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06:38 Fri 13 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
With memories of past times gone
a runner in the race
now sadly it has been too long
and i must leave this place
a lack of trust a lack of faith
surrounds me now in hate
and so i must depart from here
to set the balance straight
with joy and laughter friendships made
ill take them as i go
and as the past begins to fade
i pray that you all know
the times i spent amongst you all
were blissful as it comes
but through the hate the rope of love
unravelled now undone
with heavy heart i write this piece
to leave somthing behind
to let you know the reasons why
such thoughts were on my mind
do this i must in order to
give back the things you had
and sacrafice the friends ive made
to make these haters glad
as stupid as this seems to you
the whispers reach my ears
and slowley drive me crazy
as the fog of the past clears
and so this gift i give to them
to make their happy day
i will depart and not return
away is where ill stay
a runner in the race
now sadly it has been too long
and i must leave this place
a lack of trust a lack of faith
surrounds me now in hate
and so i must depart from here
to set the balance straight
with joy and laughter friendships made
ill take them as i go
and as the past begins to fade
i pray that you all know
the times i spent amongst you all
were blissful as it comes
but through the hate the rope of love
unravelled now undone
with heavy heart i write this piece
to leave somthing behind
to let you know the reasons why
such thoughts were on my mind
do this i must in order to
give back the things you had
and sacrafice the friends ive made
to make these haters glad
as stupid as this seems to you
the whispers reach my ears
and slowley drive me crazy
as the fog of the past clears
and so this gift i give to them
to make their happy day
i will depart and not return
away is where ill stay
07:13 Fri 13 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Great poem Wiz.
Hope it was a random one tho and not meaning ur leaving
Hope it was a random one tho and not meaning ur leaving
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08:20 Fri 13 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Glad ya liked it hahahahaha.just one of them moments
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HAHAHAHA Great stuff Karri
Glad ya liked it hahahahaha.just one of them moments
13:33 Sat 14 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
One For Stell
Dont you ever ever again call me a TF
Cos yano Ud has a diff meaning you Meff!
You can call me Puddles all you want tho
You know what that means you love it so
Can also call me your Schnuppie every hour
And that way you wont get any sweet or sour
As for my scouse eyelashes leave them outta it
You prob have more then me you Welsh lil git!
I dont want your crispy bacon or a cocopop
Dont try to give me them or its no more clop
You just call me nice names to sweeten me up
Maybe then I'll let you drink from your furry cup!!!
Ha!
Your Pauwa )) xx
Edited at 18:33 Sat 14/06/08 (BST)
Dont you ever ever again call me a TF
Cos yano Ud has a diff meaning you Meff!
You can call me Puddles all you want tho
You know what that means you love it so
Can also call me your Schnuppie every hour
And that way you wont get any sweet or sour
As for my scouse eyelashes leave them outta it
You prob have more then me you Welsh lil git!
I dont want your crispy bacon or a cocopop
Dont try to give me them or its no more clop
You just call me nice names to sweeten me up
Maybe then I'll let you drink from your furry cup!!!
Ha!
Your Pauwa )) xx
Edited at 18:33 Sat 14/06/08 (BST)
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06:35 Sun 15 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
OMG LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Brilliant!!
Love you Puddles xx
Love you Puddles xx
07:29 Sun 15 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
HA! Glad you like bab
Hmmm you and ur FISHING BUDDY shud do some more tho!
Hmmm you and ur FISHING BUDDY shud do some more tho!
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10:38 Mon 16 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Sorry (Fs i sound like Akon)
Sorry I were mad
Sorry you were there
Sorry for my Anger
Sorry that you care
Sorry for the shame
Sorry for your eyes
Sorry for the hurt
Sorry im not wise
Sorry for the stress
Sorry about the time
Sorry for your help
Sorry i took the line
Sorry for involing
Sorry for speaking loud
Sorry for the liars
Sorry for acting proud
Sorry for my harsh words
Sorry im soo blunt
Sorry you got caught up
Trust me ill wipe out all them....Tarts
Sorry I were mad
Sorry you were there
Sorry for my Anger
Sorry that you care
Sorry for the shame
Sorry for your eyes
Sorry for the hurt
Sorry im not wise
Sorry for the stress
Sorry about the time
Sorry for your help
Sorry i took the line
Sorry for involing
Sorry for speaking loud
Sorry for the liars
Sorry for acting proud
Sorry for my harsh words
Sorry im soo blunt
Sorry you got caught up
Trust me ill wipe out all them....Tarts
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10:44 Mon 16 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Its times like this, when you sit down and think
You look back on life, and pour yourself another drink
And wonder why people, have to suffer so much
When all they have done, is reach out and touch
You just sit there helpless, and you can't do a thing
Except wish them all hope, and the luck it will bring
It is not a nice feeling, when someone you know
Gives you really bad news, that's a really bad blow
But as long as they know, that you are there for them all
They will keep on fighting, and get though that wall
But we have to have faith, they will get through all this
Just through a message, even a hug and a kiss
And so long as their not left all alone, in their fear
They will soon be back, making us shed a tear
With laughter and fun, and making us smile
As they always have done, making my life worthwhile
~Stell~
Nice poem Pete by the way
You look back on life, and pour yourself another drink
And wonder why people, have to suffer so much
When all they have done, is reach out and touch
You just sit there helpless, and you can't do a thing
Except wish them all hope, and the luck it will bring
It is not a nice feeling, when someone you know
Gives you really bad news, that's a really bad blow
But as long as they know, that you are there for them all
They will keep on fighting, and get though that wall
But we have to have faith, they will get through all this
Just through a message, even a hug and a kiss
And so long as their not left all alone, in their fear
They will soon be back, making us shed a tear
With laughter and fun, and making us smile
As they always have done, making my life worthwhile
~Stell~
Nice poem Pete by the way
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12:10 Mon 16 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Wooo Wooo Pit!! You can do poems!
