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17:20 Sat 24 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
Wiz ~ Im liking your poems!! Great stuff..




Why does it happen please do explain
Why is it fierce? and nasty this pain
Why does it drone, pound,ache and thud
Making your head feel as heavy as wood

Why does your mouth go oh so dry?
Why does the room spin as you lie
Why does it always make you feel sick
Making you leg it to the bathroom quick!

Why does it make you feel so so weak
Why does every moving muscle tweak
Why does every tiny noise hurt your head
Making you cover it with ya pillow in bed

Why do i need to drink water and Lots
Why does my stomach feel its in knots
Why does my body get sweats and chills
Making me reach for some remedy pills

We all know why, its too much booze
The night before ur head did you lose
Its why we feel so low we have shrunk
Next time i swear I WONT GET DRUNK!!



~Paula~
Gd night was it then paula
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17:41 Sat 24 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
HA! Yh Ty Jilly! Why aintcha done a Poem eh? WHY??




Just a quicky one here from me
Just so others still read and see
This thread it will still thrive
As Long as im here ill keep it alive!




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01:55 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Alone i stand, the seaborn breeze
feels cool against my face
a candles lonely shimmering glare
is all that lights this place
and memories swirl around me here
standing in the dark
the flame inside my heard burnt out
now waiting for the spark

this morning, like all the rest
upon the cliff i stand
and wait in wonder, hoping that
once more you'll grace this land
the breaking pain i feel inside
is all i have of you
as memories fade the sands of time
until they fade right through
And left with nothing still i wait
in candles dancing flame
until the day of your return
when time can start again

and is it wrong of me to dream
to hope amidst dispare?
that one day i will return home
to find you standing there
as rain sets in, the winds pick up
to face the brewing storm
the candles flame now splatters out
now lost last of my warmth
and care i dont for i stand strong
and face the battling winds
for true love will give me the strength
true love gives me my wings
justsumgirl
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06:50 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Are these your own Wiz (dnt mean that to sound offensive either lol)

They are brill
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07:09 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Roses are red
Violets are blue
love is a burden
so i hate you
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07:18 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
OH! Awww Sir A! I luv this thread and i luv reading all whats posted, but i get sad when its a sad poem or rhyme soooooooooo

Cheer up dear Sir Auron
Dont you be feeling blue
Love, it might be hurting
But you'll see it through
Just try to think of positves
And the times you shared
Remember just why it hurts you
Its because that you once cared


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07:27 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
they are mine jsg, give me a word
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07:28 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
very good A word? You mean leave a title?
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07:31 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
just a word, and ill write a poem based on it
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07:34 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
So a title then

I like leaving titles, Stell does them too..


Ok New Title iiiiiiiiiiiiiis:


Thinking
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07:49 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
lol, havent i been here already?

As lonely thoughts creep up on me
from deep within my mind
i fight away such memories
and yet its hard to find
a single place of solitude
that i can call my bed
for these thoughts swell like lightning storm
that flash inside my head

i cant excape your haunting glare
throughout the night and day
i think upont the fateful morn
you up and went away
without a word you left me here
alone without a care
and still i think of you each day
for stripped my soul is bare

with welling tears, that moist my eyes
i wonder as i pray
the thirst to know if your alive
to know if your okay
despite the pain you bought to me
a love burns deep inside
as tears fall freely from my face
these feelings, i wont hide

with beating heart, i think of you
my heart soars like a bird
as i sit and think on why
you left without a word
i sit and think of times we shared
of times we cried and laughed
and think on why you left me
why i lost my other half
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09:50 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
FAB FAB FAB!

New Title: SMILING
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10:55 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
lol, aight, one more,

A summer day, is not as warm
as your pure loving smile
for such a simple mark of joy
sets my heart racing all the while
no matter troubles rain on me
or pain kept near my heart
one smile from you, it sets me free
and sets the good apart

for what may seem to others like
a simple gesture shared
but nothing is more beautiful
nothing can be compared
a smile from you is all it takes
to brighten up the day
and grasp the shadows of my doubt
and cast them all away

they say that life is a hard fight
complete with love and pain
and still a single smile from you
can drive away the rain
and light my life to the extent
now brighter than the sun
and make the pain i feel inside
grow shallow, come undone
for nothing i can think of now
can lift me more to grace
then to see the flicker of a smile
drift accross your face

so keep a smile, upon your face
and brighten up the day
for your smiles open up the joy
and chase the pain away
justsumgirl
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12:17 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Another brill one Wiz
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14:01 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
This past week or so,has been one to forget
Its strange how you can feel,over the net
Feelings of love,fondness and sometimes hate
Feeling you may have upset,a very good mate
But this has happened before,and will happen again
But after a while,the love will outweigh the pain
If you have been through so much,love wont disappear
You just need to sit down and talk,and play things by ear
But this week has ended,on a most wonderous note
Laughing and joking,will always get my vote
Then its times like this,that I afford a small cry
Not too ashamed to say,I have a tear in my eye
Looking back on posts,and thinking to that first day
When I 1st logged in here,and started feeling this way
One girl made this happen,made me feel like this
You all know who she is,she is my special miss
Take her or leave her,but I think she is great
Not just as a friend,but as a very good mate
And one more thing to add, has a special kind of ring
Paula my love,youve still got that SOMETHING
xx
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14:13 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I Love it and I Love You x 3 ~ 8 ~ 1 x ALWAYS
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18:16 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Just thought i would pop in,
Oiii to do a poem,
Not flipping sing (lmao)
Im at home not feeling well,
I wish i didnt feel this way,
All i want is to get back to my old way,
Laughing ,Joking all day long,
What am asking is it wrong,
Am i strong enough,
To see this through,
I tell myself yes i am,
But deep inside i sit and cry,
And ask God why oh why,
Ive met some friends on this site,
Who have helped me with all there might,
And even said they will help me through,
So all i want to say to yous,
Is thank you will all my heart,
It means so much to me,
You will never see,
But i will try my best to see it through,
And all because of you know who
So what im really trying to say,
Is thanks alot in my own little way








I dont have to name them,,they know who they are

Thank you Jill
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18:23 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Thats fab Jill *HUGS* Chin up
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22:31 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I looked at you and felt nothing,
you smiled at me, nothing changed
your eyes didnt melt me and nor did your smile
I'll be the first to admit that that's strange...

It's so strange to think that it's over
That after after so long it's come down to this
But its a comfort to know you're not with me
And that my love can now call me his.

But after all of the harsh ways you hurt me,
and the way you burned me with those eyes
i'd like you to know i'll never hate you
and i'll always need you when you cry.
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23:54 Sun 25 May 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Wonderful, Caiti. You have a lot of talent.


It's been so long since I heard your voice
It's been so long since I made my choice
Too long it's been since I felt your kiss
Too long it's been since I felt that bliss
Barely recall how you whispered my name
Barely recall how you took away my shame
I can't remember the curve of your jaw
I can't remember your worst flaw
It's foggy, the look you had in your eyes
It's foggy, the way you saw through my lies
Can't seem to place the sound of you breathing
Can't seem to place that awesome feeling
Trying to recapture you holding my hand
Trying to recapture myself taking a stand
Longing to see your smiling face
Longing to again feel my heart race

I can't believe it's been so long
Without you, I just feel so wrong
Come back to me soon, if you please
Put my soul to rest, put my heart at ease.
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