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18:07 Fri 15 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
We meeted and greeted, shoock hands like its no biggie
Sat down and ordered drinks, by now I wasnt that picky
A pint, a large wine stood standing ontop warm,
As we laughed about things, It really went down a storm!
Wanting her alone for a photo, for my keeps sake
Was more of a mission I planned, but I was willing to take
Skiving off into a quiet room, The camera was set to go
She stood infront of my beating heart, I couldnt help but show
She felt the same as she turned, smiling, looking fine
I held her closely, as our lips touched for the first time
My heart raced faster, as we kissed alittle more
But all of a sudden, we were eyeing up the door
A fire had broken out, It was time to leave now
We should of ran infact, but how could I, How?
I held this amazing girl, tight and close to me
As we listened to people's feet run to safety
Noticing a small window, at the back of this room
We knew we had time, before we met our doom
We kissed some more and sparked eachothers eyes
ready for a passionate taking of the prize
Thick white smoke began easing through the door
The bottom, the sides, even the key hole for sure
Panic set in as it reached our feet,
I now KNEW this night could not be complete
The window we looked, we dashed with no rest
Locked with no key.....Jesus!.....Is this a test?
Elbowing the glass as the fire broke through
Lifing her up catching an eye full, Woo Hoo!
Sat down and ordered drinks, by now I wasnt that picky
A pint, a large wine stood standing ontop warm,
As we laughed about things, It really went down a storm!
Wanting her alone for a photo, for my keeps sake
Was more of a mission I planned, but I was willing to take
Skiving off into a quiet room, The camera was set to go
She stood infront of my beating heart, I couldnt help but show
She felt the same as she turned, smiling, looking fine
I held her closely, as our lips touched for the first time
My heart raced faster, as we kissed alittle more
But all of a sudden, we were eyeing up the door
A fire had broken out, It was time to leave now
We should of ran infact, but how could I, How?
I held this amazing girl, tight and close to me
As we listened to people's feet run to safety
Noticing a small window, at the back of this room
We knew we had time, before we met our doom
We kissed some more and sparked eachothers eyes
ready for a passionate taking of the prize
Thick white smoke began easing through the door
The bottom, the sides, even the key hole for sure
Panic set in as it reached our feet,
I now KNEW this night could not be complete
The window we looked, we dashed with no rest
Locked with no key.....Jesus!.....Is this a test?
Elbowing the glass as the fire broke through
Lifing her up catching an eye full, Woo Hoo!
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18:08 Fri 15 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
She fell to the ground and stared, eyes awake
Biting her nails as I tried to escape
But I was too wide and couldnt fit
So a ciggy I sparked thinking, what a twit!
The door smashed open with a man dressed in Yellow
As much as I tried I couldnt even say, "Hello"
Safely taken and away I went, I was lucky and could of been worse
And now Im in some hospital bed, waiting for my sexy nurse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by forum moderator hothead_bob, at 23:53 Sat 16/04/11 (BST)
Biting her nails as I tried to escape
But I was too wide and couldnt fit
So a ciggy I sparked thinking, what a twit!
The door smashed open with a man dressed in Yellow
As much as I tried I couldnt even say, "Hello"
Safely taken and away I went, I was lucky and could of been worse
And now Im in some hospital bed, waiting for my sexy nurse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by forum moderator hothead_bob, at 23:53 Sat 16/04/11 (BST)
18:55 Fri 15 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
That was beautiful Pete
How do you keep it so neat?
At last a knew poet
Im not alone ... i didnt know it!!
How do you keep it so neat?
At last a knew poet
Im not alone ... i didnt know it!!
19:58 Fri 15 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Well an hour has past
So guess it did not last
I will soldier on
Until im at work, then im gone
So guess it did not last
I will soldier on
Until im at work, then im gone
02:19 Sat 16 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Paula i hope ur sat steady
Cos i just got u a dedi
Go on take a look-see
I know u may say deary me
I won it fair and square
So question the authenticity dnt u dare
I had this all planned
So my plan workd grand
Edited by forum moderator hothead_bob, at 23:51 Sat 16/04/11 (BST)
Cos i just got u a dedi
Go on take a look-see
I know u may say deary me
I won it fair and square
So question the authenticity dnt u dare
I had this all planned
So my plan workd grand
Edited by forum moderator hothead_bob, at 23:51 Sat 16/04/11 (BST)
03:48 Sat 16 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
WOOSI haha thanks, i feel spesh :D:D
Pit ~ :O:O:O Your talents are wasted! That was proper fab that bab haha...not what i expected at all..love it
fry06 said:
I quite like the dizzy blonde
Alot of men are also fond
No need to judge by hair colour
People like you make things fuller
Bet you make everybody smile and grin
Which tbh is always a win
Alot of men are also fond
No need to judge by hair colour
People like you make things fuller
Bet you make everybody smile and grin
Which tbh is always a win
WOOSI haha thanks, i feel spesh :D:D
Pit ~ :O:O:O Your talents are wasted! That was proper fab that bab haha...not what i expected at all..love it
03:48 Sat 16 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
WOOSI haha thanks, i feel spesh :D:D
Pit ~ :O:O:O Your talents are wasted! That was proper fab that bab haha...not what i expected at all..love it
fry06 said:
I quite like the dizzy blonde
Alot of men are also fond
No need to judge by hair colour
People like you make things fuller
Bet you make everybody smile and grin
Which tbh is always a win
Alot of men are also fond
No need to judge by hair colour
People like you make things fuller
Bet you make everybody smile and grin
Which tbh is always a win
WOOSI haha thanks, i feel spesh :D:D
Pit ~ :O:O:O Your talents are wasted! That was proper fab that bab haha...not what i expected at all..love it
03:51 Sat 16 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
WOOSI haha thanks, i feel spesh :D:D
Pit ~ :O:O:O Your talents are wasted! That was proper fab that bab haha...not what i expected at all..love it
Worth double post??
