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16:18 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Ste you wanna title?



Title: Leaving
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16:50 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Oh what a tangled web we weave,
And the weekend nears, when I do leave.
Back up to uni, to increase my story,
Of miraculous nights and new-found glory.
To live with no cash, and start up my band,
For me to write new songs with my poetic hand.
To seek another year, of festival fun,
To escape my home-town and more even my mum!

But oh how sad it will be to leave this site,
And without the internet I'll think every night;
About how your all doing, and what has been said,
Wondering the opinion of me inside your heads.
This is the thread that I'll miss the most,
But still here will linger, my heartbroken ghost.
The first chance I'll get, I will leave a note,
About how much I miss it, and how my heart dotes.
But it wont be long until my internets back,
And I'll be here writing, as happy as Jack.
So fear not my junkies, all will be well,
But the next few weeks without Funky, will surely be hell.

Really should of posted this saturday morning before I leave
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17:10 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
WOOOOOOOOO !!! FAB I thought ya was leaving LEAVING?

YAY ur not leaving for good then *HUGS*
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20:43 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
*Clears throat* Hope you like it.

Not too long ago, on a night like any other,
I promised you one of these, my love.
Now, normally I wouldn't even bother
But since your expectations have grown so much taller,
I figured I'd better find somewhere to start
Clueing you in about this thing called my "heart."

It's always beat twice for you, my dear,
Even more so when I noticed that first tear.
I've known since the beginning that we'd be great friends
And we've gone through great lengths to make those amends.
When push came to shove, and we both got hurt
We were lucky enough to find someone else alert.
He saw through our stubborn, petty frost
And made us believe when we thought all was lost.
To that friend, you know exactly of whom I speak,
Thanks to you, the future no longer looks so bleak.

But now, my love, now it is your turn.
You've always known right when to show me concern.
And also when to just keep your mouth shut
When into my heart did his hateful words cut.
You've seen me stumble, seen my head bow low,
My soul's taken a beating from this godforsaken foe.
And yet you are still here, still holding my hand
You're forcing me to arise from my place in the sand.
You say "Katie, please, it's better to take a stand
Than to remain a fallen soldier in a foreign land."
Well, my friend, I am listening to you now.
I've taken your advice and I've taken a vow:
Never again shall he cut me right to the quick,
Nor shall he make me feel so small, so sick.
I'm done with his lies, with his own take on "family"
It's time I grab back ahold of my sanity.
And yes, it's true, hearts are broken everyday,
But now, after all we've been through, it's safe to say
That thanks to you, I now have the strength to see
And I know that I've never had a friend truer than thee.


*Holds breath* :S
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20:51 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
katie..you know how i feel about this :), i absolutly love it!

mucho love my darlin
*hug!*
♥
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20:53 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Oh Em Geeeee
Katie that is soooooo outstanding! i like it a lot


lol...i sed the same xact thing as mari

Edited at 01:54 Thu 6/09/07 (BST)
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20:55 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
lol katie its really good i love it.. but i do have one problem


"And also when to just keep your mouth shut"

lies all lies
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21:01 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Thanks! *Exhales*
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06:01 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Katie, That was fanflippintastic! *HUGS*
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06:39 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Awwww thanks paula!!! *hugs* And your very welcome Mr Guevara!! Just wish i was a good a poet as You guys!! xxxx
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08:56 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Thank you, Paula
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09:39 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Im laid here upon my bed,
wishing you was here with Me not there instead.
In your arms is the only place i wanna be,
and not here alone feeling sad and lonely.
Wish you was here to wipe away my tear,
than now runs down my face because your not here.
Wish you could kiss me and tell me you love me, then id feel im the happyest any woman could ever be!

Poem for my Jay!
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10:20 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
YAY Sassy's first poem oh here

Its lovely Sass


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14:36 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Thank You paula!! Was a bit nervous been my first one and all that! ;-/ lol

If i had one wish right now,
it would to be within your arms.
To have your kisses upon my lips,
my worries would be all calmed.

