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02:11 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Aww Annie my friend that's so sweet and thoughtful
but today has really been awful!
No good complaining it doest help at all
it just nice to know ive you and all.
Thanks for the birthday wishes it means more than you all know...
love ya's all.gotta go
xxx
but today has really been awful!
No good complaining it doest help at all
it just nice to know ive you and all.
Thanks for the birthday wishes it means more than you all know...
love ya's all.gotta go
xxx
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06:43 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
I'm Free
Don't grieve for me, for now I'm free
I'm following the path God laid for me
I took his hand when I heard his call
I turned my back and left it all.
I could not stay another day
To laugh, to love, to work, or play
Tasks left undone must stay that way
I've found that Peace at the close of day.
If my parting has left a void
Then fill it with remembered joy
A friendship shared, a laugh, a kiss
Ah, yes these things I too will miss.
Be not burdened with times of sorrow
I wish you the sunshine of tomorrow
My life's been full, I savored much
Good friends, good times,
A loved one's touch.
Perhaps my time seemed all to brief
Don't lengthen it now with undue grief
Lift up your heart and share with me
God wanted me now; He set me free.
Don't grieve for me, for now I'm free
I'm following the path God laid for me
I took his hand when I heard his call
I turned my back and left it all.
I could not stay another day
To laugh, to love, to work, or play
Tasks left undone must stay that way
I've found that Peace at the close of day.
If my parting has left a void
Then fill it with remembered joy
A friendship shared, a laugh, a kiss
Ah, yes these things I too will miss.
Be not burdened with times of sorrow
I wish you the sunshine of tomorrow
My life's been full, I savored much
Good friends, good times,
A loved one's touch.
Perhaps my time seemed all to brief
Don't lengthen it now with undue grief
Lift up your heart and share with me
God wanted me now; He set me free.
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11:04 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
paula paula where are thee
because its getting all lonely in here with just me
mine are short and sweet i have been told
so come back now before i come uncontrolled
because its getting all lonely in here with just me
mine are short and sweet i have been told
so come back now before i come uncontrolled
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12:53 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Ow man Ive only just seen this, what a privilege, a birthday poem from the one and only, cheers for that mate!
writeapoem said:
Pitbull Pete
Here is a requested poem, for a special birthday boy,
I'm hoping that this reaches him in special times of joy.
An old fogey now, some might say, but he's still in his prime,
Although we've spent some years on here, we have enjoyed our time.
Bounds of energy he really has, this young man from the south,
Where something funny arises, every time he opens his mouth.
We sometimes work as a tag-team, driving Paula up the wall,
Whether its because of where she lives, or because her feet are small!
I hope you take today Pete, to celebrate your date of birth,
Spending all your cash on booze, and for all that its worth:
I'd just like to say from all of us, your a big part of this site,
So I'll tip my hat, and raise my glass, for Pete's big birthday night.
Happy Birthday Mate ;)
Here is a requested poem, for a special birthday boy,
I'm hoping that this reaches him in special times of joy.
An old fogey now, some might say, but he's still in his prime,
Although we've spent some years on here, we have enjoyed our time.
Bounds of energy he really has, this young man from the south,
Where something funny arises, every time he opens his mouth.
We sometimes work as a tag-team, driving Paula up the wall,
Whether its because of where she lives, or because her feet are small!
I hope you take today Pete, to celebrate your date of birth,
Spending all your cash on booze, and for all that its worth:
I'd just like to say from all of us, your a big part of this site,
So I'll tip my hat, and raise my glass, for Pete's big birthday night.
Happy Birthday Mate ;)
Ow man Ive only just seen this, what a privilege, a birthday poem from the one and only, cheers for that mate!
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12:53 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Great poems from everyone else too, Haha @ yours muff!
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16:15 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
When you talk to me, I hear in your voice,
That you believe in this world, that you have no choice;
But to escape into your own private life,
To deal through the hardships and all the strife.
Secrets can be buried, but they all smell,
And in the end, the truth always tells.
I know you think you have it all together,
Acting so falsely and pretending it's clever.
But I know when you try to sleep at night,
Your eyes stay open, and your mind fights,
The seeping truth that you know is there,
Heavy, like a cross to bear.
It's something deep in you, deep down inside,
A niggling truth that you cannot hide.
Let it all out, and discuss it all,
All of these problems, no matter how small.
In the end, it will all be clear,
And all your loved ones will hold you so near.
They're there to love you, all of them care,
And to keep this all from them is slightly unfair.
When something is bottled, it's meant to be free,
Explain everything, and I'm sure then you'll see.
This mask that you wear, only covers the face,
And you wear it too often in your own private space.
Time is a healer, and time will never cease,
Rid yourself of this burden for a life full of peace.
I'm sure in due course, that you wont need escapism,
Then you can lead your own life,without this emotional prison
That you believe in this world, that you have no choice;
But to escape into your own private life,
To deal through the hardships and all the strife.
Secrets can be buried, but they all smell,
And in the end, the truth always tells.
I know you think you have it all together,
Acting so falsely and pretending it's clever.
But I know when you try to sleep at night,
Your eyes stay open, and your mind fights,
The seeping truth that you know is there,
Heavy, like a cross to bear.
It's something deep in you, deep down inside,
A niggling truth that you cannot hide.
Let it all out, and discuss it all,
All of these problems, no matter how small.
In the end, it will all be clear,
And all your loved ones will hold you so near.
They're there to love you, all of them care,
And to keep this all from them is slightly unfair.
When something is bottled, it's meant to be free,
Explain everything, and I'm sure then you'll see.
This mask that you wear, only covers the face,
And you wear it too often in your own private space.
