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00:12 Thu 24 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Dear Grae thanks for stopping by
I told you Ste was good did'nt i ?
Please come again ha ha so to speak
Back to snooks you dont have to sneak
And as for you Gareth old Hips
Carry on with your poem blips
Even tho you hate ur last line
I dont care as long as they rhyme
Smurfy Wurfy where are you
Come an do a poem or two
You have done them before
Am sure you can do some more
I need some more from me Pit
His last poem was a huge hit
Spesh for me whom he calls pig
Shhh he says it to feel big :O ha!
Cymberline do you still read these?
C'mon mate compose one please
Theres no need to be shy
As long as you give it a try
Ste to you what can i say
All your posts make my day
Do you do them? Are you sure?
Or is that monkey still in ur top drawer
Ta - daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I told you Ste was good did'nt i ?
Please come again ha ha so to speak
Back to snooks you dont have to sneak
And as for you Gareth old Hips
Carry on with your poem blips
Even tho you hate ur last line
I dont care as long as they rhyme
Smurfy Wurfy where are you
Come an do a poem or two
You have done them before
Am sure you can do some more
I need some more from me Pit
His last poem was a huge hit
Spesh for me whom he calls pig
Shhh he says it to feel big :O ha!
Cymberline do you still read these?
C'mon mate compose one please
Theres no need to be shy
As long as you give it a try
Ste to you what can i say
All your posts make my day
Do you do them? Are you sure?
Or is that monkey still in ur top drawer
Ta - daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
00:14 Thu 24 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Last night when i was logged in, along with Pitbull and Ste
Out of the blue, a bug came in, calling herself Katie!
And so we all got talking, two women and two boys
Nothing dodgy about it, just laughin like kids with toys!
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he convo turned to animals, Tho some they arent real
Can i just say, alive or not, they are all good to feel!
Pit was talking about Amy, his doggy who was poor
Ste he mentioned Poppy, his cats unstoppable for sure
I spoke about my Rabbit Wodge, my friend an oh so kind
The fun we have all the time, really blows my mind!
Katie she was keepin shtum, is her pet thin or thick?
All only know its a Beaver and believe he's electric!!
Members bar was like a farm, buzzin with animal chat
Oh and Ste mentioned a Budgie an i PMSL @ that!!
If you have a beloved pet, share your tale with us all night
We dont mind if its big or small as long as it doesnt bite!!
Out of the blue, a bug came in, calling herself Katie!
And so we all got talking, two women and two boys
Nothing dodgy about it, just laughin like kids with toys!
T
he convo turned to animals, Tho some they arent real
Can i just say, alive or not, they are all good to feel!
Pit was talking about Amy, his doggy who was poor
Ste he mentioned Poppy, his cats unstoppable for sure
I spoke about my Rabbit Wodge, my friend an oh so kind
The fun we have all the time, really blows my mind!
Katie she was keepin shtum, is her pet thin or thick?
All only know its a Beaver and believe he's electric!!
Members bar was like a farm, buzzin with animal chat
Oh and Ste mentioned a Budgie an i PMSL @ that!!
If you have a beloved pet, share your tale with us all night
We dont mind if its big or small as long as it doesnt bite!!
02:13 Thu 24 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
lmao i worry so,
dear paula think i'd better go,
for rabbits, livin, is what stay here,
if i had yers think i'd be in tears!!!!!!
dear paula think i'd better go,
for rabbits, livin, is what stay here,
if i had yers think i'd be in tears!!!!!!
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11:16 Thu 24 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Great poems!! Haha @ the animal one!
That night was like being in a flaming x rated pet shop..
That night was like being in a flaming x rated pet shop..
11:26 Thu 24 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Ive just PMSL @ that Hips...haha awwww yaint that bad yano
LOL! Just thought on..didnt Ste mentioned a hamster an all? hahaha
Oh bab youve got to start doin poems an all
hippesville said:
lmao i worry so,
dear paula think i'd better go,
for rabbits, livin, is what stay here,
if i had yers think i'd be in tears!!!!!!
dear paula think i'd better go,
for rabbits, livin, is what stay here,
if i had yers think i'd be in tears!!!!!!
Ive just PMSL @ that Hips...haha awwww yaint that bad yano
pitbull_pete said:
Great poems!! Haha @ the animal one!
That night was like being in a flaming x rated pet shop..
That night was like being in a flaming x rated pet shop..
LOL! Just thought on..didnt Ste mentioned a hamster an all? hahaha
Oh bab youve got to start doin poems an all
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11:31 Thu 24 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
He did yeah! Hahaha, I want to hear more stories about his cat tho....I think he's holding back...
Yeah Ill do one soon what about tho?
Yeah Ill do one soon what about tho?
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00:54 Fri 25 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Id like to write more poems but the words wont flow,
can never find the words to go below..
So it be a short one from me,not as good as Paula,Hippes or Ste...
I never thought id be going back to school,
the first time round i just acted the fool.
But ive started college!
to expand my knowledge,i start every day with a bowl of porridge.
