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justsumgirl
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14:04 Mon 22 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Ste, Thankyou so much, that great that i love it.

I REALLY miss your poems, ur posts on BC and Our chats yano!

*hugs*
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14:05 Mon 22 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
mr_guevara said:
Well it seems things have changed, our Paula's in hell,
Going through turmoil without her man stell.
He's such a mate, we had such great times,
As he posted jokes and I posted my rhymes.
The reason he left, I cannot beguile,
For I haven't been on this site for a while.
Yes I've been absent, without poems here,
I moved back to uni to indulge in beer.
But anyways I'm babbling, this is for a mate,
A lad who I've known a while - who i think is great.
Always on hand to crack a joke when your down,
Or have a good chat with when no-ones around.
Some may think its farfetched, being in love online,
For instance the commitment is no virtue of mine.
But I guess love can happen through an internet page,
Some people have fallen in love for an age.
This one-off poem from me ask's for a favour,
To ask a mate to look in his heart and decide to savour,
His love for our Paula, she must be so down,
So come on stell mate, dont let your love drown.



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03:48 Tue 23 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
woops back to page 1 now







stella hurry up and get ur erm back on here
justsumgirl
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08:02 Tue 23 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Stell is back and i cant wait
For him to do a poem or eight
First he has a few good aims
Of playing, erm, a hundred games
So come on mate come do ur thing
Get back to poems back in the swing
We have all really missed you so
We dont ever ever want you to go!

TA DAAAAAAAAAAAA
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08:07 Tue 23 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
lol
justsumgirl
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10:03 Tue 23 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Ste, Stella told me to thankyou on his behalf:

(In Stells voice)
"Nice one mate, that was superb"


Thankyou Ste
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20:09 Tue 23 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
There's this guy we all know
everytime he comes he seems to put on a show
with either poetry or jokes, making us all laugh
now that he's gone, these thing are of his behalf

Hope everything's okay
as to whatever had happened
but hurry on back
cuz your presence, everyone is missing

Especially a certain someone
as you may all know
his sudden disappearance
caused her a lot of sorrow...

~Ang~

we miss ya Stell
justsumgirl
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05:30 Wed 24 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Aw Angie thats lovely *hugs*

He will soon be back posting chic





*shouts*
"OI TF Get them games played.....NOWWW!!"
justsumgirl
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05:42 Thu 25 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Stell only has two games to go
Till he can post here yano
*Claps* omg i cant wait
Cos his Poems are so great







Wahhhhh hoooooooooooooooo
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02:20 Fri 26 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
angie__nyc said:
There's this guy we all know
everytime he comes he seems to put on a show
with either poetry or jokes, making us all laugh
now that he's gone, these thing are of his behalf

Hope everything's okay
as to whatever had happened
but hurry on back
cuz your presence, everyone is missing

Especially a certain someone
as you may all know
his sudden disappearance
caused her a lot of sorrow...

~Ang~

we miss ya Stell


Back now Angie, thx for the poem *hugs*

Paula TITLE........!!
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20:51 Fri 26 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I knew you were the one,
When you said hello to me.
My heart felt something,
It knew you held the key.

I can't stop thinking of you,
You're on my mind all the time.
No matter what I had to do.
I just had to make you mine.

You are in all my dreams,
When I close my eyes at night.
I dream of you kissing me,
As you are holding me tight.

See, you're the only one for me,
I knew this right from the start.
I'll love you forever,
You're wrapped around my heart. ♥
justsumgirl
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08:55 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
angie__nyc said:
I knew you were the one,
When you said hello to me.
My heart felt something,
It knew you held the key.

I can't stop thinking of you,
You're on my mind all the time.
No matter what I had to do.
I just had to make you mine.

You are in all my dreams,
When I close my eyes at night.
I dream of you kissing me,
As you are holding me tight.

See, you're the only one for me,
I knew this right from the start.
I'll love you forever,
You're wrapped around my heart. ♥


I Luv that Ang *hugs*



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Hangovers / hungover
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10:20 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Friends are forever,
Through thick and through thin,
Through good times and bad,
No matter how grim.

They'll pick you up,
When you're feeling sad,
Always the right words,
Even if you're mad.

A Friend is genuine,
Compromising and true,
An honest opinion,
When I'm feeling blue.

No need to say sorry ,
You're always my friend ,
No matter what happens,
Right 'till the end.

A solid foundation,
Never to break,
A bond so strong,
You can't even fake.

No matter what happens,
Through time and space,
I know you'll be there,
With your heavenly grace.

I'll love you forever ,
No compromise , no ties ,
'till i see you again ,
And my heart will rise.

Someday you'll need me ,
And i'll be there ,
To care and to honour,
A friendship that's rare.



Dedicate this to a special lady , you know who . Also to all the poets for some awesome pieces they've posted . Keep it up !



Steve . x x
justsumgirl
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10:42 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
WOW Mash Fab that more from you please
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10:46 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Tnx Paula , i 've known about u for ages but we've never spoke 'till 2day , ty for the comment, much appreciated .Keep it up too , some gr8 stuff goin on here l8tly !
justsumgirl
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10:49 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
OOER! What ya mean youve known about me for ages!? PMSL @ That

This is My fave Thread Mash You shud join in with the titles that i leave
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10:54 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
I've always used other threads , soz . Never been interested in poetry until my heart was re-set alight
justsumgirl
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10:57 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
Ahh am with ya.


Well to whoever re-lit ur hearts need Thanking cos that poem was great.



MORE MORE!!!
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11:26 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
aw steve thats so lovely x x thanks lol
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11:37 Sat 27 Oct 07 (BST)  [Link]  
yw , tnx for still being there . x x
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