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11:00 Fri 12 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
Everytime i think of you
I wonder what the hell to do
I feel so confused, lonely and down
Things were different when u were around
I try to act like theres nothing wrong
But its not the same since u've been gone
My heart feels empty, my eyes look sad
I long for the times that we once had
Theres never a day your not in my thoughts
But thinking of you leaves me feeling distraught
I love you so much, it makes my heart ache
But your feelings for me i think you did fake
Maybe next lifetime we'l meet once again
So this is goodbye, till if, maybe, when!
Loved ur poem paula! More More!!
I wonder what the hell to do
I feel so confused, lonely and down
Things were different when u were around
I try to act like theres nothing wrong
But its not the same since u've been gone
My heart feels empty, my eyes look sad
I long for the times that we once had
Theres never a day your not in my thoughts
But thinking of you leaves me feeling distraught
I love you so much, it makes my heart ache
But your feelings for me i think you did fake
Maybe next lifetime we'l meet once again
So this is goodbye, till if, maybe, when!
Loved ur poem paula! More More!!
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20:38 Fri 12 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
And i loved that one! OMG if thats true Claire..are you me?? pmsl...
Me and Claire must feel the same
Our feelings on this poem game
Are they all fiction, are they true
Or are we playing games like you
I know my poems mean each word
Claire are yours really heard?
Cos if urs are true like mine
Were more alike when were online!!
Me and Claire must feel the same
Our feelings on this poem game
Are they all fiction, are they true
Or are we playing games like you
I know my poems mean each word
Claire are yours really heard?
Cos if urs are true like mine
Were more alike when were online!!
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21:28 Fri 12 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
Pmsl paula!!
Yes Paula its tru, i mean each word
But im a little unsure if they'l ever be heard
I think the words fall on deaf ears
It feels like ive felt this way for years
A reply would be nice, a hint how they felt
It would make me so happy and my heart would melt
No more words do i have left to say right now
So il end it here and take a bow!!
Poor ending! but its late (thats my excuse)
Yes Paula its tru, i mean each word
But im a little unsure if they'l ever be heard
I think the words fall on deaf ears
It feels like ive felt this way for years
A reply would be nice, a hint how they felt
It would make me so happy and my heart would melt
No more words do i have left to say right now
So il end it here and take a bow!!
Poor ending! but its late (thats my excuse)
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21:35 Fri 12 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
So we are alike,,thats so true..
Your like me and im like you
We both miss ppl oh so dear
And long to hold them oh so near
Maybe one day we will be fine
One will be yours,,the other be mine
But if not at least we tried
The only thing hurting was our pride.
Edited at 04:15 Sat 13/01/07 (GMT)
Your like me and im like you
We both miss ppl oh so dear
And long to hold them oh so near
Maybe one day we will be fine
One will be yours,,the other be mine
But if not at least we tried
The only thing hurting was our pride.
Edited at 04:15 Sat 13/01/07 (GMT)
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03:32 Sat 13 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
AWWWWWWW! Claire that poem was really good!
You make me happy you make me sad
when i'm around you i'm sure to be glad
everyone said it wouldn't last that we were a fad
the more it said, our love grew fast
forever i am true always to my word
honest john, love humour is heard
if my heart brakes because of you
the poor little perpitrator
will be left to rue
this is my love the way i describe
and it's written for you from me 1_eye.
Sorry, i'm not that good at poems!
You make me happy you make me sad
when i'm around you i'm sure to be glad
everyone said it wouldn't last that we were a fad
the more it said, our love grew fast
forever i am true always to my word
honest john, love humour is heard
if my heart brakes because of you
the poor little perpitrator
will be left to rue
this is my love the way i describe
and it's written for you from me 1_eye.
Sorry, i'm not that good at poems!
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07:06 Sat 13 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
Woooo that was gr8 John...More from u too pls!
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08:52 Sat 13 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
All Great poems...but im sadly still missing guevara's
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20:52 Mon 15 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
I've just woke up
I can hardly see
The computer screen
Staring back at me
I'm all alone
I sit here feeling blue
Too much time to think
About me and you
Mayb i should go
Back to my comfy bed
Rest my tired eyes
And my weary head
Night Night all
See u when i wake
With another poem
That i'l try and make!
I can hardly see
The computer screen
Staring back at me
I'm all alone
I sit here feeling blue
Too much time to think
About me and you
Mayb i should go
Back to my comfy bed
Rest my tired eyes
And my weary head
Night Night all
See u when i wake
With another poem
That i'l try and make!
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05:08 Wed 17 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
It's late morning, almost afternoon
I'm all alone like an egg with no spoon
I hope to see you all again
Morning, afternoon, evening, soon!
Short and sweet cause i'm not that great at poems! But really where is everyone?
I'm all alone like an egg with no spoon
I hope to see you all again
Morning, afternoon, evening, soon!
Short and sweet cause i'm not that great at poems! But really where is everyone?
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07:30 Wed 17 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
Woooo! Well done John...keep trying they do get easier!
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10:31 Wed 17 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
userpics.....
i sit here some days with john and claire
one with one eye, and one with no hair
ones into rugby, and one into pigs
oh,and poor old tidsy, who's given up cigs.
i sit here some days with john and claire
one with one eye, and one with no hair
ones into rugby, and one into pigs
oh,and poor old tidsy, who's given up cigs.
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12:03 Thu 18 Jan 07 (GMT) [Link]
Well i thank you miss steph
and 1_eye, AKA, meff !
these poems in jest
I think are the best
But stop shouting, before i go deaf !!
and 1_eye, AKA, meff !
these poems in jest
I think are the best
But stop shouting, before i go deaf !!
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