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13:42 Thu 2 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
He logs in, at just around Seven thirty
And straight away,becomes a bit flirty
He jumps back and fore, between snooker and pool Strutting his stuff,thinking he's Mr Cool




PMSL I love it bab
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14:05 Thu 2 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Guevara/Ste

To this master of poetry,I shall take off my hat
He is a general of words,I will give him that
So in his honour,I shall write this long poem
For those people on here,that really don't know him
He has been here a while,posting now and then
Within a blink of an eye,he will just slope off again
But when he returns,he is full of verse and rhyme
With his poems he pulls out,time after time
He's another person here, who's become a great mate
And when he is here,the feeling is great
His poems of winter, spring, autumn and summer
Are a pleasure to read,to most that log on here
His tales off holidays,University and his mates
And sometimes, the odd verse of some of his hates
Will stay stuck in my mind,forever and a day
So long as Admin, keep that old thread that way
So here's to you Guevara,just keep it up son
You know you are also special, to a certain someone
Your rhymes and poems will always be read
Even if they are written, long after I'm in bed.

~Stell~
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14:27 Thu 2 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *CLAPS* Amazing Bab Thats great that he will love it..



*Raises a glass to Guevara* We luvs yaaaaaaaaaaaa and all ur poems
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04:45 Fri 3 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
stellaman said:
Ben

I've done one or two, some will say plenty
Now I've got to do one, for the lazy git BENTY
He says he is working, all day and all night
But we all know better, Yeah bloody right !!

He logs in, at just around Seven thirty
And straight away, becomes a bit flirty
He jumps back and fore, between snooker and pool
Strutting his stuff, thinking he's Mr Cool

But as with all FJ's, he's become one of my mates
We have a good laugh, we share our loves and our hates
But Benjamin, do some work, for crying out loud
Get down to some grafting, and make your boss proud

~ Stell ~

Edited at 16:52 Thu 2/08/07 (BST)


lmfao stell fab mate thats put a big smile on my face and i cant stop laughing nice one mate !

but seriously mate your good at this poems

Edited at 09:46 Fri 3/08/07 (BST)
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05:41 Fri 3 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I LOVE THIS THREAD!!



Guevara your new title from previus page


NEW THREADS
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06:23 Fri 3 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
this thread is so cool.
shame i cant think of one....
Good one stella
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10:23 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Cool? COOL? Its the best Flappy..



Guevara's roaming round somewhere, i have a feeling theres gunna be one from him today
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12:43 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Hey everyone, stell thanks for the poem mate was brilliant, put a huuuge smile on my face - and makes me want to write more!
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12:48 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Cheers Ste...Youre welcome mate.

Sorry this is random ok .....

A Mate

Now then, if there is one thing that is truly great
It is someone, a person, you can call a true mate
Someone who is there, each day and each night
Ready to listen to, your troubles and plight
But to call them a mate, you too, also have to be there
To share, their troubles and their despair
It works both ways, in times of trouble
Because neither wants, to burst each others bubble
But as long as trust, is between the two of you
You will always know, that feeling will be true
That feeling of friendship, you have come to behold
The feeling that you don't have to be told
It's a feeling of love perhaps, I don't quite know
I just puff out my chest, and give a slight blow
But now it's the time, for me to give it a rest
Its over to you now mate, I've give it my best..

~Stell~

Edited at 17:49 Sat 4/08/07 (BST)
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Stell ~ Told ya honey didnt i eh? eh? cos i know him! hehe



Ste ~ What are ya waiting for then ????



OOPS Great Poem Stell *hugs*

Edited at 17:51 Sat 4/08/07 (BST)
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New Threads

A sudden changed has happened here in the past week,
When the threads on our forums had all reached their peak.
Allowing only 2000 posts, the threads are now new,
And it seems that there's nothing that us lot can do.
I was shocked and appauled when I went to post,
And realised the poem thread had turned to a ghost.
Quickly I decided to re-create the thread,
With all sorts of worry running inside my head.
At long last things are back to normal here,
The ship keeps on sailing as we still drink our beer.
The poem thread (2) is alive and so strong,
And it feels good that people here still read along.
The number of threads will still climb in their numbers,
And I promise that the poem threads, will never slumber.
So brand new and shiny, we still post a lot,
But I hope that there's one thread we haven't forgot.
The original poet's thread, on this very site,
I still try and read through it nght after night.
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12:53 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
WOO WOOOOOO Ste thats fab mate...


TITLE: Headaches
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12:59 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
wow!!! these are sooo amazing omg seriously like good job thinking all these up lol i could never do this.. wow you guys are fantasic at this! i love them!!
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PMSL @ MARI
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Headaches

I woke one morning, I was alone in my bed,
And I suddenly felt severe pain in my head.
The night before was all a bit of a blurr,
And the cloud in my head was anything but pure.
With my eyes half closed I reached out my arm,
Looking for the tablets that would stop this harm.
I reached for my water and gulped some it down,
This headache was a sharp one, it throbbed at a sound.
With the sun in my eyes, my head felt like a stone,
A dehydrated body, my brain was so headache-prone.
Down into the kitchen, and into the drawer,
This was where I'd seen the tablets before.
And there they sat, a gift from the god's,
Poor people with headache's the unlucky sods.
With a steady hand, I swallowed to down,
Hoping they would numb the pain inside my own crown.
Five minutes went, then another few passed,
And suddenly the headache had vanished at last.
From then on I sat with the telly on low,
Its one of the worst things ever, a headache you know.
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13:07 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
That spot on and exactly how i felt today!!

LOL..Thanks Ste.. Title?
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Moths

Moths are a slight pet hate of mine,
And I try to avoid them most of the time.
It started when I was a real young lad,
And the heat in the summer was pretty bad.
I had just laid down in bed, to watch TV,
When I heard wings flapping just above me.
So when I looked, there was this huge great beast,
Well a bug with wings, about an inch at least.
I rolled up a paper, and neared to the bug,
And squashed the huge beast with one lucky slug.
It fell and died, and I felt at piece,
But it wasn't long before there was another beast.
Three moths that night, that I had to splatter,
And from then I thought that Moths wouldn't matter.
But these days I hate how they flap in your face,
I saw one last night, and it set my hearts pace.
Addicted to the glow, I shut my window at night,
When all the horrible moths seem to take their flight.
One day maybe they wont bother me as such,
But for me, these days, I hate the things so much!
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14:49 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
LMAO mate......im the same with spiders.... i feel a poem coming on !!
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15:45 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Im the same with Fly's *shudders* lil perves they are!



Great stuff Guevara
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19:09 Sat 4 Aug 07 (BST)  [Link]  
i love this thread!

i'm lousy at writing poems lol but here's one i wrote for a friend.

Like a caring umbrella in the pouring rain
as the sun comes out, it's warmth i gain.
The trees that tower, you're just as protective
When I'm feelling down, I know I won't be neglected
You're all of this and so much more to me
What a wonderful friend, the greatest you can be.
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