Its something that i must do to get a nvq..
and change my career for something new.
But it seem that the leopard doesn't change its spots,
i took my class mates down the pub where we all drunk lots..
When we got back we were all fairly pi____d
and i got the blame and a slap on the wrist!
So now i must behave and stay away from the pub,
or ill find myself in a lot of troub!
can never find the words to go below..
So it be a short one from me,not as good as Paula,Hippes or Ste...
I never thought id be going back to school,
the first time round i just acted the fool.
But ive started college!
to expand my knowledge,i start every day with a bowl of porridge.
Its something that i must do to get a nvq..
and change my career for something new.
But it seem that the leopard doesn't change its spots,
i took my class mates down the pub where we all drunk lots..
When we got back we were all fairly pi____d
and i got the blame and a slap on the wrist!
So now i must behave and stay away from the pub,
or ill find myself in a lot of troub!
08:43 Fri 25 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Ode to whats hipp!!!!
There is a man who hails above the rest , rants like an angel and is never a pest, he shoots pool like a god with the intensity of bull he keeps it interesting with him its never dull . This person i speak of is a legend in his own time , quick with a run out or a flashy deep rhyme , demeaner of a kitten but intense as a lion his name is hippesville a god amongst men there is no denying!!!!
To one my main men hippesville may you always stay cool my friend
There is a man who hails above the rest , rants like an angel and is never a pest, he shoots pool like a god with the intensity of bull he keeps it interesting with him its never dull . This person i speak of is a legend in his own time , quick with a run out or a flashy deep rhyme , demeaner of a kitten but intense as a lion his name is hippesville a god amongst men there is no denying!!!!
To one my main men hippesville may you always stay cool my friend
09:07 Fri 25 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
nice 1 cym ....
now don't be shy come back again,
just keep er lit my fun n games friend
cymberline said:
Id like to write more poems but the words wont flow,
can never find the words to go below..
So it be a short one from me,not as good as Paula,Hippes or Ste...
I never thought id be going back to school,
the first time round i just acted the fool.
But ive started college!
to expand my knowledge,i start every day with a bowl of porridge.
Its something that i must do to get a nvq..
and change my career for something new.
But it seem that the leopard doesn't change its spots,
i took my class mates down the pub where we all drunk lots..
When we got back we were all fairly pi____d
and i got the blame and a slap on the wrist!
So now i must behave and stay away from the pub,
or ill find myself in a lot of troub!
can never find the words to go below..
So it be a short one from me,not as good as Paula,Hippes or Ste...
I never thought id be going back to school,
the first time round i just acted the fool.
But ive started college!
to expand my knowledge,i start every day with a bowl of porridge.
Its something that i must do to get a nvq..
and change my career for something new.
But it seem that the leopard doesn't change its spots,
i took my class mates down the pub where we all drunk lots..
When we got back we were all fairly pi____d
and i got the blame and a slap on the wrist!
So now i must behave and stay away from the pub,
or ill find myself in a lot of troub!
nice 1 cym ....
now don't be shy come back again,
just keep er lit my fun n games friend
09:15 Fri 25 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
lmao pete you aint been takin yer meds,
but yer awesome and really should visit MORE,
it's like the time in uk you were reds,
we played a while and i whooped yer butt sore!!!
but seriously m8 you gotta come back,
i love yer poems and yer good for some craic,
just like cym we need ya's here,
for all yer poems hip hooray i do cheer!
viking4life said:
Ode to whats hipp!!!!
There is a man who hails above the rest , rants like an angel and is never a pest, he shoots pool like a god with the intensity of bull he keeps it interesting with him its never dull . This person i speak of is a legend in his own time , quick with a run out or a flashy deep rhyme , demeaner of a kitten but intense as a lion his name is hippesville a god amongst men there is no denying!!!!
To one my main men hippesville may you always stay cool my friend
There is a man who hails above the rest , rants like an angel and is never a pest, he shoots pool like a god with the intensity of bull he keeps it interesting with him its never dull . This person i speak of is a legend in his own time , quick with a run out or a flashy deep rhyme , demeaner of a kitten but intense as a lion his name is hippesville a god amongst men there is no denying!!!!
To one my main men hippesville may you always stay cool my friend
lmao pete you aint been takin yer meds,
but yer awesome and really should visit MORE,
it's like the time in uk you were reds,
we played a while and i whooped yer butt sore!!!
but seriously m8 you gotta come back,
i love yer poems and yer good for some craic,
just like cym we need ya's here,
for all yer poems hip hooray i do cheer!
04:03 Sat 26 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
so am guessin paula really wont mind,
about the words cept for the last in each line,
coz she's a div and lost the plot,
and green paint sits in a green paint pot.
there are fields all round my house,
today i squashed a banana......mouse,
felt quite warm and mushy italian,
i play football up front......branigans.
about the words cept for the last in each line,
coz she's a div and lost the plot,
and green paint sits in a green paint pot.
there are fields all round my house,
today i squashed a banana......mouse,
felt quite warm and mushy italian,
i play football up front......branigans.
