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06:29 Fri 1 May 09 (BST) [Link]
This is the completed song
Again, to my love
I think you're an angel, sent straight from upstairs
And I'm gonna give you all my loving and cares
'Cuz you are so special, so one of a kind
And the love that we have in an unbreakable bind
God sent you to me to save my live
And i wanna be able to call you my wife
I know what you're thinking but don't you fret
This is something that i wont regret
Ive thought it over, night after night
And something keeps telling me this is right
I wanna be with you through all of my years
And i wanna be there for you to wipe up your tears
I don't wanna think about a day without you
Without your warmth in my heart, i think it'd break into two
'Cuz I don't wanna be the one
To have to say good-bye
'Cuz if I ever had to leave
Baby I'd break down and cry
'Cuz without you in my life, you see
There's no need for me to go on
I'll love you til the end of time
And I know our love will be strong
You are the love of my life and this is something I see
I love when you look at me and say you love me
The warmth of your touch is too addicting to lose
To lay by your side is something I'll always choose
Since the first day we met I knew our love would not die
I know I'm not perfect, but I promise I'll try
You know the reason why i love you so much?
It's the way that you see me and the warmth of your touch
It's the love that you give me that keeps me feeling my best
And the way that you lay you head on my bare chest
Again, to my love
I think you're an angel, sent straight from upstairs
And I'm gonna give you all my loving and cares
'Cuz you are so special, so one of a kind
And the love that we have in an unbreakable bind
God sent you to me to save my live
And i wanna be able to call you my wife
I know what you're thinking but don't you fret
This is something that i wont regret
Ive thought it over, night after night
And something keeps telling me this is right
I wanna be with you through all of my years
And i wanna be there for you to wipe up your tears
I don't wanna think about a day without you
Without your warmth in my heart, i think it'd break into two
'Cuz I don't wanna be the one
To have to say good-bye
'Cuz if I ever had to leave
Baby I'd break down and cry
'Cuz without you in my life, you see
There's no need for me to go on
I'll love you til the end of time
And I know our love will be strong
You are the love of my life and this is something I see
I love when you look at me and say you love me
The warmth of your touch is too addicting to lose
To lay by your side is something I'll always choose
Since the first day we met I knew our love would not die
I know I'm not perfect, but I promise I'll try
You know the reason why i love you so much?
It's the way that you see me and the warmth of your touch
It's the love that you give me that keeps me feeling my best
And the way that you lay you head on my bare chest
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06:30 Fri 1 May 09 (BST) [Link]
And the looks that I get from you just drive me insane
The absence of love would just be causing me pain
My promise to you is that I won't break your heart
And i promise to you that we won't fall apart.
Sorry it took two posts
The absence of love would just be causing me pain
My promise to you is that I won't break your heart
And i promise to you that we won't fall apart.
Sorry it took two posts
11:13 Fri 1 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Rob, that was Fab!! :)...again :)
This ones now all about Jill
Who takes a lot of pills
She still gives some thrills
and she lives up near the hills
A girl who loves banana's so
and when you read her poems you think D-OH!
She makes you laugh all day long
but she can cut you down with a lash of her tongue
Quirky and fun this dumplin of mine
With hair as fine as mine
Will jump on your back and break your spine
But alas she is still devine
Well of to the Hospital I must go,
Im having an Op as you all know
But you'll keep smiling that i know
We'll be here to welcome your friendly "Hello!"
We need you here to make us laugh
Well hang on,im just in the Bath
I need to scrub my back..
This ones now all about Jill
Who takes a lot of pills
She still gives some thrills
and she lives up near the hills
A girl who loves banana's so
and when you read her poems you think D-OH!
She makes you laugh all day long
but she can cut you down with a lash of her tongue
Quirky and fun this dumplin of mine
With hair as fine as mine
Will jump on your back and break your spine
But alas she is still devine
Well of to the Hospital I must go,
Im having an Op as you all know
But you'll keep smiling that i know
We'll be here to welcome your friendly "Hello!"
We need you here to make us laugh
Well hang on,im just in the Bath
I need to scrub my back..
