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11:55 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
YES!!!! Well Done Ste, but ya know i dont need to say thats good lol



And ur comment bob???????
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11:55 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
lol, its beautiful *sniffs*
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11:57 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
haha!

thank you, thank you...

*takes bow* and for my next trick... lol

Edited at 16:58 Fri 25/08/06 (BST)
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11:57 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
Awwwwwwwwwww Ste!! you got him crying now!!!!Oh well bob dont blush,ive had many a tear reading these too .......Told ya he was good tho
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11:58 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
Your too kind dear...I have a small pidgeon in my drawer what tells me what to write lol
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11:59 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
then say thank you 2 the pigeon lol.
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12:03 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
LOL.........Its a bird called Mark!!!!



New Title: Lies......
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12:07 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
(omg paula!!!! Mark!! )

Lies

Lies can be said, lies can be told,
Lies can be bought and lies can be sold.
Lies can be hurtful, lies can be white,
Lies can be corruptive, that starts a big fight.
Lies are decietful, should never be done,
Lies can be told all under the sun.

Truth should be told, not a fake lie,
Truth should be given, to not make her cry.
Truth is much better, it is honest and true.
Truth makes you feel good, lies make you blue.
Truth is much easier, it always comes out,
Truth tells the whole story, and what its about.

I try not to lie, but sometimes its tough,
Because you care about the feelings, of someone you love.
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12:09 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
Spot on Ste*hugs*
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12:10 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
and that only took four minutes? ure a genius ste!!!
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12:12 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
Why thanks Bob....

glad you liked it too Paula *hugs*
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12:15 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
OI BOB!!!! When i told ya he was good....i meant it!
What? didnt ya believe me?? Grrrrrrrrr
(only joking bob lol)

Hey bob,you leave him a title, see what he comes up with


*hugs 4 Ste*
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12:17 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
its not that i didnt believe u!
aww, cuming up with a title involves thinking
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12:24 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
OH LMAO OKIES!
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15:35 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
lol, you got any suggestions for Ste, Paula?
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15:39 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
YES! LOTS! But i cant post them here!!
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15:46 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
lol, ok... i'll leave that there then
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15:48 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
PMSL I always leave titles bob.....well me and Steph,if theres no title,he will do a random one anyways
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18:42 Fri 25 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
I sat there alone and cried
She had cheated and she had lied
She had broke my heart she had ruined my life
And she walks in and i reach for the knife
No intention of using it, I love her to much
But she lied to me should I leave her
I might love her but does she even care?
She walks in the room and takes her stuff
Looks me in the eye and crys
It was a relationship built on lies
I knew it all along so i gave her a hug and say goodbye
And she says "I'll miss you" yet another lie
And she walks out of my life like everone else I've loved
I find something in the draw just shoved
A picture of me and her ye it wasn't all bad
But life goes on she met another lad
My best friend since high school
We used to be mates and talk about our footy team liverpool
He has destroyed me but I am strong
One day we might be freinds again when he admits he's wrong

Edited at 23:51 Fri 25/08/06 (BST)
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08:49 Sat 26 Aug 06 (BST)  [Link]  
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *hugs*

Ok guys Ste has gone for a few days so we need to keep this thread going
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