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07:07 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
please accept apologies for lowering the standard ...


Don't ever take for granted
The senses with which you were blessed
Else should the time come for repossession
It will surely be too late for redress

That dull ache that lives behind the eyes
It feeds and takes strength once it burrows in
You must fight the war, the demon inside
There is so much to lose but far more to win

Now give second thought to what seems real
Peel the layers away to search the truth
First impressions can often mislead
Never be afraid to seek the proof

So save each precious day to a recess of your mind
The snow in the meadow, the sun on the sand
Family and friends, laughter and joy
Should the darkness descend it will help to withstand

Some vow that ignorance is blind
Others believe that love can be too
But as images blur and the definition fades
Look inside your heart for a vision anew
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Blind yet seen
The world we live in
War and hate become one
Us in the middle
Leaders demand or trust
Knife in the back for each one of us

Protest for a new order
Hope for a new world
Bold people take action
For the world they wish to behold

Failure so known
Hurts to the core
The world is messed up
We are to blame for

Children of the future
Task per second
Guns in hand
Grenade in other
Here we go a new world order

Hope is lost!
justsumgirl
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10:17 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Chris ~ :O:O Great stuff can we have more from you please?


Good on Zody, keep em coming



We now have some new poets
On this great here poem thread
G, Zody, Colin and Christopher
Reeling rhymes from in their head

As stated many times before
This threads the best to me
And reading verses and peoms
Well, it makes me feel happy

So here i want to thank you
For keeping this thread alive
I hope to see a whole lot more
And watching theses pages strive


~Paula~

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14:12 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Wooooooooooooo more
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14:21 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Wow brilliant poems and I get mention in one


Keep them coming guys
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14:25 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k
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14:33 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k



I'm very sorry


I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders


But I shall now be more explicit

Keep them coming EVERYONE
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14:56 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k



I'm very sorry


I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders


But I shall now be more explicit

Keep them coming EVERYONE





ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
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15:05 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
RAMBO!!

Look at him go
Into the wild
Sword he wields
Fury in his eyes

Makes chicken from leaves
And angel delight from wood
He's a fighter
Love to be him if i could

People hate him with a passion
But you always see him in the latest fashion
My god he is dashing
Don't look to much you will get a bashing

Old he gets but still no Fin
Rambo will throw you in a bin
Over a fence or towards a shark
Watch you die
While leaving of a howlish bark

This poem so long
Makes me sleepy

Oh look spongebob is on!!
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15:06 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
yeeeeeeeeeee another poem yippppppeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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15:07 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
cheeky_chops said:
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k



I'm very sorry


I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders


But I shall now be more explicit

Keep them coming EVERYONE





ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you




It's alright you didn't.....much
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15:08 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Cheeky_chops loves her poems
Just like i like my phones
Up all night giving hell
To make this poem page live till the end



I'm going to call you poem chief....Actully Co-poem chief...Cause paula will kill me lol
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15:09 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k



I'm very sorry


I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders


But I shall now be more explicit

Keep them coming EVERYONE





ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you




It's alright you didn't.....much




oh dont now you set me off







pmsl
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07:56 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
PULLING TOOL

Bubbly Bubbly Oh so fine
Fun & chewey all the time
Fruity taste is what u are
Love ur flavour best by far

When im sad is when ur dull
I need ur taste to go on pull
Minty breath is what they like
Exept the girl they call the bike

Bubble Bubble u last not long
About the time it takes a song
Tho thats enough to make a move
Dance so mad, then go real smooth

Chew away for extra freshness
Smile away as if they're topless
Flash them pearls at a random chic
Take her home and flash ur...Bubble lol



Edited at 14:21 Thu 19/02/09 (GMT)
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Woooo Fat Gets back on the poems







About time to


wb
g_k
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11:59 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Nice one Pete

Hope to be posting a new one myself later on if I can get a "last" verse
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Yeeeeeeeee 3 cheers for Grae



Hip Hip Hoorayyyyyyyyy




Cant wait to read this woooooo
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15:12 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Sharing

The things we share are so many
From toys in childhood to secrets when we're older
For your thoughts I'll give you a penny
The fashion for sharing never gets colder

A problem shared is a problem halved
Sharing an evening out, maybe a meal
With our friends, oh how we laughed
Telling each other how we feel

So share something with someone today
It will give you a nice warm feeling
A bag of sweets? what to share who can say?
Sometimes sharing leaves you reeling

So just grab a phone and talk to a friend
When you feel like doing something daring
There's no problem if their ear you bend
Tell them all about it, then your Sharing
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00:59 Fri 20 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Pit ~ WOOOOOOOOO A pitty poem! Good stuff lol

Grae ~ FAB! More More!!

Zody ~ I pmsl @ your posts...

LMAO @ Oh look spongebob is on!!




Keep'em coming guys
g_k
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02:45 Fri 20 Feb 09 (GMT)  [Link]  
Glad you liked it I'll try and do another one sooon
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