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12:14 Fri 1 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Easy come,easy go
Watch out it will know
From the bushes
Or behind the rail
It will attack those who look pale
Fury in it's eye's
Pain clenched by fist
Trying to hurt those who dissed
So be careful G.I Joe
Watch out it will know
From the bushes
Or behind the rail
It will attack those who look pale
Fury in it's eye's
Pain clenched by fist
Trying to hurt those who dissed
So be careful G.I Joe
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16:51 Fri 1 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Easy come,easy go
Watch out it will know
From the bushes
Or behind the rail
It will attack those who look pale
Fury in it's eye's
Pain clenched by fist
Trying to hurt those who dissed
So be careful G.I Joe
OOps, sorry I stood on your toe
Watch out it will know
From the bushes
Or behind the rail
It will attack those who look pale
Fury in it's eye's
Pain clenched by fist
Trying to hurt those who dissed
So be careful G.I Joe
OOps, sorry I stood on your toe
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22:47 Fri 1 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Rob, that was Fab!! :)...again :)
This ones now all about Jill
Who takes a lot of pills
She still gives some thrills
and she lives up near the hills
A girl who loves banana's so
and when you read her poems you think D-OH!
She makes you laugh all day long
but she can cut you down with a lash of her tongue
Quirky and fun this dumplin of mine
With hair as fine as mine
Will jump on your back and break your spine
But alas she is still devine
Well of to the Hospital I must go,
Im having an Op as you all know
But you'll keep smiling that i know
We'll be here to welcome your friendly "Hello!"
We need you here to make us laugh
Well hang on,im just in the Bath
I need to scrub my back..
As it wasnt long ago i was in the sack
This ones now all about Jill
Who takes a lot of pills
She still gives some thrills
and she lives up near the hills
A girl who loves banana's so
and when you read her poems you think D-OH!
She makes you laugh all day long
but she can cut you down with a lash of her tongue
Quirky and fun this dumplin of mine
With hair as fine as mine
Will jump on your back and break your spine
But alas she is still devine
Well of to the Hospital I must go,
Im having an Op as you all know
But you'll keep smiling that i know
We'll be here to welcome your friendly "Hello!"
We need you here to make us laugh
Well hang on,im just in the Bath
I need to scrub my back..
As it wasnt long ago i was in the sack
08:41 Sat 2 May 09 (BST) [Link]
This ones now all about Jill
Who takes a lot of pills
She still gives some thrills
and she lives up near the hills
A girl who loves banana's so
and when you read her poems you think D-OH!
She makes you laugh all day long
but she can cut you down with a lash of her tongue
Quirky and fun this dumplin of mine
With hair as fine as mine
Will jump on your back and break your spine
But alas she is still devine
Well of to the Hospital I must go,
Im having an Op as you all know
But you'll keep smiling that i know
We'll be here to welcome your friendly "Hello!"
We need you here to make us laugh
Well hang on,im just in the Bath
I need to scrub my back..
As it wasnt long ago i was in the sack
Now Jills back and shes on form
Who takes a lot of pills
She still gives some thrills
and she lives up near the hills
A girl who loves banana's so
and when you read her poems you think D-OH!
She makes you laugh all day long
but she can cut you down with a lash of her tongue
Quirky and fun this dumplin of mine
With hair as fine as mine
Will jump on your back and break your spine
But alas she is still devine
Well of to the Hospital I must go,
Im having an Op as you all know
But you'll keep smiling that i know
We'll be here to welcome your friendly "Hello!"
We need you here to make us laugh
Well hang on,im just in the Bath
I need to scrub my back..
