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07:07 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
please accept apologies for lowering the standard ...
Don't ever take for granted
The senses with which you were blessed
Else should the time come for repossession
It will surely be too late for redress
That dull ache that lives behind the eyes
It feeds and takes strength once it burrows in
You must fight the war, the demon inside
There is so much to lose but far more to win
Now give second thought to what seems real
Peel the layers away to search the truth
First impressions can often mislead
Never be afraid to seek the proof
So save each precious day to a recess of your mind
The snow in the meadow, the sun on the sand
Family and friends, laughter and joy
Should the darkness descend it will help to withstand
Some vow that ignorance is blind
Others believe that love can be too
But as images blur and the definition fades
Look inside your heart for a vision anew
Don't ever take for granted
The senses with which you were blessed
Else should the time come for repossession
It will surely be too late for redress
That dull ache that lives behind the eyes
It feeds and takes strength once it burrows in
You must fight the war, the demon inside
There is so much to lose but far more to win
Now give second thought to what seems real
Peel the layers away to search the truth
First impressions can often mislead
Never be afraid to seek the proof
So save each precious day to a recess of your mind
The snow in the meadow, the sun on the sand
Family and friends, laughter and joy
Should the darkness descend it will help to withstand
Some vow that ignorance is blind
Others believe that love can be too
But as images blur and the definition fades
Look inside your heart for a vision anew
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07:30 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Blind yet seen
The world we live in
War and hate become one
Us in the middle
Leaders demand or trust
Knife in the back for each one of us
Protest for a new order
Hope for a new world
Bold people take action
For the world they wish to behold
Failure so known
Hurts to the core
The world is messed up
We are to blame for
Children of the future
Task per second
Guns in hand
Grenade in other
Here we go a new world order
Hope is lost!
The world we live in
War and hate become one
Us in the middle
Leaders demand or trust
Knife in the back for each one of us
Protest for a new order
Hope for a new world
Bold people take action
For the world they wish to behold
Failure so known
Hurts to the core
The world is messed up
We are to blame for
Children of the future
Task per second
Guns in hand
Grenade in other
Here we go a new world order
Hope is lost!
10:17 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Chris ~ :O:O Great stuff can we have more from you please?
Good on Zody, keep em coming
We now have some new poets
On this great here poem thread
G, Zody, Colin and Christopher
Reeling rhymes from in their head
As stated many times before
This threads the best to me
And reading verses and peoms
Well, it makes me feel happy
So here i want to thank you
For keeping this thread alive
I hope to see a whole lot more
And watching theses pages strive
~Paula~
Good on Zody, keep em coming
We now have some new poets
On this great here poem thread
G, Zody, Colin and Christopher
Reeling rhymes from in their head
As stated many times before
This threads the best to me
And reading verses and peoms
Well, it makes me feel happy
So here i want to thank you
For keeping this thread alive
I hope to see a whole lot more
And watching theses pages strive
~Paula~
14:21 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Wow brilliant poems and I get mention in one
Keep them coming guys
Keep them coming guys
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14:25 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k
14:33 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
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14:56 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
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15:05 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
RAMBO!!
Look at him go
Into the wild
Sword he wields
Fury in his eyes
Makes chicken from leaves
And angel delight from wood
He's a fighter
Love to be him if i could
People hate him with a passion
But you always see him in the latest fashion
My god he is dashing
Don't look to much you will get a bashing
Old he gets but still no Fin
Rambo will throw you in a bin
Over a fence or towards a shark
Watch you die
While leaving of a howlish bark
This poem so long
Makes me sleepy
Oh look spongebob is on!!
Look at him go
Into the wild
Sword he wields
Fury in his eyes
Makes chicken from leaves
And angel delight from wood
He's a fighter
Love to be him if i could
People hate him with a passion
But you always see him in the latest fashion
My god he is dashing
Don't look to much you will get a bashing
Old he gets but still no Fin
Rambo will throw you in a bin
Over a fence or towards a shark
Watch you die
While leaving of a howlish bark
This poem so long
Makes me sleepy
Oh look spongebob is on!!
