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18:57 Tue 8 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
HAHAHAHA ! ! !
That was fab!
Aww i hope i never really knocked ya confidence, am only messing yano, i told ya, tiz me humour :D
You shud do more poems ul_son :D
ul_son said:
justsumgirl wearing high heels,
stands out a lil sitting amongst dirty seals,
thats not having a go, it's only a joke,
Ill make it up to you by giving you a poke.. :P
I am a lil shy, and deffo an all that guy,
I'll do anything once even american pie :-O
As justsum said im a big of a mad yoke,
I stand out, I aint a normal bloke
Im on the market lookin for a quickie,
I doss off work pull an occasional sickie,
I rule at pub games, not just your average player,
Im so authoritive I'd make a great mayor.
When it comes to bragging i tend to waffle a bit,
justsum knocks my confidence, my ego takes a hit,
But I aint bothered I come back with a bang,
Along to the killers, I'll let you play with my....
:-O
stands out a lil sitting amongst dirty seals,
thats not having a go, it's only a joke,
Ill make it up to you by giving you a poke.. :P
I am a lil shy, and deffo an all that guy,
I'll do anything once even american pie :-O
As justsum said im a big of a mad yoke,
I stand out, I aint a normal bloke
Im on the market lookin for a quickie,
I doss off work pull an occasional sickie,
I rule at pub games, not just your average player,
Im so authoritive I'd make a great mayor.
When it comes to bragging i tend to waffle a bit,
justsum knocks my confidence, my ego takes a hit,
But I aint bothered I come back with a bang,
Along to the killers, I'll let you play with my....
:-O
HAHAHAHA ! ! !
That was fab!
Aww i hope i never really knocked ya confidence, am only messing yano, i told ya, tiz me humour :D
You shud do more poems ul_son :D
18:58 Tue 8 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
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justsumgirl said:
:O
A Poem just for ul_son
Named me in dedi 9ball run
Sending me msgs as he played
And on this girl he has preyed (:p)
He said i like big Caterpilla's
And love..erm the killers (haha)
He wont do a poem cos he's shy
He's not really an all that guy!
But hes one for a joke or two
Even though they are poo (;p)
An ok lad ive heard the rumour
He has a good sense of humour
So now i'll end this lil verse
Before on me he puts a curse
Or asks me to wear my heels
And has me runnin over to ..Nialls!
(Pmsl i cudnt think of anything to end the poem on hahaha)
A Poem just for ul_son
Named me in dedi 9ball run
Sending me msgs as he played
And on this girl he has preyed (:p)
He said i like big Caterpilla's
And love..erm the killers (haha)
He wont do a poem cos he's shy
He's not really an all that guy!
But hes one for a joke or two
Even though they are poo (;p)
An ok lad ive heard the rumour
He has a good sense of humour
So now i'll end this lil verse
Before on me he puts a curse
Or asks me to wear my heels
And has me runnin over to ..Nialls!
(Pmsl i cudnt think of anything to end the poem on hahaha)
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19:04 Tue 8 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
its only a rhyme not an indication on real life..
ya never knock me justsum, ya can still be my wife,
but the rules have changed, its me who's in charge,
I decide what happens when you make it go large
:-O
Im no freestyling MC but we do rhymes in our spare times, I'd rathertake on the mob tho, fighting all the crimes, justsum wants more poems off me... well miss it's tiit for tat, I'll post more on here if you meet me next sat
ya never knock me justsum, ya can still be my wife,
but the rules have changed, its me who's in charge,
I decide what happens when you make it go large
:-O
Im no freestyling MC but we do rhymes in our spare times, I'd rathertake on the mob tho, fighting all the crimes, justsum wants more poems off me... well miss it's tiit for tat, I'll post more on here if you meet me next sat
19:28 Tue 8 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Rules were made to be broken tho
From now on IM running the show
Your not my boss so dont try to be
Just cos ur prob much taller than me!
