Omg Paula that is brill hunni *hugs*

OMG PAULA, THAT WAS EXELLENT!
that is reli high class WOW, IM IMPRESSED!!!!!!!!
WOOOO *hugs*



P.S: i wish i could write poems like thatlol

Wow gr8 poem Paula!!! u should do more!!

PUALA THATS AMAZING

can i have a title please?

ure title is.....Fellings


and it really was great hunni!!

ok

Edited at 08:17 Tue 17/10/06 (BST)

Feelings

It runs through my blood, swirling in and out
and fight like two sumo people, in a bout
Some say its rare, some say its cool
but everyone has it, u big, nasty fool
this feeling can be anything, from me to you
this to from or cant to do
i get it when im jelous, or upset about sumfing
some people may even get it, when they dance or even sing!
so thats the poem of my feelings
i hope i made them grow
i hope they go up to the ceiling
and not, reli low
so people, while ur reading this, just see what ur feeling
everyone can say it, to all-together to peiling
so i hope to see u post back what ur feeling now
so bye bye!!!!! (this aint no dodgy deeling)

Wooooooooo! Thats good that. Im glad u all liked mine too, it takes me ages to think of them though lol.........


OI GUEVARA! We NEED one from you......

Yayyyy That was good Ruds

Steeeeee come back and do a poemmmmmm

well done ruds gr8 poem

ok i wrote this in the last 10 mins, ive no idea where it came from, the word were just in ma head..so here goes.............


Everytime i look into your eyes
I get a feeling deep down inside
When i hear your voice on the phone
I get a feeling down in my soul
I want to hold you close to me
And be together for eternity
I wana hold you oh so much
And feel your tender loving touch
I wana spend my life with you
And do the things that lovers do
I never want us to be apart
And feel this pain within my heart
You are the only one for me
My love for you will always be
My love for you makes me feel high
I'll love you till the day i die.



Edited at 14:38 Tue 17/10/06 (BST)

WOW, gr8 PW! here goes another

This site of legends and wonders
has cleared my sky of frightning thunders
it opened up the heavens, and let it show light
and has me playing all throught the night
i dont wanna close my eyes and goto sleep
but once i do, i dont make a peep
i dream bout it, all the time
and i love this site, and god i climb
ive made so many friends, of all genders and form
these lovely frineds of myn, comfort me and make me warm
so i made this poem of the site, and all my friends at bay
and here i am, thinking of them everyday
jsg, steph, tids, bob, Nem, PW and Ste
all them friends i hav, as u can see

Edited at 16:23 Tue 17/10/06 (BST)

i express myself in this lovely poem
so this is especailly for em!
there have all been my friends, since the start
and of my life, play a huge part
so heres to u guys, full of wonders you are
but we r all spread out, very very far
if id met u in person, id be a friend of sure
and show u the light, to the success door

Yay!!!!! *hugs* 4 ruds i luuuuuurve that one hehe.....and ur's PW that was fab!


Stephy u do one hehe

Edited at 20:37 Tue 17/10/06 (BST)

Woooooo i love em all!!!

Me do one? i cant i dunno even where to begin!! ill try think of one tho, may take me a while!

Woooooo i love em all!!!

Me do one? i cant i dunno even where to begin!! ill try think of one tho, may take me a while!

Oh come on ya can!!

i canttttt ive tried but i can't!!!

Build up your courage, and im sure you'll go far
youll get more money, and get a gd car
you'll soon think of a good one, very good indeed
and then i wont hav to write, i could sit and read
that would save my job, so ste dont hav to either
so please dont be rubbish and lazy, like a big fat beaver
we all need our own jobs, writing poems, can b urs
and for your life, that wil open up doors
Stella's job is to eat, pink wafers most of the time
jus make a poem, it dont hav to be good, it dont hav to even rhyme
jus giv it a go, and soon ull get better
and they'll be as clean and as white as a letter
Ste will do sum time to time, and so will i
so just think about it ok, and bye bye!

OMG, IM LOSING MY TOUCH