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16:36 Sat 1 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
If I was there wud of chanted ur name
As Today was the day for your 1st game
After a year away because of ur knee
But the training paid off back to Rugby

You went on that field and gave it ur all
Your team they did win not once did ya fall
Bet you and ur mates all let out a scream
After you lot won it twenty four to thirteen

Im glad that you won bab but i have one prob
And ive just got say, yano me and my gob
I here that his name Was ROGER THE REF
Same name as my Wabbit that Ref's just a Meff!



HAHA WOOOOOOOOOOO!









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16:55 Sat 1 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
LMAOOOOOOOOOO goooooooo Paula pmfslllll
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15:36 Sun 2 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
HA Ty



Poems Poems Poems !! Come on Ppl dnt stop now!
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17:03 Sun 2 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Are those your eyes?
Or oceans of blue?
which I seem to get lost in
everytime I look thru

Is that your smile?
Or the sun's pure delight?
that brings warmth and happiness
making my days so bright

Are those your arms?
Or another shelter for me?
which keep me safe and tight
as if under lock and key

Is that really you?
Or a dream come true?
cuz you changed my life for good
out of the blue

Is this some magic?
Or can you not see?
how hard it is to manage
without you here with me
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17:07 Sun 2 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
OMG!! i loveee it! lol im gonna hire you as my personal poet lol..omg your amazing ang...

hope you dont me borrowing this one either lol

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17:10 Sun 2 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
personal poet lmao
ty n nope i dont mind lol

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19:42 Sun 2 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I rest my eyes, the pillow softens my head,
As I lay my little self down onto my bed.
My eyes feel heavy and the tv drones,
And its at this time I feel most alone.
The curtain and the blind both keep out the light,
And in my comfy bed I'm all out of sight.
I slip into the coma of a good nights rest,
This is where my imagination works at its best.
Suddenly dreams play out in front of my eyes,
Dreaming of lollipop women and pale green skies.
Many dreams passing, like deja vu,
Maybe one day I'll even dream about you.
I'm sure that my eyes twitch like never before,
And a recurring dream happens with the same door.
I push my hand through it, and enter a place,
Where my hair turns golden and I dont have a face.
All I feel is lightness, and coldness on my hands,
In the background playing are numerous bands.
Then my hands feel warm, my fingers clasp another,
It is a land where no-ones been, and Im first to discover...
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19:46 Sun 2 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
...

I walk alone with no eyes to see, my heart beats through my chest,
The I take a seat underneath a tree, and gather some more rest.
And as I walk though a field of barley,my face begins to appear,
I reach a very enchanting castle, and I feel a presence near.
Suddenly I look up and guess who's there?
Its beautiful Repunsel letting down her hair.
But I dont think I'll climb it, I'll take the lift,
Because for repunsel I have a gift.
This gift isn't formal, you cant hold it up above,
This invisible present is a feeling called love.
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02:22 Mon 3 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
You pull your hand away
I can feel my heart dying
I tell you it's ok
But we both know I am lying
Tears running down your cheeks
I can't stand to see you crying
You tell me it won't work
But we still keep on trying
We want to be together
But life keeps on denying
I just pull you close
It feels like time is flying

You push me away
I never imagined it would get so painful
I never should have left you
I can't believe it, but I am such a fool
My chest is hurting, the heart is burning
I am sorry I have been so cruel
There have been plenty gems
But you are my precious jewel
I don't see why we can't love each other
Who made up such a rule?
I know I'll love you no matter what
I am just hoping that you too will

Edited at 07:23 Mon 3/09/07 (BST)
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05:18 Tue 4 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (SI x 3!!! Squeezy, Stew N Stell! pmsl)


*Claps*

I Luuuuuurve 'em !!!