Time is a healer, and time will never cease,
Rid yourself of this burden for a life full of peace.
I'm sure in due course, that you wont need escapism,
Then you can lead your own life,without this emotional prison
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18:03 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
haha thanks pete, do a poem next time
do a poem right now pete
otherwise il turn you into a piece of meat
do a poem right now pete
otherwise il turn you into a piece of meat
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18:33 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Turn me into a piece of meat? How absurd is that?
Im far to big to cook you see, and far to bloody fat!
Ide sneeze and shout as you peppered my skin,
And curse your name to hell...
Ide spit and swear and nibble the rope
That you tied me up with so well
After a fuss I accept my fate, and lay myself to roast
Thinking I probably taste the bomb! (Not that Im tryin to boast)
So I close my eyes as the heat turns up, my death is on the horizon
Yet I lay and smile, and think to myself, my stomach is filled with poison ;)
Im far to big to cook you see, and far to bloody fat!
Ide sneeze and shout as you peppered my skin,
And curse your name to hell...
Ide spit and swear and nibble the rope
That you tied me up with so well
After a fuss I accept my fate, and lay myself to roast
Thinking I probably taste the bomb! (Not that Im tryin to boast)
So I close my eyes as the heat turns up, my death is on the horizon
Yet I lay and smile, and think to myself, my stomach is filled with poison ;)
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18:38 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
haha that was good
your far to big
where as im like a twig
but now i have to go back to college
to learn myself some new knowledge
your far to big
where as im like a twig
but now i have to go back to college
to learn myself some new knowledge
23:49 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
i think im coming down with a cold
jus going to go get a tissue and blow my load......
... from my nose of course
jus going to go get a tissue and blow my load......
... from my nose of course
23:56 Thu 3 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
my last poem was a bit crude
guess im in the naughty mood.
i hope i havent broken any rule
bst go bak to trying to play pool
guess im in the naughty mood.
i hope i havent broken any rule
bst go bak to trying to play pool
00:35 Fri 4 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Fab Fab Fab!! Keep them coming please i love them!
TITLE = SLEEP
TITLE = SLEEP
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12:00 Fri 4 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
paula u havent done one in a while.. even I AM DOING MORE and that says summat
fry go back to the chat room
before the mods start to loom
practise up on your cuing
because watching you makes me spew
fry go back to the chat room
before the mods start to loom
practise up on your cuing
because watching you makes me spew
15:56 Fri 4 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Its cold today
cba to try and play
gunna make myself a lovely brew
to see if it will make my face less blue
cba to try and play
gunna make myself a lovely brew
to see if it will make my face less blue
01:42 Sat 5 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Errrr Scuse me mr Mufty D
This thread was kept alive by me
And it started long before you
Started postin a line or two
So can you kindly just refrain
From driving me totally insane
This thread was kept alive by me
And it started long before you
Started postin a line or two
So can you kindly just refrain
From driving me totally insane
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04:03 Sat 5 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
Sleep
It's seven in the morning, and i'm awoken by a sound,
That awakes the feeling in me, that was so strongly sleep-bound.
I had a dream upon me, that was heavenly so,
Where I had a gorgeous woman, but her name I did not know.
She had the blondest hair, while her eyes were ocean blue,
While we sat up at the bar, where we both had drunk a few.
Her smile was just like sunset, her voice just like a song,
No frowns were put upon us, nothing was going wrong.
Suddenly the dream changed, we were swimming in a pool,
Where we dived in with the moves, that we both had learnt at school.
My big brown eyes glistened, my smile was largely wide,
I felt a warmth within me that was doubling in size.
She stroked my hair back softly - 'this is a just a dream'
But to think this thing was fake, was a thought surely obscene
I put my hand toward her, the bubble flew so high,
Who knew a dream could make a man, believe that he could fly.
Suddenly the bird crowed, and my brown eyes opened wide,
I felt I was awake, but there was a feeling deep inside.
Maybe I could have that? A dream I wish to keep -
A love I can that I can dream of, whenever I fall asleep.
It's seven in the morning, and i'm awoken by a sound,
That awakes the feeling in me, that was so strongly sleep-bound.
I had a dream upon me, that was heavenly so,
Where I had a gorgeous woman, but her name I did not know.
She had the blondest hair, while her eyes were ocean blue,
While we sat up at the bar, where we both had drunk a few.
Her smile was just like sunset, her voice just like a song,
No frowns were put upon us, nothing was going wrong.
Suddenly the dream changed, we were swimming in a pool,
Where we dived in with the moves, that we both had learnt at school.
My big brown eyes glistened, my smile was largely wide,
I felt a warmth within me that was doubling in size.
She stroked my hair back softly - 'this is a just a dream'
But to think this thing was fake, was a thought surely obscene
I put my hand toward her, the bubble flew so high,
Who knew a dream could make a man, believe that he could fly.
Suddenly the bird crowed, and my brown eyes opened wide,
I felt I was awake, but there was a feeling deep inside.
Maybe I could have that? A dream I wish to keep -
A love I can that I can dream of, whenever I fall asleep.
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04:04 Sat 5 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
I'm not as think as you drunk I am...
so if the poem above is pants then..........then.......well, meh
so if the poem above is pants then..........then.......well, meh
12:24 Sat 5 Mar 11 (GMT) [Link]
am findin it real hard,
coz am lost at the mo,
just need you to tell me,
coz i really don't know.
where it is goin,
and where we are at,
can't handle these feelings,
only you can fix that.
coz am lost at the mo,
just need you to tell me,
coz i really don't know.
where it is goin,
and where we are at,
can't handle these feelings,
only you can fix that.
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