The stress and emotions are higher than ever,
My agitation ruffled like a hand full of feathers.
The rage building up, and my heart getting hot,
Slowly and surely I think I'm losing the plot.
Too much pressure on this one certain man,
Balancing everything as best as he can.
Then earlier on, the rage really got high,
And this stressed out victim, was on the edge to cry.
But no, bottled up is where this pain must say,
It wont be long now, until the pressure goes away.
Oh! Please brother! Dont disregard our pets,
I know you are so lazy, but dont ever forget.
I worry so much now, and tears well up as I write,
This surely is the hardest time, I've had in a single night.
This tear is warm and solemn, it runs so very slow,
I need someone to swallow me up, and take care of me so.

The photo's of my parents,they rest here in my hand,
At the moment they've abandoned me, onto foreign land.
I miss them as I need them the most, but they simply are not here,
If only with their blessed ears, they could only hear.
Guidance is now what I need, I feel so very low,
I need support and loving care, from people that I know.
This sounds like a call for help, but it isn't rest assure,
Its just that this is a new step in life, And I've never felt like this before.

Edited at 00:48 Fri 22/09/06 (BST)

Ok well seeing as i am really bored and no1 is online, i thought i might aswel give writing a poem a go....i warn u its not very good

Justsumgirl (thought id write it about u as u did me one )

There is a girl I know,
she goes by Justsumgirl.
Evryone knows we love her so,
and maybe one day she will rule the world!

She posts evryday just like me,
on general chat and fun and games.
There are other threads, more than three,
if she wheren't there I'd get the blame!

You all know we are the only lass's,
but that hasnt stopped us yet
However we bring in the mass's,
and we will bring in more, thats a bet!

I'd be lost if you wheren't here,
you are truely a really good friend.
Lets all give Paula a great big cheer,
for being here for me and u till the end!

Ok well compared to ures Ste mine really is crap....

*hugs* for u hun...it will all be over in a few days, i wud come help ya if i cud

Thanks stephy...

And yours is great!! more more!!!

compared 2 ures ste mine was rubbish!! least ures made sense!!.....


took me forever to write that one lol

That's what makes yours so good steph. Poetry comes naturally to Ste, so yours is better because you're trying something you're not so good at. Its a great poem, well done steph!

Thanks!

yh i agree, as you say ur so scared to write a poem as u say ur crap...... ur wrong that was brill Stephy, keep writing them and ull b better than Ste

a forum junkie called..........


nah i'd better not

PMSL wtf Stell??

The Teacher

Everyday im scared to go to school
As it makes me look such a fool
Whenever i walk into the clasroom
It's like entering a pit of doom
I always make a fool of myself
Doing sumfing or walking into a shelf
It always happens one way or another
It just makes me wanna dive under cover
But today is the day, i get things straight
It's either this or i meet my fate
So i walk into school, then walk through the door
and build up my guts, from the core
i miss the shelf and do sit down
and hope noin happens, i giv a big frown
the teacher starts teaching, and now im happy
coz now im big and not in a nappy
so when it comes to lunchtime, i get my food
and still, here i am in a happy mood
i walk down the isle thinking where to sit

then someone nicks my seat "what a git!"
now its heavy and im starting to get soar
then i drop my food and it hits the floor
now everyone's laughing at me
im always a fool, as you can see
ill jus have to cope this way
and that's all i can say

awwwww good poem ruddan!

OMG!! Steph that was FAB!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!! *hugssssssssssssss*


Good poems everyone. I hope this thread NEVER ends

lol me too, we can look bak at it when we r soooo old like 89 yh old (grrr makes me shiver) lol

Ha Ha,i always look back on my faves anyway ruddan

When we are old, we can look back at these
so please dont delete this thread, im on my hands and knees !
we have been here for so long
writing poems from ants to king kong !
we are having such a laugh, every poem that we write
but this one and only, is to plead for tonight
we want this poem to never end
so all i can say is dont delete it, my dear friend
we have many talents on this thread
Ste finds it easier than buttering some bread !
but his poems are so class, delicate and pro
and if u knock this thread down, ill stand in the way and say NO!
everyone will be behind me, covering me all the way
even if we go to court, im ready for that day !
so this is my plea, to leave this thread alone
and dont ever touch it, not even down to its bone
for if anyone deletes it i will be on there back
and ill cary all my friends with me, in a big blue sack!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Brill Ruddan Brill...Ste better email me his poems if this ever gets capped/deleled which it WONT

lol, even better he could tell you some before you both go to bed (romantic one) lol, how good is he at singinr, reading? lol