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05:52 Tue 4 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
A word, a drink , a fleeting glance
How did we meet was it by chance?
Or was it caused by some strange fate
It could have been over after our first date!
But no! it grows stronger by the day
Where can we go to, who can say?
To open up my heart so wide
I fight to keep you by my side
No matter who has tried to interfere
We've carried on to get to here
Over hurdles in the future we might fall
But we can make it thru if we stand tall
Don't let the doubters wreck this chance
In unity we can make a stance
We can stand together upon that sand
And join together in the promised land! xxx
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06:00 Tue 4 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
war_criminal said:
A word, a drink , a fleeting glance
How did we meet was it by chance?
Or was it caused by some strange fate
It could have been over after our first date!
But no! it grows stronger by the day
Where can we go to, who can say?
To open up my heart so wide
I fight to keep you by my side
No matter who has tried to interfere
We've carried on to get to here
Over hurdles in the future we might fall
But we can make it thru if we stand tall
Don't let the doubters wreck this chance
In unity we can make a stance
We can stand together upon that sand
And join together in the promised land! xxx


FANFLIPPINTASTIC WAR!
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07:45 Tue 4 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Awwww nice poem hun *mwah*
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07:46 Tue 4 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
All for u gorgeous
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08:20 Tue 4 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Were underneath a tree, and were happy as can be,
The green park before us is the greatest thing to see.
Children running wild, chasing ladybirds and such,
The gale force winds here yesterday, were proven to be too much.
But today the sun is shining, and we sit here on the rug,
Cradling you inside my arms, makes me feel so snug.
I stroke your hair as you close your eyes, and you hold my hand in yours,
We laugh and chat for hours on end, as the champagne pours.
Twigs fall down from the trees, we collect them for a fire,
To stay with you here all my life, is my one true desire.
I take the strawberry's from the pack, and dip them in the cream,
Were so happy in each other's presence, that this is like a dream.
The sun begins to set, and we pack up all the stuff,
The cold winds start to set in now, and we've both had enough.
What a lovely picnic, with the wife and I,
And as I dream of this future life, I let out a hopeful sigh.
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00:21 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
brise said:
You pull your hand away
I can feel my heart dying
I tell you it's ok
But we both know I am lying
Tears running down your cheeks
I can't stand to see you crying
You tell me it won't work
But we still keep on trying
We want to be together
But life keeps on denying
I just pull you close
It feels like time is flying

You push me away
I never imagined it would get so painful
I never should have left you
I can't believe it, but I am such a fool
My chest is hurting, the heart is burning
I am sorry I have been so cruel
There have been plenty gems
But you are my precious jewel
I don't see why we can't love each other
Who made up such a rule?
I know I'll love you no matter what
I am just hoping that you too will

Edited at 07:23 Mon 3/09/07 (BST)


wow nice poem, i like it
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04:09 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
mr_guevara said:
Were underneath a tree, and were happy as can be,
The green park before us is the greatest thing to see.
Children running wild, chasing ladybirds and such,
The gale force winds here yesterday, were proven to be too much.
But today the sun is shining, and we sit here on the rug,
Cradling you inside my arms, makes me feel so snug.
I stroke your hair as you close your eyes, and you hold my hand in yours
We laugh and chat for hours on end as the champagne pours
Twigs fall down from the trees, we collect them for a fire
To stay with you here all my life is my one true desire
I take the strawberry's from the pack and dip them in the cream
Were so happy in each other's presence, that this is like a dream.
The sun begins to set and we pack up all the stuff
The cold winds start to set in now and we've both had enough
What a lovely picnic with the wife and I
And as I dream of this future life I let out a hopeful sigh


*Hugs* Luv that one Ste
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14:52 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
hiya guys and Women of course!! Just wanted to give a Biiig thanks to justjsg.... stellaman...
angie....brise...war criminal and mr guevara for
keeping me sane whilst i had deleted my account and could not get back on as quickly as i would have liked to due to funky email problems! and also while i was able to post again due having to paly ova 100 games! Grrrr lol Your All great poets and ive enjoyed reading everyOne!!
ive got one question tho!!.... Can I join the funky poets society???? xxxxx
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15:35 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
_sassy_ said:
hiya guys and Women of course!! Just wanted to give a Biiig thanks to justjsg.... stellaman...
angie....brise...war criminal and mr guevara for
keeping me sane whilst i had deleted my account and could not get back on as quickly as i would have liked to due to funky email problems! and also while i was able to post again due having to paly ova 100 games! Grrrr lol Your All great poets and ive enjoyed reading everyOne!!
ive got one question tho!!.... Can I join the funky poets society???? xxxxx


I dont know you sassy, but Thanks for that post it was nice of you..and yano what id luv you to join this thread..i luv reading all these too


~Paula~
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15:53 Wed 5 Sep 07 (BST)  [Link]  
cheers sassy - u sassy thing!
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