That was Fab bab!!
Stell ~ Loved yours too hun *hugs*
Sorry for edit!
Pete, That poem means loads to me, i didnt realize it was for me..im touched..and shocked tbh
<Insert shocked afro icon> FAT COCKNEYYYYYYYYYY Tryin to make me cry eh? *NADGES*
Ty mate *hugs*
Edited at 17:23 Mon 16/06/08 (BST)
That was Fab bab!!
Stell ~ Loved yours too hun *hugs*
Sorry for edit!
Pete, That poem means loads to me, i didnt realize it was for me..im touched..and shocked tbh
<Insert shocked afro icon> FAT COCKNEYYYYYYYYYY Tryin to make me cry eh? *NADGES*
Ty mate *hugs*
Edited at 17:23 Mon 16/06/08 (BST)
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12:23 Mon 16 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Thankage
Cant believe you didnt realise (Stupid Scaaaase!)
Ha! *Hugs*
Edited at 17:24 Mon 16/06/08 (BST)
Cant believe you didnt realise (Stupid Scaaaase!)
Ha! *Hugs*
Edited at 17:24 Mon 16/06/08 (BST)
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13:01 Mon 16 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
I honestly didnt! Lol *hugs*
Ohhh go on..call me names naw ya forgot to say Skinny !!!
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Thankage
Cant believe you didnt realise (Stupid Scaaaase!)
Ha! *Hugs*
Cant believe you didnt realise (Stupid Scaaaase!)
Ha! *Hugs*
I honestly didnt! Lol *hugs*
Ohhh go on..call me names naw ya forgot to say Skinny !!!
08:13 Tue 17 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Just to say
The past two wks ive had a laugh
Online with you is never naff
But back to work for you today
And from a PC away you stay
All day long you'll be out on site
I wont hear from you till tonight
So all cos of ur smelly git boss
All through the day im at a loss
However,on a much brighter note
When ur home, my time ill devote
So knowing we'll still have our time
Is how i'm ending this short rhyme
~Paula ~ xx
The past two wks ive had a laugh
Online with you is never naff
But back to work for you today
And from a PC away you stay
All day long you'll be out on site
I wont hear from you till tonight
So all cos of ur smelly git boss
All through the day im at a loss
However,on a much brighter note
When ur home, my time ill devote
So knowing we'll still have our time
Is how i'm ending this short rhyme
~Paula ~ xx
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09:07 Tue 17 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Dusting off the fingers
Its been such along time, since this exercise,
Where I would write poems about our great times.
So since it has been so long, please excuse this post,
As it seems in this forum I'm a very old ghost.
Well off comes the dust from these fingers of mine,
I'm finding it troublesome already - to think of a line.
It is strange to comprehend all the poems we wrote,
About holidays, and situations, and on people we dote.
Like an addictive drug, I'm back here for more,
And can only hope I'm as good as before.
Its always hard to write, on your first trip back here,
It would be too inappropriate to simply converse about beer.
So maybe I'll post another, and try to explain,
About why I spend such time away, and then come back again.
But you'll have to wait for that one, it needs to be good,
I would like it to be great, as it really should.
So here's a quick hello, from your old pal ste,
Back online today, to write you all poetry!
Its been such along time, since this exercise,
Where I would write poems about our great times.
So since it has been so long, please excuse this post,
As it seems in this forum I'm a very old ghost.
Well off comes the dust from these fingers of mine,
I'm finding it troublesome already - to think of a line.
It is strange to comprehend all the poems we wrote,
About holidays, and situations, and on people we dote.
Like an addictive drug, I'm back here for more,
And can only hope I'm as good as before.
Its always hard to write, on your first trip back here,
It would be too inappropriate to simply converse about beer.
So maybe I'll post another, and try to explain,
About why I spend such time away, and then come back again.
But you'll have to wait for that one, it needs to be good,
I would like it to be great, as it really should.
So here's a quick hello, from your old pal ste,
Back online today, to write you all poetry!
09:18 Tue 17 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
I KNEW Id find a poem from you as soon as i seen ur name online!