Your the most amazing man i have ever met,
and i'll never let you go.
You mean more than the world to me,
but this you already know.

Your the first thing i think of when i wake,
and the last thing at night.
Even my dreams are filled with your Voice, your Touch, your Sight.

To me you are my everything,
and without you i would not be.
And you make me the happiest woman alive,
for simply loving me.
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14:46 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I luuuuuuuurve that one Sassy ^ ^ ^ Really
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17:21 Thu 6 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Dont let it go, dont let it die,
Dont tell me you have to say goodbye.
Dont close your eyes releasing tears,
Dont recall the past and our loving years.
Dont sell your soul and leave me on my own,
Dont describe how one time our love had grown.
Dont wave your hand and drive away,
Dont tell me you leave in less than a day.
Dont break a smile and blow a tearful kiss,
Dont take me away from my eternal bliss.

Do stay with me, and keep me sane,
Do scrap up the ticket and leave the plane.
Do open the door, and stay right here,
Do talk about the future and our coming years.
Do lay with me, all snug in bed,
Do play with the hair that covers my head.
Do let me hold you til the night comes in,
Do feel my soft touch upon your skin.
Do laugh and smile as I tell a joke,
Do feel joyful that your with your bloke.

Most of all please stay with me forever,
Our love is a journey, such a great endeavour.

Edited at 22:22 Thu 6/09/07 (BST)
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mr_guevara said:
Dont let it go, dont let it die,
Dont tell me you have to say goodbye.
Dont close your eyes releasing tears,
Dont recall the past and our loving years.
Dont sell your soul and leave me on my own,
Dont describe how one time our love had grown.
Dont wave your hand and drive away,
Dont tell me you leave in less than a day.
Dont break a smile and blow a tearful kiss,
Dont take me away from my eternal bliss.

Do stay with me, and keep me sane,
Do scrap up the ticket and leave the plane.
Do open the door and stay right here
Do talk about the future and our coming years
Do lay with me all snug in bed,
Do play with the hair that covers my head
Do let me hold you til the night comes in
Do feel my soft touch upon your skin
Do laugh and smile as I tell a joke
Do feel joyful that your with your bloke

Most of all please stay with me forever
Our love is a journey such a great endeavour


BRILLIANT Ste I Love it *HUGS* (gonna miss ya on here)
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05:14 Fri 7 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
justpaula said:
YAY Sassy's first poem oh here

Its lovely Sass


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Thank you Very much paula!! xxx


Your love has set me free
from the hurt of years gone by.
The hurt that others started
with their selfishness and lies.
Your love is like the key
that opened the dungeon door
in which my soul could not survive
for even one day more.
Your love is like the truth
that i have never known
for no one has spoke it..
but you, and you alone.
Your love is like the answer,
that for years i couldn't find,
for no one has ever seen it...
they have been too blind.
So for you, the hero of my heart,
i give the only gift i have to give,
all the love that i possess
as long as we both shall live.
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06:15 Fri 7 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I love you my darling, as you well know
We met here on funky so long ago
I wish I could hold you every day
But I cant because your so far away

There are so many things that I love about you
Ive not got much time, so ill only mention a few
Your amazing and beautiful, caring and kind
When I jumped on you in the pub, you didn't seem to mind

There are so many things that I could list
Do you remember? When we first kissed?
Stood in a car park just off the m1
You lit up my life just like the sun

Edited at 11:18 Fri 7/09/07 (BST)

Edited at 11:19 Fri 7/09/07 (BST)
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06:16 Fri 7 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
We walked through the town and I felt so proud
My head held high as we walked through the crowd
I just wanted to shout so that everyone could see
This beautiful woman that was walking with me

I treasure the moments, when we talk
And memories of the park, when we went for a walk
The feeling of your lips pressed against mine
A sweeter taste than any wine

Through times that are dark, you keep me strong
A love like ours just cannot be wrong
I love you so much my Yorkshire lass
My angel, my soulmate, my best friend, my Sass.

Love you baby xxxxx
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