funkypool is the place to be
its very entertaining believe u me
sass is quiet gentle an carin
while bigman_bk does all the scarin
b3nny always has a joke to tell
and juicy knows them very well

we have a laugh an chat away
theres always 1 of us with somethin 2 say
bobert loves juicy with all his heart
but juicy wants spenny the ole tart
some mods r good an sum r not
u no who u r dont u, u lot

anyway i just wanted u let u all no
its usually fun on here so let urself go
u get cheered up when ur feeling down
its such a good way to banish a frown
well its time for me to go bk to chat
and thank u very much for readin all that x









Edited at 14:57 Mon 10/09/07 (BST)

Yaaaaay darlin!!!! that was Greeaat hun!!
you know summat? that last verse was spot on!! do sum more!! xxxx

omg rob that was sooooo good shame you laughed when you proposed aw hope you was on one knee lol x x thanks bobert

im still down on one knee....i cant get back up lol....so say yes and help me up

1st time ive ever seen u here but that was fab WOO HOOOO More More

Yeah great apart fomr the mods bit......






Keep em' coming!

'Bout time YOU done another one isnt it Sqk?

omfg lmao ive only just noticed this one darlin lol , good one hmmmmmm i think lol

x x

Edited at 21:30 Mon 10/09/07 (BST)

How far would it take a person to do the most immoral act?
When it's not even a murder or the latest suicide pact.
How far could they conceal their feelings before they disappear?
And do the unthinkable which everyone else can only fear.
How much pain could they inflict before they are like the angels up above?
And leave everyone else and the people they once loved.
Can only psychiatrists guess what's in their minds?
But to them it's set in stone and they have already drawn the line.
How many years would it take for them to be a distant memory?
The faded ones who we might have lost and left us all weepy.
Why could they do such a thing to us and themselves?
And all they could leave was a letter on a load of empty shelves.
How much would you miss them when they aren't around?
And all that they kept thinking was that they were weighing you down.
So why have they chosen to leave you in this way?
It's because they were so ashamed that they couldn't be here to stay.

Edited at 22:40 Mon 10/09/07 (BST)

P.S I would just like some feedback on what you think the poem is about then I will tell you XD.

Hmm that's a very interesting poem, I think it's about how someone can leave an impression or a marking behind and how people don't know the value until they're actually gone?...lol idk

I guess I'll point out the obvious and say it's about suicide.

I like Angie's answer better though.

I said some wrong things
I made a mistake
and now you act as if
our friendship was always a fake

You like it don't you
when I'm sitting here in regret
how you don't wanna accept
my apology and are not willing to forgive and forget

Because this is your chance
to get rid of me
as you always wanted
this is how you want it to be

I'm not suprised
in the teeniest bit
maybe you want me back
but you just won't admit

but i truely doubt it
i'm quite sure
you picked a good time
its what you were always looking for

i sat here an read all the words from the heart
i wondered to myself , well how do i start
some of the poems are funny and mad
but some of them are really quite sad
to say what ur feeling and put it ink
lets others see what u really do think

let out emotions and tell someone u love
that you and them really fit like a glove
to tell your friend you miss them like mad
and without them in ur life u wudnt be glad
the words we write down for others to see
can make peoples day and fill them with glee

i'm not a poet i write what what comes out
not to everyones taste and brilliant i doubt
but if words i write can lift someones spirits
the worlds a better place with my poetry in it
to finish this verse i would just like to say
put ur words down on paper and make someones day!

XxX

after reading this poem my thoughts were that someone felt empty and thought they werent leaving much of an impression behind. they care what their loved ones wud think but had made up there mind.

To meet up is a risk and you can never know,
If it will end in a high or end in a low
To talk and prepare before taking that chance,
Coz if not u might miss out on the biggest romance
The doubts, the despair the refusal to dream,
Just in case they dont turn out as good as they seem
The angst and the pain is replaced by a smile,
When the person turns out to be so worthwhile
Days turn to weeks and the weeks pass as well,
Where can it lead can anyone tell
My fairytale woman comes clearly into view
I knew she existed and she knew it too
The future is there for us we just have to grab
And to make us work will take our very best stab
But working together to make it come true
I feel chances like this are so distant and few!
So destiny chose us and threw us together
And by the way Lou how is ure weather!!!!

From when I first met you
Yes I knew from the start
A woman so beautiful
Had stolen my heart
Your kind caring ways
Are there for all to see
I love you so much
But your not here with me
Your gorgeous green eyes
Your long dark brown hair
A beauty so special
That to find it is rare
There is a great distance
Between me and you
Ive counted the miles
Its more than a few
I drove up to see you
And then back home same day
It broke my heart
As you drove away
I waited for an hour
Hoping to see you again
You didn't come back
And it started to rain
A lonely drive home
Is what I had that day
Im hoping that next time
With me you will stay
I wish I was with you
Every day and all night
To hold and to kiss you
And make sure your alright
Your my angel, my soulmate
I tell you this everyday
And now ill sign this poem off
All my love Sass, your Jay. xxx

Edited at 11:12 Tue 11/09/07 (BST)

woooooo nice poem hun!

Do I remember when we first kissed? How could I forgot one of the many moments I miss!
A sweeter taste than any wine? As you moved your hands to my hips, it sent shivers down my spine!
There are many moments that I do miss, and the one that?s defiantly at the top of the list is Our first kiss.

I treasure all of the moments of our times spent together,
All the things that we?ve done will remain within my heart forever.
All the good times and the funny times make me smile,
like when we we?re in the park you wanted me to lay on the grass beside ya,
I thought your havin a laugh, what if theres a Great big hairy spider!
And the sad times are when you have to leave me,
It breaks my heart... Oh baby believe me.

Your are the most amazing man I have ever met,
And if I could wish for a perfect man,
It would defiantly be You?. You BET!
With gorgeous blue eyes,
And a smile that warms up my heart,
So tender, caring and loving,
Yet we?re miles n miles apart.

Im madly in love with you and you totally have my heart,
but you can keep it forever as i know we will never part.
I love you Sooo much my cockney Jay,
and my love for you grows each day!

Love you baby!!! xxxx Your Sass xxxx