Now see this banter, it has to end
Before you send me round the bend
My sweet cheeks cant take much more
Ive laffed so much, me sides are sore!
B4 i end i have something to say
But plz dont take it the wrong way
I really think you are a crank
Who can go far on an 'empty tank'
LMAO!!!
From now on IM running the show
Your not my boss so dont try to be
Just cos ur prob much taller than me!
Now see this banter, it has to end
Before you send me round the bend
My sweet cheeks cant take much more
Ive laffed so much, me sides are sore!
B4 i end i have something to say
But plz dont take it the wrong way
I really think you are a crank
Who can go far on an 'empty tank'
LMAO!!!
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19:31 Tue 8 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
lol 'empty tank'... ima get you tomorrow!
nighties...
nighties...
02:40 Wed 9 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
lol @ u2 wat r u on
wonders if paula has noticed...
wonders if paula has noticed...
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06:04 Wed 9 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
My poem for my best freind ul_son
this is for you i hope you listen
we have a joke filled with cynicism
i hope you dont take to heart the criticism
but i must question your skepticism
and im sure paula wont just fall for your magnetism
I hear your leaving going to canada
lets hope you dont get the wrong plane and end up in rwanda
you could take up dancing and do some samba
also watch you dont get bit by a black mamba
do you have to go cant you not stay
at the very least one extra day
so we can shoot some pool and you can try and play
although in the end you could be a shocking display
il say goodbye have a nice holiday
fingers crossed you dont end up like that dude off castaway
this is for you i hope you listen
we have a joke filled with cynicism
i hope you dont take to heart the criticism
but i must question your skepticism
and im sure paula wont just fall for your magnetism
I hear your leaving going to canada
lets hope you dont get the wrong plane and end up in rwanda
you could take up dancing and do some samba
also watch you dont get bit by a black mamba
do you have to go cant you not stay
at the very least one extra day
so we can shoot some pool and you can try and play
although in the end you could be a shocking display
il say goodbye have a nice holiday
fingers crossed you dont end up like that dude off castaway
09:15 Wed 9 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Am on nothing me!! and, yh i noticed you NEVER done a poem :@
Good poem Kirk, and LMAO @ bold bit
mufc2009 said:
lol @ u2 wat r u on
wonders if paula has noticed...
wonders if paula has noticed...
Am on nothing me!! and, yh i noticed you NEVER done a poem :@
kirk__1989 said:
My poem for my best freind ul_son
this is for you i hope you listen
we have a joke filled with cynicism
i hope you dont take to heart the criticism
but i must question your skepticism
and im sure paula wont just fall for your magnetism
I hear your leaving going to canada
lets hope you dont get the wrong plane and end up in rwanda
you could take up dancing and do some samba
also watch you dont get bit by a black mamba
do you have to go cant you not stay
at the very least one extra day
so we can shoot some pool and you can try and play
although in the end you could be a shocking display
il say goodbye have a nice holiday
fingers crossed you dont end up like that dude off castaway
this is for you i hope you listen
we have a joke filled with cynicism
i hope you dont take to heart the criticism
but i must question your skepticism
and im sure paula wont just fall for your magnetism
I hear your leaving going to canada
lets hope you dont get the wrong plane and end up in rwanda
you could take up dancing and do some samba
also watch you dont get bit by a black mamba
do you have to go cant you not stay
at the very least one extra day
so we can shoot some pool and you can try and play
although in the end you could be a shocking display
il say goodbye have a nice holiday
fingers crossed you dont end up like that dude off castaway
Good poem Kirk, and LMAO @ bold bit
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10:04 Wed 9 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Kirk, your rhymes are dire,
my genius you need to hire,
put on your slippers and sit by the fire..
Criticism from you? lol please,
You're achievements dont even come up past my knees,
UT vs Warriors.. it'll be a breeze,
we're nothing alike, it's like chalk and cheese
Im off to Canadia, land of the mountie,
while I'm away on your head will be a bounty,
to anyone here who can rubbish your claims,
that your clan can beat another in a best of 15 frames..
