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08:06 Sun 12 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Erdez lives to survive another day \m/ (0_o) \m/
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13:27 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
'BUMPED' Anyone doing a Poem then??
*Sighs* 'Twas on page 2
*Sighs* 'Twas on page 2
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14:09 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
i will bab give me 1/2 hour to sort myself out ok (sts)
Edited at 19:10 Mon 13/08/07 (BST)
Edited at 19:10 Mon 13/08/07 (BST)
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14:41 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Today
Now then, let me see, what has gone on here today
While I've been at work, and you've been at play
Ive decided to watch, as I sit here and linger
Staying well clear, of erdez's finger
The usual people, have been there and about
Even My Paula , the smelly old trout
Steph has been here, pulled a sickie off work
And even Ben, the king of the shirk
John has popped in, looking for goss
Driver's deleted, now there is a loss
No sign of Ste, Now where is that fella
No doubt at the barbers, getting treated by Wella
Now my phone is going, I've just missed a caller
But that can wait, I'm composing for Paula
She demanded a poem, and that's why I'm here
Just to make her smile, and give her some cheer
Now I've settled in, for the rest of the night
The dog has been fed, he's now having a bite
Well that is my day, in a small nutshell
Good evening to all, I hope your all well.
~Stell~
Edited at 19:42 Mon 13/08/07 (BST)
Now then, let me see, what has gone on here today
While I've been at work, and you've been at play
Ive decided to watch, as I sit here and linger
Staying well clear, of erdez's finger
The usual people, have been there and about
Even My Paula , the smelly old trout
Steph has been here, pulled a sickie off work
And even Ben, the king of the shirk
John has popped in, looking for goss
Driver's deleted, now there is a loss
No sign of Ste, Now where is that fella
No doubt at the barbers, getting treated by Wella
Now my phone is going, I've just missed a caller
But that can wait, I'm composing for Paula
She demanded a poem, and that's why I'm here
Just to make her smile, and give her some cheer
Now I've settled in, for the rest of the night
The dog has been fed, he's now having a bite
Well that is my day, in a small nutshell
Good evening to all, I hope your all well.
~Stell~
Edited at 19:42 Mon 13/08/07 (BST)
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15:00 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOO Piggy Boooo
PMSL @ My Paula the smelly Trout, and the ste fella getting treated by Wella!!
Loved it bab Thankyou *HUGS*
PMSL @ My Paula the smelly Trout, and the ste fella getting treated by Wella!!
Loved it bab Thankyou *HUGS*
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15:52 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Orchid
To miss u like crazy seems almost surreal,
I wrote you a poem to say how I feel,
Ive smiled since we chatted the very first day,
To make me feel special is always your way,
An email, a message a simple hello,
How much they delight me u will never know,
We'll meet hun, quite soon of that im so sure,
Cause the love that I feel seems so very pure,
I hope that today has been one of the best,
So far would say homer simpson, u know the rest,
I need u, I want u, I'll do all I can,
To live up to the billing of ure fairytale man!!!
To miss u like crazy seems almost surreal,
I wrote you a poem to say how I feel,
Ive smiled since we chatted the very first day,
To make me feel special is always your way,
An email, a message a simple hello,
How much they delight me u will never know,
We'll meet hun, quite soon of that im so sure,
Cause the love that I feel seems so very pure,
I hope that today has been one of the best,
So far would say homer simpson, u know the rest,
I need u, I want u, I'll do all I can,
To live up to the billing of ure fairytale man!!!
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16:11 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
WOW!
Thats Brill War!!
She will love it am sure
war_criminal said:
Orchid
To miss u like crazy seems almost surreal,
I wrote you a poem to say how I feel,
Ive smiled since we chatted the very first day,
To make me feel special is always your way,
An email, a message a simple hello,
How much they delight me u will never know,
We'll meet hun, quite soon of that im so sure,
Cause the love that I feel seems so very pure,
I hope that today has been one of the best,
So far would say homer simpson, u know the rest,
I need u, I want u, I'll do all I can,
To live up to the billing of ure fairytale man!!!
To miss u like crazy seems almost surreal,
I wrote you a poem to say how I feel,
Ive smiled since we chatted the very first day,
To make me feel special is always your way,
An email, a message a simple hello,
How much they delight me u will never know,
We'll meet hun, quite soon of that im so sure,
Cause the love that I feel seems so very pure,
I hope that today has been one of the best,
So far would say homer simpson, u know the rest,
I need u, I want u, I'll do all I can,
To live up to the billing of ure fairytale man!!!
WOW!
Thats Brill War!!
She will love it am sure
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16:13 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Mice one Stella.
Great peom war, we want more from you mate!
Great peom war, we want more from you mate!
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17:47 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
When you brushed past my way, I felt a chill,
A cold one that made me stand so very still.
It wasn't the wind for the sun shone bright,
And the day was so early - so far away from night.
A smell lingered in the air, a scent so nice,
It had a hint of a flower, a hint of some spice.
Perfume no doubt, then the wind came from the north,
Hit me in the back, and pushed my heart forth.
I took a slow step, towards your direction,
And I stopped to admire, your beautiful complexion.
As each heart beat went by, my excitement grew,
I long just to speak out - if you only knew!
The rain came down, and I stood on that spot,
For yor eleagant presence still kept me hot.
I floated on air, the rest of the way,
Now I cant help but think of you all day.
