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justsumgirl
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12:27 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Ur right Fry we need one from Pit!!

Some good poems there guys, keep em coming STS
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12:58 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Sat.on.my bed
Going.out of.my.head
I am.here
I should.be.there insted
justsumgirl
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13:01 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Aw cheer up little bug dont be sad
Dont think either, it drives you mad
Think of things that make you smile
Even if they take a short while

bulldog_oc
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18:37 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
aww haha this is fun
im back again so lets run
im not the best writer
but im a good fighter

i play for a football team
that's my theme
x factor was on last night
but it went alight
the risk are great
but i realise there fate

bug please don't cry
cause everything is gonna be alright
ill go and get fry
so you will stop to cry
punkpoet
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18:42 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
The Risk suck.

End of poem :)
bulldog_oc
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18:45 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
nice poem you know
haha your some great foe
punkpoet
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18:50 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
I know right
The lines tight :)
bluenose1872
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19:07 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
punkpoet said:
The Risk suck.

End of poem :)


If this was facebook *like*
punkpoet
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19:18 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Lol will put it on fb later unless I forget .
justsumgirl
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19:28 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Id say good poem keep er lit
But the last few have been.........crap
So come on guys be a bit stronger
Make ya poems and rhymes longer


DunDunDun!!!
fry06
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21:03 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Seems that Paula has spoken
Hopefully punk n bull hearts aint broken
Im glad u 2 r writing a few lines
Prevents me from my whines
So lets keep this thread bouncing
And give Paula a trouncing
bulldog_oc
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21:26 Sun 6 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
my heart is not broken , who ya think i am?
im not a piece of lamb
am i?
thats a lie ?
oh btw im back
do not give me the sack

please
justsumgirl
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11:05 Mon 7 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
Whats a trouncing id like to know
Before you decide to give it a go
And Bull im glad you aint lamb
Cos id of ate ya in a sec...BAM!



Oh god these little ones are crap STS!! hahaha
hippesville
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17:52 Mon 7 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
omg there she is....she's shown her face!
our paula's arrived in this poetic place,
she's giving off loads, and not holding back,
poem war i see comin....should be plenty of craic!!

but to be fair amma likin it,
there's some life in the thread,
some poets doin great,
others dictionary's need fed,
don't be like that clampit,
i saw on MTV.....
keep it lit's what she said,
oh woe is me!

fry06
fry06
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18:39 Mon 7 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
When u were wearing pink
I wonder what people did think
Did people buy you a beer
Or did they stare n leer
Ur a braver man than me
To wear that onesie
bulldog_oc
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21:37 Mon 7 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
hehe justsmgirl your funny
but you have teeth as bright as the sunny
haha sorry bout the blazes
but thats one of the phases
justsumgirl
justsumgirl
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00:40 Tue 8 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
OMG Hippesville how very dare you?
Me giving loads out? thats so untrue
We all know the truth am always nice
Never been naughty..well maybe twice

And Bulldog why thankyou i must say
Im particular about my teeth every day
They are bright and sunny just like me
Cos i floss, brush and swill vigorously!!!

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04:04 Tue 8 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
boy you got me going crazy
never thought id fall like this
how i long for our first kiss
being with you is pure bliss
people will read
they will dis
but all i say is i love you just please remember this

there may be times we run and hide
nothing will change ill be by your side
for the people who hate well thats just great
i dont mind we can not change our fate
for our friends who are happy
like my old mate my pappies (marv) & (spider) lol i love these two

im sure by now i should take my bow
but im not quite done
on to paula now

you are so smart
i love your style
maybe you can teach me
although it may take a while lol

ok im sure you have all had enough
ill be off before the critics get to rough

xxxxx

Edited at 02:16 Tue 08/11/11 (GMT)
hippesville
hippesville
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20:56 Tue 8 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
punkyfoolers come online,
sat in the chat room killin time,
the chat don't happen, they juss sit back,
and let some eejit talk loadsa kack!
bulldog_oc
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21:01 Tue 8 Nov 11 (GMT)  [Link]  
hehe gazza your a ledge
just make sure you don't meet redge
please pleas paula , please forgive me
im a good kid you see
well don't you worry punky will be here
he is full of fear ahah
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