05:33 Sat 26 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
some days they're just not meant to be,
as easy as the rest,
for some things get on top of you,
when you're not at your best.
it doesn't have to be all bad,
sometimes these things appear,
when you're least expecting it,
might even shed a tear.
confused to what is goin on,
things goin thro' your head,
just get thro'....remaining true,
then put them all to bed.
but this is part and parcel,
of the ups and downs of life,
enjoying all the good times,
and battling thro' the strife.
........
as easy as the rest,
for some things get on top of you,
when you're not at your best.
it doesn't have to be all bad,
sometimes these things appear,
when you're least expecting it,
might even shed a tear.
confused to what is goin on,
things goin thro' your head,
just get thro'....remaining true,
then put them all to bed.
but this is part and parcel,
of the ups and downs of life,
enjoying all the good times,
and battling thro' the strife.
........
02:44 Sun 27 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Hip Hip Hooray a poem fro Cym
*Claps* all credit goes to him
For no longer being shy
And giving this thread a try!
Oh dear Hippyvilly
Stop that acting silly
I dont mind not at all
Whether they are big or small (STS)
OOER!
Ha!
*Claps* all credit goes to him
For no longer being shy
And giving this thread a try!
Oh dear Hippyvilly
Stop that acting silly
I dont mind not at all
Whether they are big or small (STS)
OOER!
Ha!
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13:04 Sun 27 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Ive got no coke,but i do have Pepsi !
it gives me energy when i busy
its full of pop and very fizzy!
And your welcome to a can!
Ive have plenty,just put it in the bin when its empty
Ive got no coke,but i do have Pepsi !
it gives me energy when i busy
its full of pop and very fizzy!
And your welcome to a can!
Ive have plenty,just put it in the bin when its empty
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16:08 Sun 27 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
I've looked at this thread
the poems are great
but i'm not so good at the words to create
i'll give it a go
i will try my best
but really i know i'm not as good as the rest
Paula and Hipps have all the great lines
Cym has just started
his words to combine
i'd love to be one of those talented persons
But 'Writeapoem' may have to give me some lessons.
I've met some great friends on funky for sure
My hubby hates me on here,
he's looking for a cure (to my funky addiction)
Cym's my best buddy
we have such a laugh
We can spend hours in some stupid chaff. (talk )
So keep writing your poems
they all have been great
As for me this is probably the last i'll create
the poems are great
but i'm not so good at the words to create
i'll give it a go
i will try my best
but really i know i'm not as good as the rest
Paula and Hipps have all the great lines
Cym has just started
his words to combine
i'd love to be one of those talented persons
But 'Writeapoem' may have to give me some lessons.
I've met some great friends on funky for sure
My hubby hates me on here,
he's looking for a cure (to my funky addiction)
Cym's my best buddy
we have such a laugh
We can spend hours in some stupid chaff. (talk )
So keep writing your poems
they all have been great
As for me this is probably the last i'll create
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17:29 Sun 27 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
Nice one Annie i knew yourd be good at this,
my poems are like my pool,a bit hit and miss.
Ive never been good with words
I just rhyme and its a bit absurd.
I do a few more every now and then
thinking of words as i chew my pen.
So i hope you's dont mind me posting my silly rhymes
good luck and take all,till the next time
Nice one Annie i knew yourd be good at this,
my poems are like my pool,a bit hit and miss.
Ive never been good with words
I just rhyme and its a bit absurd.
I do a few more every now and then
thinking of words as i chew my pen.
So i hope you's dont mind me posting my silly rhymes
good luck and take all,till the next time
19:36 Sun 27 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
MORE MORE!!!!
Welcome Annie that was great
So was yours Cymberline mate
Keep composing and posting here
Its a thread some will hold dear
For its a place we can express
Inner feelings and thoughts or less
For me at times its been a ledge
Hence me making a loyalty pledge
I pleadged to never let it die
And as long as im here i will try
Welcome Annie that was great
So was yours Cymberline mate
Keep composing and posting here
Its a thread some will hold dear
For its a place we can express
Inner feelings and thoughts or less
For me at times its been a ledge
Hence me making a loyalty pledge
I pleadged to never let it die
And as long as im here i will try
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20:15 Sun 27 Feb 11 (GMT) [Link]
I've got the bug i have to say
It's really quite addictive
Finding words tho is a prob
i find it quite restrictive
Paula gives us all support
She really is a treasure
And her loyalty to this thread
Is something we can't measure
I will try my best to have a go
and keep her dream alive you know
Hipps, iv'e made fun of your pink outfit
but i love your phrase 'Keep er Lit' !!! lol
It's really quite addictive
Finding words tho is a prob
i find it quite restrictive
Paula gives us all support
She really is a treasure
And her loyalty to this thread
Is something we can't measure
I will try my best to have a go
and keep her dream alive you know
Hipps, iv'e made fun of your pink outfit
but i love your phrase 'Keep er Lit' !!! lol
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