, that meant a lot to so few,
And if your reading this, it could of been you.
Well now there's new begginings, new poems galore,
I'm getting used to people asking for more.
In a quick flash the words arrive in my mind,
The line that I type down leaves others behind.
And I write and I write, until there's no more space left,
So many keys on the keyboard caressed.
I ask only one thing, that I hope will be true,
Only one favour that I ask of you.
Not to delete the old thread that lies here,
For so many poems lost could cause a slight tear.
I dont copy them down, they're straight off the head,
But I guess I'll have to write more here instead.

WOW you guys are really good at these, it would take me a month to think of a few lines that rhyme, and yet you have come up with these in no time. Brilliant

Stell ~ fab honey

Guevara ~ ya got that spot on bab


I swear ill be soooooooo if Nick deletes the old one!


TITLE: PAULA









(ya got toooo ste pmsl its a new thread)

Paula

A junkie on here, that I'm sure everyone knows,
Size 3 feet, with really small toes.
Long blonde hair, with a taste for jogging,
Finding her stella, and constantly snogging.
Very kind hearted - to say that she's scouse,
Creeping around the ship, like a pet mouse.
Ya know I'm just joking, we all love her so,
And we all started worrying when we thought she'd go.
Always around to make the upset smile,
We know that she's been on this site for a while.
Always upbeat and making such sound,
The forums can tell when Paula's around.
She's always there when you just want a chat,
Whether its a falling out with family, or some harsh words you spat.
The point being, that paula is great,
I feel privelidged to call this person a mate.
For so long now, we've spoke on this site,
Sometimes all day, but mostly all night.
So for about the 6th time paula, this poems for you,
Its just an appreciation of the many things you do.

Edited at 11:53 Thu 2/08/07 (BST)

Brilliant Ste, she's gonna love that one.

that was amzing ste great poem mate

Great poem ste

Get in!! I knew you would do one for me, and yano what? i love it like i always have loved them........come here........*BIG FAT HUGS* Thankyou Ste



TITLE: NEW THREADS

Can i have a poem pleaseeee...ome to read for when im next online


BTW i LOVE all those x

This one's just for Paula, My girl who I love
This Angel of mine, who's sent from above
This girl, who's so friendly, and ever so caring
This girl of mine, who's heart I'm now sharing

We discovered each other on this very site
When she introduced me to posting, on one lonely night
It didn't take us long, for each other to click
Laughing and joking, and taking the mick

Talking In Chat rooms, forums, and on msn
I knew for a fact, she was the girl for me then
Now over a year has gone, since we very first met
And not one day has passed that I'd NEVER forget

We've had Ups and down, and the odd little fight
But we've held it together, with all of our might
So that's my girl Paula, so friendly, so clever
I Love you my Baby, I will love you forever

~ Your Stell ~

Sorry its late bab xx


Edited at 13:42 Thu 2/08/07 (BST)

OMG! Ive only just seen this!
*Blushes*
Im stuck for words here.....lol.. thats a first

Thats lovely *smiles* Love you Stell x

LOU

A Poem for Lou, but I wont sit beside her
She knows im afraid, of her big hairy spider
She's not been here long, but she's a bit of a hit
But she best keep her hands off my pointy bit

Her posting here, has become quite a bit of a habit
We already know she has a nice shiny Wabbit
But yesterday, for her, was to hard to take
She ended up with a face that did ache

But welcome aboard, you've become quite star
All of the lads have admired you from afar
This poems for you, because I ain't seen one yet
You'll probably get, a few more, on that I will bet.

~Stell~


Edited at 15:33 Thu 2/08/07 (BST)

WOOOOO Thats Fab that Bab LMAO @ Hairy spider tho,


Oh Lou *shudders* PMSL

Oh wow i love it, pmls though that's hilarious. i do not have a hairy spider ffs lol


Thanks xx

lmfao stell you should write poems all the time mate !

LMAO He's gone great at them Ben!!

Ohh Try one for BENTY Stell LMAO..

Ben

I've done one or two, some will say plenty
Now I've got to do one, for the lazy git BENTY
He says he is working, all day and all night
But we all know better, Yeah bloody right !!

He logs in, at just around Seven thirty
And straight away, becomes a bit flirty
He jumps back and fore, between snooker and pool
Strutting his stuff, thinking he's Mr Cool

But as with all FJ's, he's become one of my mates
We have a good laugh, we share our loves and our hates
But Benjamin, do some work, for crying out loud
Get down to some grafting, and make your boss proud

~ Stell ~

Edited at 16:52 Thu 2/08/07 (BST)

Haha he'll love that Stell, your good at these!!