WB Ste *big hugs*
Luv that poem
WB Ste *big hugs*
Luv that poem
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17:57 Tue 17 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
A length too far
It felt so familiar, but a little bit coy,
Like the brand-new nervousness when a girl meets boy.
The old butterflies, that weren't felt for a while,
And her pretty blue eyes that just made me smile.
Only a few months we'd been knocking around,
Meeting through friends, and going round town.
Way out of my league, at least thats what I thought,
But suddenly one day, in her net I was caught.
Seductive deep eyes, a trim figure to boot,
Cupid was on call, and an arrow he did shoot.
Not so out-spoken, mysterious and withdrawn,
Not in a bad way, as if she was forlorn.
Anyways the time we had was short lived,
But not to our faults, we gave it all we could give.
It will be a long time til we meet again, I think of her some days,
I think of the chase that wanted, and the games that we played.
So all I can do, is let time take its toll,
Until then I just wonder, and let the summer days roll.
Edited at 22:58 Tue 17/06/08 (BST)
It felt so familiar, but a little bit coy,
Like the brand-new nervousness when a girl meets boy.
The old butterflies, that weren't felt for a while,
And her pretty blue eyes that just made me smile.
Only a few months we'd been knocking around,
Meeting through friends, and going round town.
Way out of my league, at least thats what I thought,
But suddenly one day, in her net I was caught.
Seductive deep eyes, a trim figure to boot,
Cupid was on call, and an arrow he did shoot.
Not so out-spoken, mysterious and withdrawn,
Not in a bad way, as if she was forlorn.
Anyways the time we had was short lived,
But not to our faults, we gave it all we could give.
It will be a long time til we meet again, I think of her some days,
I think of the chase that wanted, and the games that we played.
So all I can do, is let time take its toll,
Until then I just wonder, and let the summer days roll.
Edited at 22:58 Tue 17/06/08 (BST)
19:28 Tue 17 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Aw Ste *HUGS* Fab that mate
STE WANNA TITLE?
STE WANNA TITLE?
20:03 Tue 17 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Well i cant put Crispy Bacon now can i! AND am gunna check Bug-a-lugs too! LMAO
Title is: Short Hair!!!
Title is: Short Hair!!!
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07:22 Wed 18 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Short Hair
Been back a day, and people have given thought,
About how I look different, now my hair is short.
So here are the reasons, why i had the cut,
Apart from the obvious, of being a male Sl*t;
For one, it is easy to fix after a shower,
I can now get dressed and ready in well under an hour!
Its better for summer, it looks pretty neat,
It makes all the girlies fall right at my feet!
Cut for a tenner, student prices of course,
I run the wax through my hair with magnificent force.
Then I touch up the tips, with a slight bit of gel,
No more bad hair days, no more going through hell.
And then for the hairspray, we cant risk a fault,
Remember to take all this, with a pinch of salt.
Then I venture outside, and feel the wind on my head,
If my hair was long, I'd of stayed in instead.
Short hair is brilliant, I love it the most,
And that is the reason for this afternoons post!
Ha !
Been back a day, and people have given thought,
About how I look different, now my hair is short.
So here are the reasons, why i had the cut,
Apart from the obvious, of being a male Sl*t;
For one, it is easy to fix after a shower,
I can now get dressed and ready in well under an hour!
Its better for summer, it looks pretty neat,
It makes all the girlies fall right at my feet!
Cut for a tenner, student prices of course,
I run the wax through my hair with magnificent force.
Then I touch up the tips, with a slight bit of gel,
No more bad hair days, no more going through hell.
And then for the hairspray, we cant risk a fault,
Remember to take all this, with a pinch of salt.
Then I venture outside, and feel the wind on my head,
If my hair was long, I'd of stayed in instead.
Short hair is brilliant, I love it the most,
And that is the reason for this afternoons post!
Ha !
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07:59 Wed 18 Jun 08 (BST) [Link]
Long Hair
My hair is long, has been for a while
Rock chicks dig it, which then makes me smile
It blows in the wind or gets tied back
i dont use gels or colours or any other crap
its lush and blonde and wavy and thick
great for headbanging and the odd party trick
I wont be a Francis Rossi, who looks a tool
long hair over a bald bit, is just not cool
one day it will get cut, but not just yet
when im going bald, ill shave it for a bet
ill raise money for a good cause, when iam ready
maybe for pudsey, the children in need teddy.
Edited at 13:04 Wed 18/06/08 (BST)
My hair is long, has been for a while
Rock chicks dig it, which then makes me smile
It blows in the wind or gets tied back
i dont use gels or colours or any other crap
its lush and blonde and wavy and thick
great for headbanging and the odd party trick
I wont be a Francis Rossi, who looks a tool
long hair over a bald bit, is just not cool
one day it will get cut, but not just yet
when im going bald, ill shave it for a bet
ill raise money for a good cause, when iam ready
maybe for pudsey, the children in need teddy.
Edited at 13:04 Wed 18/06/08 (BST)
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