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15:37 Sun 7 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
LMAO! stevie nice stole poem there lol
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02:09 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I'm writing this poem
Because i feel bad
Over something that happened
That made people sad

Just want to say sorry
For all that was said
I knew it was wrong
At the back of my head

Two special friends
I don't want to lose
Thoughtful and Caring
Better friends, i couldn't choose!


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02:47 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Aww nice poem honey xx

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05:00 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
A little poem just for you
From my heart for looby Lou
DONT feel bad over yesterday
I am sorry for having my say

Even tho you sed it was wrong
NOT your fault you played along
Although u sed youd feel the same
It was only a silly online game

I HAD to say just how i felt
Only a bad card id been dealt
Coudnt hide my feeling i must say
My own fault for feelings this way

Please understand how it affected me
But surely mates we still can be
I'll ask again please DONT feel bad
That will make me feel really sad

Thankyou so much for being kind
Over and done lets leave it behind
Lets get back to how we were
Fun and games and laughs we share

We have had Laffs i must say
I so much wanna keep it that way
BUT one more thing before i go
Lou can u please sort your BLACK WIDOW!!!




*HUGS*


~Paula~






Edited at 10:01 Mon 8/10/07 (BST)
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11:29 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
awww sweet poem
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16:16 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Sorry random request.......

Snow

As I look out the window, there is white all around
This white, cold and wet stuff, has covered the ground
It's a beautiful sight , it's a wonderful scene
In this day and age, not often to be seen

I remember when younger, I used to go out and play
And get freezing cold, but thought what the hell, hey?
Making up snowballs, throwing them at a mate
Just as a good laugh, and not with any hate

Oh Yeah, and making snowmen, as big as yourself
Or if you were smaller, it looked like an elf !!
Using carrots for noses, and bits of branches for an arm
Just having some fun, not doing no harm

But then comes the rain, then the snowman dies
As I look out next morning, disbelief in my eyes
Then I think to myself, about troubles and strife
Maybe one day, that snowman, will come back into my life

~Stell~
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16:33 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Salty tears running down her cheeks
Been building up for a few weeks
Finally she had to let them flow
Was hurting like youd never know

Some things she cant push aside
Other things she took in stride
You cant really help what you feel
Right now she feels this pain wont heal

She Really only has herself to blame
She doesnt want anyone to hurt the same
Which is why i think she had in mind
To walk away leaving things behind

She thinks not only is it sad
She feels its also a little mad
To feel the way she has for sometime
Over Someone she met way back online

She wont regret what they once did share
She knows deep down she will always care
They were as close as anyone cud be
Shared some laffs and felt carefree

I Hope that girl will be just okay
I hope others can see it her way
She really did fall way too deep
Tho she's walked her heart he can keep






~Paula~ x

Edited at 21:40 Mon 8/10/07 (BST)
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20:19 Mon 8 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Ty Stell 4 the poem and paula that's really sad
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10:23 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
brill poem paula know the feeling x x
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10:36 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
People here all have their ups and downs
have their hurtful times and permanent frowns.
People here have their good times and bad
but what they remember most of all, is sad
but one day, we can be happy and hava big smile
and hoping to god, it lasts a long while.
soon this will turn out a dream, from what you awake.
i will make this better...
...whatever it takes.

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10:49 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Life is life
even though it can sometimes be tough
You gotta live with it,
even though it can be rough
It's a gift given to us from up above
So don't use it for hatred..
but use it for love.
Life is the most precious and valuable gift of all, So don't throw it away by jumping of a wall.
Lifes too short for arguing and fighting
these no point to it at all
you only get one life in this world
before its your time to be called.
If only everyone could get along with each other
there would be no more fighing and Hate ridge
for one another,
but love everyone like a "brother".
But i know what im saying will not matter
people will on hating a fighting
and lifes will be in tatters
i guess i am a Naive to think that this could ever happen,
but dont give up... Your life Does matter!

Live everyday as if it would be your last,
Be kind, happy, and have a blast.

Edited at 15:52 Tue 9/10/07 (BST)
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10:54 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
errmm... think that was my worst poem yet!! ;-/ lol. sorry about that!
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11:07 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Walking down the street
my thoughts we're with you
i was feeling so happy
and my heart it skiped a beat.
Remembering all the times we've spend together
each and every moment.. i'll cherish forever
and i know that i will be without you.. Never.
But then my happiness turned to sadness and pain
because been without you drives me insane.
A tear began to fall down my face
as i walked down the street
my heart beat faster
and i began to slow down my pace.
I came to a halt, as the wind picked up
it whistled around me
and thinking how happy i am to have found you
and that i couldn't believe my luck
i swear that i could hear a whispering..
'i love you'.. in the breeze
so i turned around to have a look
thinking you had come back to give me
my heart that you took.
Then as i stood in the icy cold wind
i could feel something around me
like something was gripping me tightly
and it was There.. that i swear..
You was holding me in the wind
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11:45 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
He may still have your heart, although it is broke
He still thinks the world of you, and that is no joke
Can they carry on, with "no strings attached" ?
When everyone can see, they are evenly matched

He knows he did wrong, for that, he has said sorry
He has had sleepless nights, because of the worry
He has shared her tears, and believe it or not
He has shared the pain, he has never forgot

"He still gives you something", that much I know
But when she said she was walking, it still came as a blow
The broken heart, he will always keep
And he knows, you think you got "In way to deep"

But for all that, the pain they are feeling
Will one day subside, with some loving healing
I hope these two people will never ever part
Here Paula "CATCH" here's Stellas's heart

~ Stell ~
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11:47 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Aww. Great poems, both.
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12:36 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Stell lovely poem, lovely sentiment, my best wishes are with u m8!
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12:37 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Awww Paula and Stell, both heart felt poems *hugs*
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16:03 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Its been a funny old day, that started so crap
Woke up with my doggie, sprawled over my lap
Last night, fell asleep on the sofa, with thoughts in my head
Just couldn't be asked, to make it to bed
Looked out the window, and stared at the rain
Looked at my PC, and then felt the pain
Do I log in? , and just what will I find
Hopefully something, that will ease peace of mind
Logged into main, soon got easily bored
Just sat there waiting, and being ignored
Then one chink of light, a message off a mate
Saying fight for her Stell, fight for her mate !!
He knows who he is, ive messaged him since
And the girl he is with, has got a real prince
Now tonight I will sleep, with great peace of mind
And yes I know there are some things, I cant leave behind
But they are taken on board, and will remind, without fail
But my biggest smile today, was when I read an e-mail

~ Stell~
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16:40 Tue 9 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Aaawww stella!! And you do have a good mate there hun!!
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