GOOD?? That was great i was lmao @ that!

Karri is it one of ur own hun??


Pro ~ U do a poem!

And Bout time you done one isnt it Stell?

your having a laugh .... English no no no

it was my worse lesson when i was at the old school.

Edited at 20:41 Thu 22/05/08 (BST)

the pink bunny was a thirsty baby
the pink bunny saw a warm bottle of maybe
the pink bunny drank sweet liquid silk
too bad it was poisoned milk.


the pink bunny was in love
the pink bunny flew like a dove
the pink bunny was at a rave in a cave
it collapsed in to a rainbow grave

the pink bunny was growing old
the pink bunny had frosty green mold
the pink bunny was a sniffle sneezer
accidentally trapped inside a freezer

Hope you enjoy my pink bunny poems lol.

They say beauty is just skin deep
yet mesmorised my soul to keep
eyes locked tighter on your face
i drown in your most modest grace
i ask myself "could this be love"
an angels decent from above
now touched to earth once traveled far
you landed right upon my heart

with heart now racing lips are dry
my mind shut down now sure to die
one wish i have like none before
to be with you forevermore
alas such dreams remain in mind
i open up my eyes to find
that longing i hold dear to me
has blinded what i cannot see

for both of us hold dear our hearts
each mind to set the world apart
no matter what i feel for you
means nothing less you feel it to
and so i turn to leave this place
still haunted by your perfect face
an empty heart without a lover
for your hearts owned by another

Memories locked inside my mind
i try so hard and yet i find
to rid myself of memories
to this day drop me to my knees
yet hope servives, with love instore
to be with you, forevermore

I love that wiz, excellent, but I have always thought your work was.

Title Please......and mood (Funny, serious etc )

mmhmmm...

Alone at last, to weak to stand
with no-one there to hold my hand
at last im free, to be myself
to rest my heart now back to health
yet am i sad to see you go
for love once lost, its hard to know
the future told, the hopes and dreams
now gone forever, so it seems
to breath relieved, of troubled past
to stand in solitude at last
for all the broken heart and pain
its time to heal thyself again
and though the emptyness inside
often seeps through, tis hard to hide
like all forgotten salms and song
the only choice to soldier on
for what once was will never be
a life alone was ment for me
and so i face it now with zeal
forgiveness granted, no appeal
forget me now, for time is nigh
a heart once dead, but now revived
a life once cloudy, now is clear
for one now stands, devoid of fear
as loving memories i will keep
no more tears i have to weep
and no more anger, like before
for i stand alone, forevermore

i like that one the best

To our brave soldiers

The gun fire, shatters my sleep
the sounds of injured men now weep
the haunted moans of those in pain
the sounds of war ring out again
the terror in the eyes of friends
the screams of brothers never end
as dieing soldiers lay in waste
and pile the ground accross this space

and yet the generals sit in chat
with glasses full and bellies fat
discussing whats the next attack
when most of us arnt comming back
its easy for most to believe
that such a fight will not achive
the goal we fight for, hope at least
that somday we will live in peace

but as a soldier, proud and true
seem like an animal to you
because we kill our enemies
and concor lands accross the seas
but is it so hard to believe
that what he fight for to achive
despite shortcomming, what we do
is build a better life for you

instead be thankful, for its true
we gladly give our lives for you
to build a country safe and sound
as we lay, dieing, on the ground

by the way, the upper poems, am drunk, so thats my excuse, and im stickin to it

Woooooooooo go war

They are great Wiz

how do you do it lol i wish i had the brain of yours

Stell has been trying to get me to do a poem for quite sometime so wha la here it is


Emotions are running deep
Trying not to weep
Two years ago today
I was standing outside on a sunfilled day
Dressed all in white
Doing what only felt right
Marrying the man of my dreams
or so I thought to be
Soon more than a year had past
I knew it wasn't going to last
Everything had changed
It would just never be the same
Seems like it ended just as fast as it started
I was completely brokenhearted
My first anniversary alone
My heart feels like its been encased in stone


Couldn't write much more past that part its amazing how absolutely nothing works out anymore.

Edited at 18:00 Fri 23/05/08 (BST)

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Go Meeko.......*Claps*

Told ya you could do it didn't I

Great stuff hun x

Thats Great Meeko! More from you please

throughout life, we make mistakes
but despite how much it takes
we persist to happyness
and surely we deserve no less
no mistake is worth the pain
of making such mistakes again
a lesson learnt of pure desire
will burn inside like raging fire

finding joy in circumstance
will open up another chance
no matter how bad things can get
joy in life is always set
for even pain bought by a lover
find joy, its not happening to another
to one you hold dear to you
the pain is there, but joy shines through
to help carry burdens till the end
think of the joy and it will send
these burdens carried every day
will slowley send them all away

for if those loved mean more to you
them simple things you somtimes do
as hard as this life that your living
loved ones will always be forgiving
so find the joy that life does send
be thankful for your loving friends
who strive to help you,leave you never
for true friends stick by you forever

awwww I love it...

well done hun.

Wiz ~ Im liking your poems!! Great stuff..




Why does it happen please do explain
Why is it fierce? and nasty this pain
Why does it drone, pound,ache and thud
Making your head feel as heavy as wood

Why does your mouth go oh so dry?
Why does the room spin as you lie
Why does it always make you feel sick
Making you leg it to the bathroom quick!

Why does it make you feel so so weak
Why does every moving muscle tweak
Why does every tiny noise hurt your head
Making you cover it with ya pillow in bed

Why do i need to drink water and Lots
Why does my stomach feel its in knots
Why does my body get sweats and chills
Making me reach for some remedy pills

We all know why, its too much booze
The night before ur head did you lose
Its why we feel so low we have shrunk
Next time i swear I WONT GET DRUNK!!



~Paula~

why drink and do drugs? its easy to see
a neeeded escape from reality
a place to go where no problems can follow
where one is at peace, the mind can be hollow
to outrun ones problems, to make the escape
to delight in the rapture, not known it is fake
to float away in a dreamy daze
for what takes mere minutes, seems to you days

But the flip side to this is the damage you do,
not just to yourself but to those around you
not thinking of family, lovers and friends
such abuse of substance can lead to your end
why let others worry cause you want to run?
for when your no longer, the damage is done
and everyone left here will try to place blame
on everyone else, but belongs with your name.

a more selfish reason to bask in the bliss
a state of emotions as true loves first kiss
to get blinded by drink or to get you drugged up
then falling asleep and never waking up
which is why i stress, simple for me to see
that the best place to be is in reality.