Thats one of Ste's isnt it?
(Mr Guevar's)?


Told ya hes great at them

yea it is one of ste's

its well good

Ive got some faves what hes done...luv them. Hey u do a poem while ya here

i cant do poems lmao im rubbish

I was....then i startedgetting idea's from the other poems..lol...TRY!

there was a girl called justsumgirl
shes the nicest girl you will meet
she loves the poems ste does for her
there a real treat


well there ya go i tried i aint very long i know

YAY!!!!!! Thats fab...lol thanks

woooooooooo go me lol

ill do another 1 2mora ill be much longer

Yes.Go You..lol Ok mate

Woooo gr8 poems!!

There was a youmg man named john
whos son was an australisan
when john got old withered and died
his son didn't sweat smile or cry
he moved away to the country of crims
where his father had told him
''there bad ask jim''
but he didn't listen, and moved away
lived in a shanti town when a storm came,
he met his maker
some guy named billy
he turned out to be very silly
and happily they lept
through sea and gold
and together they grew
bold and old
this story has no meaning
no vision no guide
it's crap but written by me
1_eye

Edited at 10:07 Wed 7/02/07 (GMT)

PMSL Love it John!!!

Ha me too WOO WOOOOO John.....

WHY is it i feel like this
WHY is it you i miss
WHY is it my hearts sore
WHY cant i my feelings ignore

HOW can i not feel low
HOW will i ever ever know
HOW will i ever gain pace
HOW will i ever replace ur face

WHEN will i feel less sad
WHEN will i stop feeling mad
WHEN will i quit feeling blue
WHEN will i be over you.




Edited at 21:49 Wed 7/02/07 (GMT)

wooooo go paula thats really godd

this is from the heart

3 years ago you passed away
sitting in my room wanting you to play
then a call comes in
telling me your not well
to the hospital we go
there you are lieing motionless
i burst in to tears
i miss you grandad
i wish you were still here

RIP GRANDAD

Edited at 21:00 Wed 7/02/07 (GMT)

awwwww *hugs* ....gr8 poem tho!!

Peter..so sorry mate......FAB Poem

one minute your here
next minute your gone
next thing i see
i cant believe
your with him
what a cheat
i hate you for this
ill never sleep

lol if thats makes any sense its the best i could do at the moment my brain aint working properly lol

It makes sense

Wooo we have another poet!

*chants* I'll never let this thread die ta da da..ta da daaaaaaa