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15:06 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
yeeeeeeeeeee another poem yippppppeeeeeeeeeeeeee
15:07 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
It's alright you didn't.....much
cheeky_chops said:
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
It's alright you didn't.....much
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15:08 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Cheeky_chops loves her poems
Just like i like my phones
Up all night giving hell
To make this poem page live till the end
I'm going to call you poem chief....Actully Co-poem chief...Cause paula will kill me lol
Just like i like my phones
Up all night giving hell
To make this poem page live till the end
I'm going to call you poem chief....Actully Co-poem chief...Cause paula will kill me lol
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15:09 Wed 18 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
It's alright you didn't.....much
oh dont now you set me off
pmsl
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
g_k said:
cheeky_chops said:
He meant keep them comming guys and girls didnt you g.k
I'm very sorry
I actually used "guys" as a generic term for both genders
But I shall now be more explicit
Keep them coming EVERYONE
ohhhhh im sorry didnt mean to upset you
It's alright you didn't.....much
oh dont now you set me off
pmsl
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07:56 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
PULLING TOOL
Bubbly Bubbly Oh so fine
Fun & chewey all the time
Fruity taste is what u are
Love ur flavour best by far
When im sad is when ur dull
I need ur taste to go on pull
Minty breath is what they like
Exept the girl they call the bike
Bubble Bubble u last not long
About the time it takes a song
Tho thats enough to make a move
Dance so mad, then go real smooth
Chew away for extra freshness
Smile away as if they're topless
Flash them pearls at a random chic
Take her home and flash ur...Bubble lol
Edited at 14:21 Thu 19/02/09 (GMT)
Bubbly Bubbly Oh so fine
Fun & chewey all the time
Fruity taste is what u are
Love ur flavour best by far
When im sad is when ur dull
I need ur taste to go on pull
Minty breath is what they like
Exept the girl they call the bike
Bubble Bubble u last not long
About the time it takes a song
Tho thats enough to make a move
Dance so mad, then go real smooth
Chew away for extra freshness
Smile away as if they're topless
Flash them pearls at a random chic
Take her home and flash ur...Bubble lol
Edited at 14:21 Thu 19/02/09 (GMT)
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11:54 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Woooo Fat Gets back on the poems
About time to
wb
About time to
wb
11:59 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Nice one Pete
Hope to be posting a new one myself later on if I can get a "last" verse
Hope to be posting a new one myself later on if I can get a "last" verse
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12:03 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Yeeeeeeeee 3 cheers for Grae
Hip Hip Hoorayyyyyyyyy
Cant wait to read this woooooo
Hip Hip Hoorayyyyyyyyy
Cant wait to read this woooooo
15:12 Thu 19 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Sharing
The things we share are so many
From toys in childhood to secrets when we're older
For your thoughts I'll give you a penny
The fashion for sharing never gets colder
A problem shared is a problem halved
Sharing an evening out, maybe a meal
With our friends, oh how we laughed
Telling each other how we feel
So share something with someone today
It will give you a nice warm feeling
A bag of sweets? what to share who can say?
Sometimes sharing leaves you reeling
So just grab a phone and talk to a friend
When you feel like doing something daring
There's no problem if their ear you bend
Tell them all about it, then your Sharing
The things we share are so many
From toys in childhood to secrets when we're older
For your thoughts I'll give you a penny
The fashion for sharing never gets colder
A problem shared is a problem halved
Sharing an evening out, maybe a meal
With our friends, oh how we laughed
Telling each other how we feel
So share something with someone today
It will give you a nice warm feeling
A bag of sweets? what to share who can say?
Sometimes sharing leaves you reeling
So just grab a phone and talk to a friend
When you feel like doing something daring
There's no problem if their ear you bend
Tell them all about it, then your Sharing
00:59 Fri 20 Feb 09 (GMT) [Link]
Pit ~ WOOOOOOOOO A pitty poem! Good stuff lol
Grae ~ FAB! More More!!
Zody ~ I pmsl @ your posts...
LMAO @ Oh look spongebob is on!!
Keep'em coming guys
Grae ~ FAB! More More!!
Zody ~ I pmsl @ your posts...
LMAO @ Oh look spongebob is on!!
Keep'em coming guys
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