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09:23 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Great poem hun!! loved it!! xxxx
darlin_c said:
i sat here an read all the words from the heart
i wondered to myself , well how do i start
some of the poems are funny and mad
but some of them are really quite sad
to say what ur feeling and put it ink
lets others see what u really do think
let out emotions and tell someone u love
that you and them really fit like a glove
to tell your friend you miss them like mad
and without them in ur life u wudnt be glad
the words we write down for others to see
can make peoples day and fill them with glee
i'm not a poet i write what what comes out
not to everyones taste and brilliant i doubt
but if words i write can lift someones spirits
the worlds a better place with my poetry in it
to finish this verse i would just like to say
put ur words down on paper and make someones day!
XxX
i wondered to myself , well how do i start
some of the poems are funny and mad
but some of them are really quite sad
to say what ur feeling and put it ink
lets others see what u really do think
let out emotions and tell someone u love
that you and them really fit like a glove
to tell your friend you miss them like mad
and without them in ur life u wudnt be glad
the words we write down for others to see
can make peoples day and fill them with glee
i'm not a poet i write what what comes out
not to everyones taste and brilliant i doubt
but if words i write can lift someones spirits
the worlds a better place with my poetry in it
to finish this verse i would just like to say
put ur words down on paper and make someones day!
XxX
Great poem hun!! loved it!! xxxx
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09:29 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
dont ask what all the question marks was in beween the word on my poem! you know me... finger slipped!!! lol
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09:33 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Oh f'ing el sassy, i'm pssing myself laughing at you!!
"You're aving a laugh ent ya!?" I'm loving the great hairy spider hehe
Edited at 14:35 Tue 11/09/07 (BST)
"You're aving a laugh ent ya!?" I'm loving the great hairy spider hehe
Edited at 14:35 Tue 11/09/07 (BST)
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09:36 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Lou u getting hours of enjoyment outta those hairy legs again! What will our Stella say ????
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11:06 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Oh by the way that poem was about 2 people who eloped and left everyone they knew behind.
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11:12 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
*Shocked*........i will not have all this talk about fingers slipping, Sassy, especially when there are great big Hairy Spiders around !!!
PHFLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
war_criminal said:
Lou u getting hours of enjoyment outta those hairy legs again! What will our Stella say ????
*Shocked*........i will not have all this talk about fingers slipping, Sassy, especially when there are great big Hairy Spiders around !!!
PHFLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
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11:16 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Lol! ermmm.. have i missed summat here?? LoL
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11:17 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Ask War Sass hun, he'll tell ya all about it over a burger
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11:20 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Lost in his eyes
A Sound from a dream
The wind blowing fiercely
Lighting fills the skies
There he stood
with the mist from the rain
surrounding him
I could barely see him
His eyes sparkled in the
dark of my dream...
Watching every glided move
that I made..
I was hypnotized
I was paralyzed
I could hardly speak
I never realized
I was lost in his eyes...
He smiled as
He took me by the hand
He had me
Completely Sedated
I have to admit
I was completely powerless
I was hypnotized
I was paralyzed
I could hardly speak
I never realized
I was lost in his eyes...
A Sound from a dream
The wind blowing fiercely
Lighting fills the skies
There he stood
with the mist from the rain
surrounding him
I could barely see him
His eyes sparkled in the
dark of my dream...
Watching every glided move
that I made..
I was hypnotized
I was paralyzed
I could hardly speak
I never realized
I was lost in his eyes...
He smiled as
He took me by the hand
He had me
Completely Sedated
I have to admit
I was completely powerless
I was hypnotized
I was paralyzed
I could hardly speak
I never realized
I was lost in his eyes...
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11:25 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Soooo.. war! whats all this about then?? sum one have a fascination for spiders or summat?? LoL
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Ask War Sass hun, he'll tell ya all about it over a burger
Soooo.. war! whats all this about then?? sum one have a fascination for spiders or summat?? LoL
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11:33 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
I'm sworn to secrecy by the order of the mighty Queen Arachnid herself!
And i can tell you her fangs are deadly!!!
Edited at 16:38 Tue 11/09/07 (BST)
And i can tell you her fangs are deadly!!!
Edited at 16:38 Tue 11/09/07 (BST)
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11:35 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Oh just in case you edit !!
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I'm sworn to secrecy by the order of the mighty Queen Arachnid herself!
And i can tell you her fands are deadly!!!
And i can tell you her fands are deadly!!!
Oh just in case you edit !!
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11:40 Tue 11 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
I did thankfully edit..... stuff your quote it's lies all lies!!! and her fands are deadly too
OED: fands - abbreviation for F'in Hands lol
OED: fands - abbreviation for F'in Hands lol
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10:59 Wed 12 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Oh how I want to spend my time with you
and all my dreams to share
To walk on the beach in the summer sun
and paddle without a single care.
Hand in hand, stroll on a cliff top shore
watching the waves break
with their ceaseless roar.
Picnic in the shade of an old weathered tree
the two of us together
lost in a world of our own... just you and me!
Dine under the light of the golden moon
listening to the sounds
as the night plays its own special tune.
Going to bed exploring each others charms
then drifting off to sleep content
snuggled up in each others arms!!!
And Thanks justjsg!! XxxxX
and all my dreams to share
To walk on the beach in the summer sun
and paddle without a single care.
Hand in hand, stroll on a cliff top shore
watching the waves break
with their ceaseless roar.
Picnic in the shade of an old weathered tree
the two of us together
lost in a world of our own... just you and me!
Dine under the light of the golden moon
listening to the sounds
as the night plays its own special tune.
Going to bed exploring each others charms
then drifting off to sleep content
snuggled up in each others arms!!!
And Thanks justjsg!! XxxxX
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11:54 Wed 12 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
Its nearly time to say goodbye
for fourteen days or so
Even after loads of wine
I just dont want to go
Some may say that u'll be fine
I know I wont u know
I'll miss someone far too much
And it just wont be much fun
Her tender smile her gentle touch
What will I do there hun?
I know that some might go instead
I would let them please believe me
Cause I am filled so full of dread
And this feeling just wont leave me
I'll call and txt but it wont be the same
The days will pass so slow
Its purgatory by any other name
I really dont want to go!!!
I look forward to when the month is done
And we'll be back together
It'll feel like the lottery's won
We can stay like that forever!
Edited at 16:55 Wed 12/09/07 (BST)
for fourteen days or so
Even after loads of wine
I just dont want to go
Some may say that u'll be fine
I know I wont u know
I'll miss someone far too much
And it just wont be much fun
Her tender smile her gentle touch
What will I do there hun?
I know that some might go instead
I would let them please believe me
Cause I am filled so full of dread
And this feeling just wont leave me
I'll call and txt but it wont be the same
The days will pass so slow
Its purgatory by any other name
I really dont want to go!!!
I look forward to when the month is done
And we'll be back together
It'll feel like the lottery's won
We can stay like that forever!
Edited at 16:55 Wed 12/09/07 (BST)
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16:23 Wed 12 Sep 07 (BST) [Link]
its my birthday woo
one year older and wiser woo
we all love our birthdays too
and presents and cards and suprises woo
happy birthday to all of you
all thats left is for father christmas woo
then thats the year 2007 and over :(
one year older and wiser woo
we all love our birthdays too
and presents and cards and suprises woo
happy birthday to all of you
all thats left is for father christmas woo
then thats the year 2007 and over :(
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