Thank you, Andy!! :) xxx


ps.. Thank you, Paula! I may share some more in the future! :D

Edited at 01:51 Wed 8/10/08 (BST)

My pleasure

Edited at 01:52 Wed 8/10/08 (BST)

Wandering deep blue eyes,
staring at the moon-lit sky.

Alluring wishes twinkling,
on stars miles up on high.

Small spiraled ears,
ignoring condescending winds.

Desperate just to catch a glimpse,
of the hazy dream once again.

Hand pressed against the window,
with an imprint showing many paths.

Overcoming and adversity.

Beggin' for a fighting chance,
in uprisal from the dusty pane alas.

Window slides open,
without a tryin' resist.

Anticipation left high til'
suctioned out my lil toes.

Thick, mean gust.

Choked back to reality,
dreams mauled back to place.

Gaspin' for a breath.

Branches scratching,
at my pride!

Shoving window shut,

Wooosh!

Till tommorow...

then I'll try again. ;)


Princess25:Copyrighted(do not steal my work :P)

awww thats great!!

earlier i was listening to a right good song that'd fit in with that!!

Nice one princess

Prinny, They really ur own? Very Good!

Thanks Potty, Paula, and Andy!!!


Yes, I have always had a passion for creative writing. The first poem I wrote while reflecting on some of the many adventures I have had while traveling and the second poem was just expressing some of my innermost feelings at that point in time.

Glad you enjoyed...



Edited at 15:00 Wed 8/10/08 (BST)

I love this thread. Holds lots of special memories for me too :)

I enjoy reading them all Prinny

While reading back on this poem thread
Lots of memories float through my head

I think of people from way back when
We were all mates all posting on Gen

Some people here they still remain
But some have left and its not the same

Some got close and feelings took hold
Memories are more precious than gold

Cos you keep them all locked away
In your heart where they will stay

Whatever your reason for being here
Just have fun and spread some cheer

Chat with your mates and play some pool
Then soon you become a Funky Crazed Fool!


~Paula~

stole ya poem
cos theres no copyright
so go on
sue me and ill fight

lmao

LOL!

Tids you do a poem!

i just did one didnt you see
its right above you..silly
but just for you a ditty i will write
although im tired and feel like ......

so heres my best attempt just for you
i will refrain from using the word poo
oh i just said it silly me
maybe i need a wee

this poems goin nowhere no purpose
just rabbiting on ....just cos
so ill make it up a bit better
and create a better letter

Paula my mate on funkypool
she is also on facebook
Using it i feel such a fool
but she says...'tids look'
its not that hard you will see
once you get the hang of it
with the facebook family.

We all found it odd to understand
but we get there with a helping hand
loads of crushes from loads of folk
dont open them up, cos its just a joke
a crappy scam to empty your phone credit
if you're sad enough to open it.

Edited at 12:54 Fri 10/10/08 (BST)

OH WOO WOO TIDS! LOL I didnt think you'd do one

Thankyouuuuuuu luv it

madmike is great
it must be fate
cos when it gets late
madmike is still great



*Accepts the adulation surely coming my way after such a great poem*

madmike is a git
a true and proper twit
so early in the morn
hes still recovering from porn


Edited at 13:04 Fri 10/10/08 (BST)

Lmao...

There was a young lad named Adam
He was really a bit of a mad'un
Prowled around funkypool
Always acting the fool
Spose its better than being a Sad'un!


DUN DUN DUN!!!

there was a man from a bike shop
he carried a bottle of pop
But his engine went BOOM
and his friends left the room
Cos he was covered in Grade 2 synthetic motorbike oil!

there was a girl from liverpool
but she refused to say where so her friends thought her cool
MMT hunted her down
And told the whole town
Shes a junkie on funkypool

God im good

L M A O !!! Nutta

whos this bloke
he sounds like a joke
blowing up his motor
after flushing down a floater
using grade 2 indeed, what a fool
use pro4 is better for engine cool
synthetic a no no
semi? use that its better ya know

awesome...and i know it lol

Edited at 13:30 Fri 10/10/08 (BST)

HAHAHA


There was a fella named Tids
On his Bike he liked doing skids
He's such fun round this gaff
Makes a load of us laff
The daddy is older than all of us kids!