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hippesville
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03:30 Sun 14 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
i guess its true
the poets are few
how many come here
i haven't a clue
but i'll always keep coming
and keep posting rhymes
me paula and fry
committing these crhymes

fry06
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00:49 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Well im bored
Wish Leeds had scored
Nothing on the box
Guess i'll iron my socks
punkpoet
punkpoet
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15:41 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
i suppose with my name i should be here more
but im scared i will be a bore
so it looks like frys doing this alone
abd we wouldn't want him to moan
so here i am feeling ill
heads pounding like a dril
so anyone like my poor attempt at a ryhme?
or am i just wasting my time
fry06
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19:07 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Nice to see someone new
Bout time apair grew
So come he more
And post a poetic score
punkpoet
punkpoet
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20:42 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
your little rhyme made me laugh
even though it was daft
ive actually posted before
though no one asked for more
maybe they were a little dull
so i carried on playing pool
but fry looked like he was about to cry
cause he thinks this thread could die
so he begged for people to post
people who would write poems the most
but no one asked me to help
no one gave me a yelp
though im the punkpoet
from no on should all know it
punkpoet
punkpoet
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22:01 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
im in the poem mood
hoping to have you glued
looking on in anticipation
smiling in admiration
you neve know
had yo give it a go
in reality im met with indifference
can you tell me whats the difference
between love and hate?
between a reltionship and just a mate?
both keep you awake
at night i need a break
anyways what can i expect?
a bit of respect?
any positive feed back?
to asure me im not a hack
or even a smile
would be worthwhile
so im going for now
i smile and take a bow
fry06
fry06
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22:03 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Three in a day??!
Are you feeling ok?
Making me look like im part time
Which is a terrible crime
But thanks for coming and jotting a note
I hope you enjoy it here, but dont show boat
punkpoet
punkpoet
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22:24 Mon 15 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
im sorry pal
but your poems are ussually wow
this one was all right
i dont wanna fight
but your better than me
and we should all see
so im awaiting your reply
and the reason why
is i love ryhmes
and that aint a crime
and for a side note
i didnt mean to showboat
fry06
fry06
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00:15 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Cant think
Mind down the sink
Perhaps its the drink
Will try write a rhyme
May take some time
So be patient and wait
Hopefully my next rhyme will be great
punkpoet
punkpoet
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01:44 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
you cant rhyme drunk
are you in a funk?
is it cause of the punk?
i will wait and see
as i know your better than me
and i need a pee
fry06
fry06
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02:14 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
You need to calm down
But keep smiling and dont frown
Keep coming and spreading rhyme
Whenever you have the time
But i must say ur buttering me up
So im a little scared..my lil butter cup
punkpoet
punkpoet
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03:00 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
i dont need to be calm
whats the harm
frown? not me mate
and btw im straight
just wanted to spread the joy
didnt mean to annoy
as i always do on funky
no one seems to like punky ;)
oh well there go
been nice to know
you lot night
jeez what a site lol

Edited at 01:04 Tue 16/08/11 (BST)
fry06
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16:36 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Who said you annoyed?
With the poems you have toyed
Everyone likes punky
Even though he is at times..funky
punkpoet
punkpoet
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18:55 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
i do like to have abit of fun
especially when im on a run
i beat theese rhymes like im rocky
but fear i come across cocky
as im not like that
but i can be a prat
im aware of my like ability
but i just want tranquillity
im not high on people's friends list
and a few would like me dismissed
but posting on here makes me smile
and makes myself less likely of self exile

ps thank you for funky update
i will have a shower hope it aint to late

pss looking back i may have stole the rocky line if so it wasnt deliberate

Edited at 15:59 Tue 16/08/11 (BST)
fry06
fry06
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19:04 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
How many lines you like to write
Sure u aint as high as a kite?
Keep going my lad
Let everyone be happy not sad
Nice to have someone sharing the load
Can see your in the poetry mode
So keep on posting
Or i'll get Paula to give u a roasting
punkpoet
punkpoet
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19:15 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
hey how are you fry
that was a quick reply
honestly i write in my note pad
some is bad
some make me sad
and some makes me mad
so i have alot of material
which i write whilsr eating cereal
i dont do drugs
i prefer to do hugs
a roasting? in a naughty way?
well i wont stray
just in case
and make sure my rhymes are ace

Edited at 16:24 Tue 16/08/11 (BST)
fry06
fry06
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20:34 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
You'd love a naughty roasting
Go tell all ur friends and be boasting
Your long poems making me look like a newb
Guess i'll have to go back to eating my frube
But spose i should be pleased ur here
So i dont have Paula moning in my ear

punkpoet
punkpoet
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21:25 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
are my rhymes long?
im sorry if that wrong?
i do need a roasting
it should be you im toasting
for keeping this alive
but im here to revive
a dying thread
that unfortunately is unread :(
once again paula whos this?
is she someone you kiss?

ps im sorry nothing rhymes with paula does she have a nickname
punkpoet
punkpoet
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21:28 Tue 16 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
there was a young man called fry
he liked to eat pie
and he had an imaginary friend
but now i hit a dead end
as nothing rhymes with paula lol

Edited at 18:34 Tue 16/08/11 (BST)
hippesville
hippesville
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00:38 Wed 17 Aug 11 (BST)  [Link]  
if leavin was an option,
then that should turn around,
some come before,
and have the right,
i think that would be sound.

waitin for the answers,
am sure they'll come some time,
come tell me fry,
or anyone,
and i will say that's fine.
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