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justsumgirl
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20:53 Thu 24 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
HA! Well yano,,not just a pwiddy face :O :P *mwa icon*
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02:09 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
The light in which i travel too, has suddenly gone dark
the yearning feeling i feel too, now deep within my heart
for darkness now surrounds me, as you extinguish the flame
with nothing left to guide me, but the memory of your name
the burning hope i held within, now snuffed out cold and dark
as shadows now return to me, to occupy my heart
the journy that has bought me here, so close, but now is through
as i stand upon your threshold, as my thoughts now turn to you
i close my eyes in whispered prayer, the spirits keep you safe
and take you down the lightened path, in choices that you make.
and as i stand there in the cold, with nothing more to say,
i sadly turn away from you, and slowly walk away.
and as the sun begins to rise, i look back to you
and as the tears brim in my eyes, theres nothing left to do
from now, i walk this earth alone, in shadows, with the pain
for like the candle, my cold heart, will never burn again
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06:43 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Nice poem once again mate
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06:44 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Right Pit and weirdo





title for you,,,,Chipmonks
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06:46 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I dont know what a Chipmonk is )) 8-|
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06:47 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
oh ok then






erm..let me think







Pot Noodles,,,bet you know what that is dont you eh lmao
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06:47 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Once upon a time there were two skunks
Or were they really, chirpy chipmonks
They were silent all day
Not a word would they say
OH sorry, i thought you said monks


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06:49 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
stellaman said:
Once upon a time there were two skunks
Or were they really, chirpy chipmonks
They were silent all day
Not a word would they say
OH sorry, i thought you said monks




See pitty now you know what a chipmonk is lmao



yeeeeeeeeee way to go steely
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06:49 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
My Paula likes a canoodle
Whilst eating a lovely pot noodle
She said stell have a bite
I said no, tastes like sh***
I'd rather be stroking a poodle




Who's Steely??

Edited at 11:50 Fri 25/07/08 (BST)
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06:50 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Omg lmao



Stelly dont know how you do it,,but ive nearly weed



Nannas
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06:54 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
A Nanna is a nice colour yellow
Its taste is rather quite mellow
But its got no real juice
Some girls put it to misuse
And hide one under their pillow

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06:54 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
cheeky_chops said:
oh ok then






erm..let me think




Pot Noodles,,,bet you know what that is dont you eh lmao



PMSL!


Yar!


Potnoodles are amazing
They make my heart fly
Chicken, Beef and BBQ
Flavours that make me die!


Stick my Fork in the Pot
Swizzle for a good mouthful
Close eyes and capture the moment
I love me potnoodles - Sir Pitbull <3
justsumgirl
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07:41 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
The One - Loved your poem..great stuff, tho a lil sad.


LMAO @ yours Stell..great them

Oh Look at the passion in ur poems about food Pit HAHAHA..good ones..
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08:17 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
The One - Loved your poem..great stuff, tho a lil sad.


LMAO @ yours Stell..great them

Oh Look at the passion in ur poems about food Pit HAHAHA..good ones..


see what you mean Flange lmao
justsumgirl
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08:25 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
He cant help It Flaps! LOL


Ok..New title for everyone


FOOD Hmmmmmmmmmmm Yummy!
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08:26 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
He cant help It Flaps! LOL


Ok..New title for everyone


FOOD Hmmmmmmmmmmm Yummy!


Bet hes 1st one here


waits for the stampede from pit lmao
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08:47 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Now this isn't fair, you know i've been ill
You know i haven't eaten, and my stomach is still
I could murder a burger, with a nice slice of cheese
With plenty of chips, I could devour with ease
My mouth is now watering, at just such a thought
I've just had a pastie, wish a burger i'd bought
Three days without food, has done me right in
Am as weak as a kitten, and looking damn thin
But god help tonight, im out on the pop
With plenty of grub,oh my god, i won't stop
Decisions later on will have to be made
Indian or Chinese, what will make the grade
I reckon a curry, although, i dont know
That could make a mess, of my tender J-Lo
I'll stick to the old sweet and sour i think
The least that will do, is make my toilet stink
Right enough of this banter, im starting to drool
I do not want to make, meself look a fool
So without out further ado, i know what do now
Is go for the burger, made fresh from a cow...!!

~Stell~





Edited at 13:57 Fri 25/07/08 (BST)
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I woke up thinking today was the day
When all my pains and troubles would go away
But no such luck well not for me
Just seems like one more page in history
Why am I dying to live if im living to die,
Im trying to smile but its hard not to cry
If it werent for some mates dont think id be here
Cos they keep me going and fill me with cheer
You know who you are and I just want to say
Thanx for keeping me going day after day
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11:10 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Karri you are very special, one who i adore
Day after day, is what you should strive for
Im not saying that, because your my mate
But I am saying it, because you are great
Keep telling yourself, your dying to live
And while i am here, i'll give all i can give
I will make you laugh, i will make you smile
I will make your time here, all the worthwhile
So keep up the fight, i know you are strong
I can feel it in you, ive known all along
One more little thing, you can do for me
Is never feel down, what will be, will be
Keep that chin up, and smile my friend
You will get through this, there will be no end
Only he has the answers, that great man above
So keep being yourself, the Karri we all love

~Stell~

.........NO!!......i'm gonna for ya x
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11:29 Fri 25 Jul 08 (BST)  [Link]  
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