justsumgirl said:
fry06 said:
I quite like the dizzy blonde
Alot of men are also fond
No need to judge by hair colour
People like you make things fuller
Bet you make everybody smile and grin
Which tbh is always a win
Alot of men are also fond
No need to judge by hair colour
People like you make things fuller
Bet you make everybody smile and grin
Which tbh is always a win
WOOSI haha thanks, i feel spesh :D:D
Pit ~ :O:O:O Your talents are wasted! That was proper fab that bab haha...not what i expected at all..love it
Worth double post??
18:12 Sat 16 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
I see nobodys been on for a while
Guess ur enjoying the weekend in style.
As for me im working again
Jealousy i will refrain
All i want is a Leeds win
If we lose i'll hit the gin
Guess i'll hope and pray
Leeds will be back one day
Guess ur enjoying the weekend in style.
As for me im working again
Jealousy i will refrain
All i want is a Leeds win
If we lose i'll hit the gin
Guess i'll hope and pray
Leeds will be back one day
20:41 Sat 16 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Well time for me to go back to work
No chance for me to shurk
What will i have to cook
May just be a breast of duck
So i will bid you goodbye for now
Will come back later, probably to a row
But i think i will say
Some may not take this Ok
Man u
are poo
No chance for me to shurk
What will i have to cook
May just be a breast of duck
So i will bid you goodbye for now
Will come back later, probably to a row
But i think i will say
Some may not take this Ok
Man u
are poo
13:50 Sun 17 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Well seems no one has posted for a while
doesnt make me wanna smile
Ah well what the heck
May as well have a quick rhyme check
Cant believe it's already Sunday
Hopefully tommorow i will have a happy monday
It is my day off you see
Maybe go shopping.. but thats a BIG maybee
doesnt make me wanna smile
Ah well what the heck
May as well have a quick rhyme check
Cant believe it's already Sunday
Hopefully tommorow i will have a happy monday
It is my day off you see
Maybe go shopping.. but thats a BIG maybee
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14:00 Sun 17 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Thank you Paula and Fry
Keep up the good work mate! Your like lightening on this thread!
Keep up the good work mate! Your like lightening on this thread!
23:53 Sun 17 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Cheers Pete
I will try keep it reet
Was nice to see a familiar face
Lack of posts was a disgrace
Iv done my bit
So i dont expect a hit
So dont send my way a brawler
Especially if its Paula!!!
I will try keep it reet
Was nice to see a familiar face
Lack of posts was a disgrace
Iv done my bit
So i dont expect a hit
So dont send my way a brawler
Especially if its Paula!!!
01:43 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Me? A brawler? With these size 3 feet?
Am only tiny yano, Dainty and neat (LOL)
But yes your right to be scared of me
Cos i can fly like a butterfly and sting like a bee
Cheers for keep this thread going, good poems there
Am only tiny yano, Dainty and neat (LOL)
But yes your right to be scared of me
Cos i can fly like a butterfly and sting like a bee
I have got a good dig on me tho :P.....and yup i am only small with tiny feet
Cheers for keep this thread going, good poems there
02:12 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
They may be size three's
But i wouldnt like them in my goolies
So i best not anger you
Dont know what you would do
But i wouldnt like them in my goolies
So i best not anger you
Dont know what you would do
02:17 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Lmao, ok fair play, to you dear Fry
Tho my legs my not reach that high
But hey im not a girl who gets mad
So dont worry u wont anger me lad
Tho my legs my not reach that high
But hey im not a girl who gets mad
So dont worry u wont anger me lad
02:22 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Well if ur like any woman i know
I wouldnt like you to have a go
Wouldnt like 2 be beaten by a girl
But hey it would be worth the whirl
I wouldnt like you to have a go
Wouldnt like 2 be beaten by a girl
But hey it would be worth the whirl
02:33 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
You cheeky git, forget the whirl
You see i aint just any old girl
Im different, so different indeed
Im so dizzy i require special needs
You see i aint just any old girl
Im different, so different indeed
Im so dizzy i require special needs
02:37 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Bet u aint special needs
So dont try make ma heart bleed
Remember dizzy is good
Will help you survive on the old hood
So dont try make ma heart bleed
Remember dizzy is good
Will help you survive on the old hood
02:52 Mon 18 Apr 11 (BST) [Link]
Make ya heart bleed? i aint lookin for pity
Im dizzy but look at me pic aint i pretty? (pmsl)
I will survive, but not in the hood
Cos am too small for me own good
Im dizzy but look at me pic aint i pretty? (pmsl)
I will survive, but not in the hood
Cos am too small for me own good
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