As it wasnt long ago i was in the sack
Now Jills back and shes on form
11:53 Tue 5 May 09 (BST) [Link]
(Sorry to interupt the Jill poem)
Was talking today with an old online mate
Clicked straight away convo flowed great
Reminded me of some fun days gone by
We met on funky was younger and shy
Back then we would laugh all day long
Fun in the garage and burst into song
Play pool and chat through the night
Confide in each other till morning light
A closeness was formed, ppl could see
The bond that we shared this lad and me
He posted on here and is a great poet
A true mate of mine i want him to know it
He has gained something that is a must
He's the person online with my 100% trust
He would be there whenever i was down
Gave me a smile thus stopping my frown
When he left Funky i was a bit sad
Didnt want to lose this fab online lad
I need'nt of worried cos he still knew
That our friendship it would stay true
Sometimes he'd return and share a tale
Then times id recieve a nice email
The same old lad one with a great smile
One of the best by a pure clear mile
So older and wiser i just want to say
Some mates are forever come what may
Over 4 years later we are still in touch
For that i want to thank him so much
I know you'll read this,ive asked you to
So this bit goes out especially for YOU
Today when talking just made me see
How much of an impact you made on me
People like you are so hard to find
Pleasent, genuine, thoughtful ,kind
Happy and smily, great thru and thru
I'm so happy i know someone like you
~Paula~ x
Was talking today with an old online mate
Clicked straight away convo flowed great
Reminded me of some fun days gone by
We met on funky was younger and shy
Back then we would laugh all day long
Fun in the garage and burst into song
Play pool and chat through the night
Confide in each other till morning light
A closeness was formed, ppl could see
The bond that we shared this lad and me
He posted on here and is a great poet
A true mate of mine i want him to know it
He has gained something that is a must
He's the person online with my 100% trust
He would be there whenever i was down
Gave me a smile thus stopping my frown
When he left Funky i was a bit sad
Didnt want to lose this fab online lad
I need'nt of worried cos he still knew
That our friendship it would stay true
Sometimes he'd return and share a tale
Then times id recieve a nice email
The same old lad one with a great smile
One of the best by a pure clear mile
So older and wiser i just want to say
Some mates are forever come what may
Over 4 years later we are still in touch
For that i want to thank him so much
I know you'll read this,ive asked you to
So this bit goes out especially for YOU
Today when talking just made me see
How much of an impact you made on me
People like you are so hard to find
Pleasent, genuine, thoughtful ,kind
Happy and smily, great thru and thru
I'm so happy i know someone like you
~Paula~ x
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06:31 Wed 6 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Thats lovely bab, Alot of thought and effort has gone into that! Weldone
Pitter x
Pitter x
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03:32 Thu 7 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Tut, Tut ,look what iv!e found
Yes it was on page three,
No one could see,
So come on you lot,
Or have you lost the plot
The only place this belongs
Is on page 1 not on 3
So you lot,better get some done
So i get on my knee
And beg you to be
A poet like me
Now that worth watching
As im no good at them
But there people out there,
Whos can do good poems
So we will start after
1,2,3,im sat on my chair
Waiting to see
If someone will do
A flipping good poem
While there sat at home
See mine are poo but i do try,so come on chop chop
Yes it was on page three,
No one could see,
So come on you lot,
Or have you lost the plot
The only place this belongs
Is on page 1 not on 3
So you lot,better get some done
So i get on my knee
And beg you to be
A poet like me
Now that worth watching
As im no good at them
But there people out there,
Whos can do good poems
So we will start after
1,2,3,im sat on my chair
Waiting to see
If someone will do
A flipping good poem
While there sat at home
See mine are poo but i do try,so come on chop chop
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04:09 Thu 7 May 09 (BST) [Link]
This is a short poem, a poem for thee,
As i sit here waiting for a response to a message, yipee!
Done on the spot - so it will be quite lame,
There might be a poem that's similar or the same,
I don't know what to type in this moment right now,
As i can't think of a topic, can you tell me how?
A poem about something is usually best,
But finding a subject is the great test,
This poem is about nothing at all,
Although at least this thread won't now go down and fall,
This poem will be done in less than 5 minutes,
As i wonder if i should delete it an bin it,
How do i end a poem about nothing? do i stop or say bye?
Or do i say, enjoy this random poem and to you i say.. hi?
As i sit here waiting for a response to a message, yipee!
Done on the spot - so it will be quite lame,
There might be a poem that's similar or the same,
I don't know what to type in this moment right now,
As i can't think of a topic, can you tell me how?
A poem about something is usually best,
But finding a subject is the great test,
This poem is about nothing at all,
Although at least this thread won't now go down and fall,
This poem will be done in less than 5 minutes,
As i wonder if i should delete it an bin it,
How do i end a poem about nothing? do i stop or say bye?
Or do i say, enjoy this random poem and to you i say.. hi?
04:50 Thu 7 May 09 (BST) [Link]
WOOOO SI !! A poem about nothing is better than no poem at all chicken Good stuff
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06:49 Thu 7 May 09 (BST) [Link]
Flange said ive to do more
Only because when she laughs,
She ends up on the Floor
And then she does a weeeeeeeeeeeeee
Well what can i say
I will give it a go
so this is from me hey hey
Runs of to the loo
taaaaaaaaa daaaaaaaaaaaaaa
only a little one there for you
Only because when she laughs,
She ends up on the Floor
And then she does a weeeeeeeeeeeeee
Well what can i say
I will give it a go
so this is from me hey hey
Runs of to the loo
taaaaaaaaa daaaaaaaaaaaaaa
only a little one there for you
06:53 Thu 7 May 09 (BST) [Link]
I love the lil ones..(STS) they make me propa pmsl ur poems yano haha
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