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justsumgirl
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16:22 Mon 28 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Thats great Luke!

Why havent u posted here b4 eh? OJ Good one
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20:11 Tue 29 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
In the darkness we lie
because here, I am sure we'll die
In this dread tench of doom
the germans make our tomb
all I can hear is silence

A sudden scream
disrupts my dream
as i scurry to getaway from a grenade
and I realize that i rather die by my own blade
and now there is silence

I hear a hiss
I wonder what could be this
I'm searching for my mask
"are you ok" they ask
and my vision fades...
and then there was silence
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20:12 Tue 29 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Me
A dismal, sad, gutted, wasteland
A land that's always cloudy
And it rains time to time
The river is dry, and the willows cry
And no animals romp or play
I just hope a day of sunshine will come


You
A torch held high
Burning holes in the sky
The sky is blue, and the grass is green
And the river is flowing well
The sun just shines, like orange rind
And the civilians seem to be doing well

Just a thought
Please send some sunshine here
Please make the storm clouds move
Or at least send some hope this way
Maybe it will be a sunny day
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20:13 Tue 29 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I'm here all alone in a dark space
All alone in this rotted place
I'm frightful and cold
The floor is covered in mold
And not a single soul is around


I cannot tell if it's day or night
All I see is dark, not even an once of light
What can break me free from the torment I endure
I can't take much more of this, I beg you, please, no more

Please open the cage and give me air to speak
So I must not live a life so dismal, so bleak


I have a site with all my poems on it if you guys want to read it, www.xanga.com/bloodreddead
justsumgirl
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20:27 Tue 29 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
They are great, ill check your site too
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20:22 Wed 30 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
thank you very much I'm glad you enjoy my poetry as much as I do writing it
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21:13 Wed 30 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I checked it.. Some good stuff there A A

( One i done a while back, but stil feel the same if not better)

MY STELL

You can call me crazy, call me sad
But im in love with a certain lad
Its online only but hes made me
As happy and content as can be

He truly knows me oh so well
My mood changes, he can tell
He knows exactly what to say
To brighten up my darkest day

He makes me feel really good
Do anything for me, yes he would
He says to me the sweetest things
Makes cupid tug at my heartstrings

These feelings i have are not new
But now im letting them shine thru
So i can let all you people see
Just what this man means to me
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21:14 Wed 30 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
CONTD

He is my sun, my moon, my stars,
My Saturn, Jupiter and my Mars
Hes my reason to smile each day
Only HIM can make me feel this way

Dont get me wrong weve had our fights
Ive sat there crying so many nights
Weve had people try to ruin us too
We are too strong we always pull thru

So there you have it in black and white
I LOVE a man i met on this site
Tho one day our online love will part
He will remain forever in my heart

Im sure you all know by now its Stell
He is THE ONE that makes my heart swell
You can ask me if care who knows
Do i heck my love for him glows.



3 ~ 8 ~ 1 ALWAYS

YOUR Paula xx

SOMETHING and NOTHING bab!

Edited at 02:16 Thu 31/07/08 (BST)
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22:22 Wed 30 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
wow I like those alot paula, and thanks again
justsumgirl
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08:30 Fri 1 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Thanks Arab


Stells New Pet


Todays the day Stell gets his new bird
He needs a name thats not too absurd
Maybe Joey, or Pecker or Flappster
Or Flange, Muffsterage or even Japster
He could also name that little bird Loyd
Rhymes with his doggy whos name is Floyd
He could call it Nora, after his mate Karri
Oh no cos its male, he cud call it Harry
Theres been a thread with some nominees
To name this bird whos aim it to please
My Stells home at been quiet as hell
Since his last birdy asleep it fell
So this new bird will bring him some cheer
Chirping and maybe talking so clear
No matter what he names his new friend
He'll be happy cos the silence will end
Anyway Stell, stop driving us insane
Do what John sed and just call it Shane!!
Theres just one more thing i wanna see
If he has a new BIRD is it to get rid of me!

(HA!)

~Paula~


justsumgirl
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08:33 Sat 2 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Stells New Pet pt2

At long last he brought it home
His new pet birdie ready to roam
And hey hey what do you know
He's called this birdy lil Gonzo
Its something to do with a huge beak
If its big will he be able to speak?
But that doesnt matter a tiny bit
As Long as feathers he does not spit
As long as he just sits and sings
Pecks a little and spreads his wings
And is some company for our Floyd
Since Rocky passed theres been a void
So dear Stell im so pleased for you
I hope Gonzo stops you feelin blue





~Paula~ x
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14:09 Sat 2 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Sing a song
And I'll play along
As long as you can carry a tune
If I look up don't worry,
I'm only staring at the moon
While your angelic voice rings out
I strange new tune comes about
And now the world is humming
To the notes I am strumming
And the problems seem to wash away
You keep sing and and the guitar I will play
And united the world and release a dove
With this gental song of love

this was the refrain (chours) of a song I wrote, I don't remember anything else, but it was song about a lonly guitar player falling in love with his best friend from his child hood, who sings obviously
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19:24 Sat 2 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
there once was a man from peru
who dreamed that he lived in his shoe
he woke up in the middle of the night
to see that he had a fright
that his dream had really come true

LEGEND LOL
justsumgirl
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11:22 Sun 3 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Good ones


Once again its on page three
Now ya's know why i miss Ste
If he was here i am so sure
That we wud have Poems galore

GUEVARA GUEVARA Plz come back
Get this thread back on track
We need you and your charming ways
We need you back just like the old days




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11:53 Sun 3 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
The sky is darkend of polution
The air is thick and grey
The water is green and brown
To my family's dismay
We wander far and wide
In the dryest droughts in may
I look into the sky
For rain I will pray
Demolished is our city
And there isn't much left say
There isn't food nor water
I hope end up as some animal's prey
justsumgirl
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13:27 Sun 3 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Good stuff again A Arab
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13:42 Sun 3 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
thanks....i think my recent poems are getting a little morbid
justsumgirl
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08:36 Mon 4 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Right ok, im back to leaving Title, you have to do a Poem about it...


Title is:

Wishes
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10:06 Mon 4 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Close your eyes, make some wishes galore
Wishes for happiness, for evermore
Wishes for people, that really do care
Wishes for friends, that are always there
Wishes for mates, who are here and afar
Wishes for that elusive falling star
Wishes for children, that suffer so much
Wishes they can reach out someone to touch
Wishes for people, here on this website
Wishes that some, weren't so full of spite
Wishes for family, those that are near
Wishes that they will not know any fear
My wishes are not full of money and greed
My wishes are for those, that have a need
A need for some luck, some love and some hope
And a good luck wish, for those who cant cope
I wish you all good health, and hope you are well
My wishes are now posted, from your old mate Stell

~Stell~

Oh one last Wish...My Paula are you there
My love i am here, and forever i will care
Been here before, my bloody good friend
My one last wish, Our love will not end.

xx 3~8~1
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11:29 Mon 4 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I wish I were in your place
I wish I were there to save you
I wish this never happend
I wish none of this were true

I wish I could of said goodbye
I wish that you didn't die
I did not foresee this happening
Not anyone and not

RIP Faith......
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