Still we haven't spoke, you dont know how I feel,
But I can assure you that this love is real.
I long to speak to you, just once in this time,
And I still dream of the day when you will be mine.
A cold one that made me stand so very still.
It wasn't the wind for the sun shone bright,
And the day was so early - so far away from night.
A smell lingered in the air, a scent so nice,
It had a hint of a flower, a hint of some spice.
Perfume no doubt, then the wind came from the north,
Hit me in the back, and pushed my heart forth.
I took a slow step, towards your direction,
And I stopped to admire, your beautiful complexion.
As each heart beat went by, my excitement grew,
I long just to speak out - if you only knew!
The rain came down, and I stood on that spot,
For yor eleagant presence still kept me hot.
I floated on air, the rest of the way,
Now I cant help but think of you all day.
Still we haven't spoke, you dont know how I feel,
But I can assure you that this love is real.
I long to speak to you, just once in this time,
And I still dream of the day when you will be mine.
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17:56 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
OMG!!! that poem is soooo nice ste! i love it
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19:06 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Ding ding dong here's another bit of script,
I've just had a vision that I must depict.
About a cosy night in, with the fire on low,
Me telling a gorgeous brunette that I love her so.
She takes off her jacket, and loosens her hair,
My mouth drops open and my eyes do stare.
I hold out her hands,and put them in mine,
The grandfather clock strikes once for half-past nine.
The flames in the fire flicker, the candles all burn,
I hold my voice steady, and I speak slow and firm.
The movie plays softly, a horror film I think,
I take out the chocolates and pour her a drink.
Then its a cuddle up in front of the fire,
It's not late enough for us both to retire.
My hand holds hers as mine cradles her close,
I dont explain my affection as she already knows.
She looks up to my eyes, the deep brown eyes of mine,
In the candle light and darkness she looks mighty fine.
A very special night we spent, the vision now goes,
Hopefully I'll dream this tonight, when my eyes close.
I've just had a vision that I must depict.
About a cosy night in, with the fire on low,
Me telling a gorgeous brunette that I love her so.
She takes off her jacket, and loosens her hair,
My mouth drops open and my eyes do stare.
I hold out her hands,and put them in mine,
The grandfather clock strikes once for half-past nine.
The flames in the fire flicker, the candles all burn,
I hold my voice steady, and I speak slow and firm.
The movie plays softly, a horror film I think,
I take out the chocolates and pour her a drink.
Then its a cuddle up in front of the fire,
It's not late enough for us both to retire.
My hand holds hers as mine cradles her close,
I dont explain my affection as she already knows.
She looks up to my eyes, the deep brown eyes of mine,
In the candle light and darkness she looks mighty fine.
A very special night we spent, the vision now goes,
Hopefully I'll dream this tonight, when my eyes close.
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19:12 Mon 13 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Ohhhhhhhhhh *Claps* I luv them soooooooooooo much!
MORE MORE!..
Oh You want a Title?
MORE MORE!..
Oh You want a Title?
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05:25 Tue 14 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
WOW!
Thats Brill War!!
She will love it am sure
I do love it, it's brilliant. Thanks hun xx
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war_criminal said:
Orchid
To miss u like crazy seems almost surreal,
I wrote you a poem to say how I feel,
Ive smiled since we chatted the very first day,
To make me feel special is always your way,
An email, a message a simple hello,
How much they delight me u will never know,
We'll meet hun, quite soon of that im so sure,
Cause the love that I feel seems so very pure,
I hope that today has been one of the best,
So far would say homer simpson, u know the rest,
I need u, I want u, I'll do all I can,
To live up to the billing of ure fairytale man!!!
To miss u like crazy seems almost surreal,
I wrote you a poem to say how I feel,
Ive smiled since we chatted the very first day,
To make me feel special is always your way,
An email, a message a simple hello,
How much they delight me u will never know,
We'll meet hun, quite soon of that im so sure,
Cause the love that I feel seems so very pure,
I hope that today has been one of the best,
So far would say homer simpson, u know the rest,
I need u, I want u, I'll do all I can,
To live up to the billing of ure fairytale man!!!
WOW!
Thats Brill War!!
She will love it am sure
I do love it, it's brilliant. Thanks hun xx
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05:43 Tue 14 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
It's just you Lou , u must get my creative juices flowing hun.
Im delighted you like it. More to follow mwah xxxx
Im delighted you like it. More to follow mwah xxxx
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09:20 Tue 14 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
woooooo!! nice poems captain ste..totally love them!
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17:31 Tue 14 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
Sitting here all by myself
this feeling in me I've never felt
thoughts swarm my head which i cannot tame
and i know for sure that you're to blame
why are you so far away?
don't you see this gets worse day by day?
i need you here, i need you now
you said soon, i remember your vow
time goes on, time goes by
i'll wait till we meet eye to eye
no need to rush, no need for haste
i'll wait for the day we meet face to face..
this feeling in me I've never felt
thoughts swarm my head which i cannot tame
and i know for sure that you're to blame
why are you so far away?
don't you see this gets worse day by day?
i need you here, i need you now
you said soon, i remember your vow
time goes on, time goes by
i'll wait till we meet eye to eye
no need to rush, no need for haste
i'll wait for the day we meet face to face..
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17:34 Tue 14 Aug 07 (BST) [Link]
awwwwww nice Angie !! New poets wooooohooooo
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