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03:17 Mon 26 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Theres a guy on here called Stella
Hes really an ok fella
And it has been heard
That he has a bird
Whos feathers are green and yellow
But he claims that the birds not his
Which causes a bit of a tis
He sends it off on safari
All the way up to Karri
When rightly the poor bird is his
So she sent it flying back off to Wales
In rain and allsorts of gales
If you dont want the darn bird
Aint you ever heard
Of advertising it under "sales"
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05:07 Mon 26 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Caiti and Katie: Great stuff girls

Karri ~ LMAOOOO Good one hun
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05:19 Mon 26 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
A BIRDS TALE


Karri and Stell locked in a fight
Over some Parrot that has taken flight
Is it from Yorkshire? Is it from Wales?
Stella's Or Karri's? A Pecker with tales!

Flappin and Squawkin around funkys site
Posts on Graff wall and talks all.....night
We need to find this birds true owner
Before it ends up a sad little loner

Theres only one way we can find out
Lets tell this Parrot to shout out
Tell us what owner you want to keep
Give us a clue shout GOTHS or SHEEP!!



LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WOOOOOOOOOOO SI!

Bow Chikka Wow Wow!!

Stell or Karri wanna cracker???





Edited at 10:19 Mon 26/05/08 (BST)
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05:21 Mon 26 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Lmaoooooooooooooo Paula good one hun
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05:23 Mon 26 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
HAHAHAHA I pmsl doing that spesh the last bit:

GOTHS OR SHEEP!!

pmsl, oohhhh it better not shout PAULA!
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03:09 Tue 27 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
the reapers glee

As eire mist creeps slowley
casts a glimmer croos the light
the muffled footsteps introduce
a killer in the night
with eyes as black as feathered crows
and skin grey as the dew
the only meaning in his life
to strike terror anew

anticipation growing hot
he holds a silent breath
with blade held tight within his grasp
its time to dance with death
a hallowed scream now pierced the night
and stops as soon as starts
as quick as lightning dissapears
as stops the beating heart

with victim felled and malice grown
he takes the prowl once more
delighting in his latest act
there laying on the floor
he stalks a stranger passerbye
and hears his horrid shout
he quickly checks around him now
that no-one is about

he slowley stalks his next victim
he shallow baited breath
to bring another gift of life
into the hands of death
yet in the dark and eire knight
a laugh rings through in glee
and as the victim draws his sword
he ends the killers spree
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03:12 Tue 27 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
OH! Dont like death poems etc, but good one
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03:14 Tue 27 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
lol, not really a death poem, more of a moral poem, and the moral to the story is???.....
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03:15 Tue 27 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I know I Know, but yano what i mean
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03:24 Tue 27 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
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07:51 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Tears roll down my cheeks and hit the floor
as I turn and reach to close the door
You changed my life in so many ways
I can't believe you are going to walk away

All I ever wanted was for you to hold me tight
Sitting on a Beach under the bright moonlight
You were my everything, including my best friend
I thought you were the one, and I will to the end

I never once believed in soul mates
Not until that day we met by a stroke of fate
I've always been able 2 see tht sparkle in ur eyes
Like the twinkle of the stars in a midnight sky

I will love you until the end of time
I can take solace in the fact I had called u mine
Thinking back on our first kiss...
I just really don't see how things can end like this

I wish you wouldn't walk away
There is so much more I have to say...
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08:09 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Good one.
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08:16 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
some things were never ment to be
love cant exsist with you and me
i walk away to save you pain
and never too return again
dont think its easy for me to
just move on and forget you
i feel the pain the twisting knife
the hardest thing to do in life

but i believe what you cant see
that soon you'll forget about me
ones things for sure that will remain
ill never lose the crushing pain
when you love somthing set it free
for you'll always be loved by me
and as i turn towards the door
i see your tears upon the floor

and now this heart that once was yours
has shattered now upon the floor
my own tears falling to the ground
as i take one last look around
i try hard not to catch your eye
its time for me to say goodbye
and as i turn to walk away
theres one thing left for me to say
but now such words cannot be spoken
for my hearts already broken
while i think of you each day
the pain inside whont go away
yet now i sherish it, i do
its all that i have left of you

Edited at 13:24 Wed 28/05/08 (BST)
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08:35 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
wow wiz your poem goes incredibly well with mine... I like it! I feel like there is something I should say here but like yeah I have no idea what...awkward...lol
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08:43 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
it was supposed to go with yours, its a response poem.

and there is nothing you need to say
justsumgirl
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15:24 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
US

I guess when me and you fall out
People blame me and are in doubt
If only they knew what i know now
They'd know me better somehow
It really hurts me when people think
Ive charged in and caused the stink
When all ive done is try be nice
Yet its me who's paying the price
You see its not me whos lying here
Me? ive just been really sincere
Id never hurt you of this you know
Why did you have to hurt me so
Maybe a mistake made by you
And maybe pain, your feeling it too
Feeling sad with a tear in my eye
Keep asking myself why Oh WHY?
But what been said has been said
Things left whirring around my head
Can do one of two things for this
Sort it all out..or..give us a miss
I know some would love to see
The very end of you and of me
You told me theres jealous peeps
Of us? WHY? cos were for keeps?
For all that ive sed and the hurt i feel
Theres still SOMETHING here so real
Its here buried deep within my heart
Its SOMETHING that wont keep us apart

Contd'
justsumgirl
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15:25 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Cont'

For others reading i want to say loud
Your plan has backfired dont be proud
Cos i know he has made a mistake
But you havent won cos we will not break



~Paula~

3~8~1 ALWAYS
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16:45 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
"Cos i know he has made a mistake
But you havent won cos we will not break?..

Break for anything, we have been together too long
Because we have SOMETHING,that is so bloody strong
I made the mistake,and it will not happen again
Never again,will I put you through that pain
Im sorry,I ever even entered that mess
Im sorry,I am holding my hand up nevertheless
I Cant believe I was so taken in,by people so jealous
And now I can see,how some are so callous
But that doesnt excuse,why I just lied to you
When you have been,so honest and true
Just read your poem,and every word is true
And i am sorry,for what I have done to you
So now you all know,that we HAD have fallen out
BUT as she has said,with plenty of clout
Its far from over, we are still together
And as 3~8~1 states..forever and ever
Just one more thing?there are nine million bicycles in Beijing
But there can only be ONE SOMETHING!!

~ Stell ~ Your Stell xx

Con't..

Edited at 21:47 Wed 28/05/08 (BST)
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16:46 Wed 28 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
?We're high on the wire
With the world in our sight
And I'll never tire,
Of the love that you give me every night?

~Stell~
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08:20 Thu 29 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
darkened clouds and thundering rain
bring forth the greens of earth again
the flash of lightning, thunderous boom
the hope that you will return soon
for nigh, the hour is at hand
as darkness creeps across the land
a shadow of worry cast across my face
for hours gone, and still i wait
as darkness surrounds our abode
and still you have not returned home
as worry turns to fear and dread
for fear alive, you may be dead

the powers down, the phones are out
and still your wandering about
no way to contact you to see
if you'll be comming home to me
as tears stream freely down my face
i pray to God, with hope and grace
that he protect you, save from harm
and return you to my arms
and then a sound rings through the night
i wonder if thats you outside
now shall you worry me no more
or is that death outside my door

the lights come on and break the night
for time it takes to find my sight
and happiness returns with glee
for there you stand, back home, to me.
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