My clan record says it all,
Tot the scores, see my name in the fame hall,
I search for kirk but its such a shame,
Most see you as childish and lame..
my genius you need to hire,
put on your slippers and sit by the fire..
Criticism from you? lol please,
You're achievements dont even come up past my knees,
UT vs Warriors.. it'll be a breeze,
we're nothing alike, it's like chalk and cheese
Im off to Canadia, land of the mountie,
while I'm away on your head will be a bounty,
to anyone here who can rubbish your claims,
that your clan can beat another in a best of 15 frames..
My clan record says it all,
Tot the scores, see my name in the fame hall,
I search for kirk but its such a shame,
Most see you as childish and lame..
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10:44 Wed 9 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
haha lol thats a good one
just one question do you think your from the hood son?
saying those ryhmes like you a balla
but everyone knows your just a borer
i must admit your clan record is good
but yet again i think you have misunderstood
i guess all i can do is ask you for a challenge
but in all honesty i dont know how you will manage
i mean will you be able to take the damage?
i guess you will just back away
claim your great but then walkaway
i hope you accept and then get beat
because my freind its certain defeat
just one question do you think your from the hood son?
saying those ryhmes like you a balla
but everyone knows your just a borer
i must admit your clan record is good
but yet again i think you have misunderstood
i guess all i can do is ask you for a challenge
but in all honesty i dont know how you will manage
i mean will you be able to take the damage?
i guess you will just back away
claim your great but then walkaway
i hope you accept and then get beat
because my freind its certain defeat
19:56 Wed 9 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Even tho theres a bit of erm banter in them poems, they are fab!
MORE!!! MORE!!!!!!!
As Son and Kirk battle it out
Each have fans standing about
Chanting out their players name
Hoping them to win each game
But its all in fun, oh jeez i hope
No faces here shall we see mope
Lets keep it nice and making sense
Now go on lads let the games commence!!
MORE!!! MORE!!!!!!!
As Son and Kirk battle it out
Each have fans standing about
Chanting out their players name
Hoping them to win each game
But its all in fun, oh jeez i hope
No faces here shall we see mope
Lets keep it nice and making sense
Now go on lads let the games commence!!
02:51 Thu 10 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Am on nothing me!! and, yh i noticed you NEVER done a poem :@
i did... just they was before this
justsumgirl said:
mufc2009 said:
lol @ u2 wat r u on
wonders if paula has noticed...
wonders if paula has noticed...
Am on nothing me!! and, yh i noticed you NEVER done a poem :@
i did... just they was before this
03:12 Tue 15 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Found this thread on page three
That has disappointed me
Do a poem for all to see
Make this girl shout Yippeeee
(BUMPED)
That has disappointed me
Do a poem for all to see
Make this girl shout Yippeeee
(BUMPED)
07:46 Thu 17 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
justsumgirl said:
Found this thread on page three
That has disappointed me
Do a poem for all to see
Make this girl shout Yippeeee
(BUMPED)
That has disappointed me
Do a poem for all to see
Make this girl shout Yippeeee
(BUMPED)
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09:52 Thu 17 Sep 09 (BST) [Link]
Poem name: Huh? What? Eh?
I woke up at 6:00AM
And i felt really sick
I ate too much candy
i gave myself a kick
I stayed up all night
cause i felt like i was gonna barf
And now im gonna go walk my dog
I better put on a scarf
But first i'll stay on here
Cause i am bored
After this,
I'll go outside and make some wood sculpture out of a board
*Bows and holds for applause*
I woke up at 6:00AM
And i felt really sick
I ate too much candy
i gave myself a kick
I stayed up all night
cause i felt like i was gonna barf
And now im gonna go walk my dog
I better put on a scarf
But first i'll stay on here
Cause i am bored
After this,
I'll go outside and make some wood sculpture out of a board
*Bows and holds for applause*
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