altogether now, "aaaawwwwww"

If you like them, try these! I adore love poems:

http://www2.xlibris.com/bookstore/book_excerpt.asp?bookid=10046

For all you lovers out there!

Aww, and here's me thinking that came from your heart, when really it came from some-one elses

OMG The one I love emma done is on that page John!???


Anywas, i read them all so keep them coming (STS)

did i say i wrote it? i was just showing some poems

claire, I never told u how I truly feel
u mean to me a great deal
u are my eternal sunshine
Especially for u I created this rhyme

claire, u are unbelievably beautiful
For u I would risk dying in duel
The moment I saw u my heart was sold
We fit together like a nut and bolt

claire, u mean so much to me
I never knew this could be
I anxiously await our time ahead
For now, I keep dreaming of you instead

All of u is what I need
I hope we will soon meet
This poem has come to an end
Remember tht, without u, my heart feels bent

Great poem gy_casual!

(yet another stalker for claire!)(jk)

Is this real or am I dreaming?
This whole house has lost its feeling
There is nobody around
So I must be dreaming
For once in my life there is silence here
In fact it's so quite I'm filled with fear
I'm so scared now
It's like they all disappeared
I close my eyes then what do I see
A house that's full of misery
Everyone is in the house now
And my mum is standing in front of me
I call out her name but nothing comes out
I try so hard that I even shout
But she ignores me and gets the shopping
I don't understand what this is about
A few minutes later I open my eyes
Everyone is in suits and wearing black ties
But still I can't speak
So I sit down and cry
I touch the walls but soon I shiver
Because I can feel the message it delivers
I don't understand the message
It says we will love you forever
In a state of confusion I sit on my bed
And try to sort out what's going on in my head
I see my mum weeping and holding my teddy
Now I just realised that I am actually dead

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I LOVE THEM ALL

*waits for more*

ill do 1 soon paula oki?

Yay!! Okies Devvo

Wooooooooooo!! i LOVE them all too!!

Oh by the way that poem ^^^ was dedicated to James Hills 01/09/1990-07/03/2002 he was only 11. Died in his sleep from a brain haemorrhage.

Awwwwww Thats a lovely poem The_end

m8 thts a gd poem.. kinda upsettin aswell to think he was only 11!.. just makes you think when its your time ( does me anyway)

aww wow thnx Shaun, what did i do to suddenly deserve poems like that...never knew u had it in u!! They are brilliant!

TOLD YA SHAUN.....she likes them yay!!!!!

well... i try

Well done ..they was good

To me my love
is here to give
unaffected passion
together we begin
with sensual embrace
butterflies together
no more emptyness
me and you forever.

A love like ours
i thought would be unbroken
but somehow to you
i was just an esteemed token.
Good in bed
was that all it was?
Now forever
my love is lost.
No more happiness,
senses have gone
vision of us together
thought we'd last long.

(i'm not that great, but that only took 4 mins!)