Well wadd'ya know it, we have a punk poet
Here on this great funky site
He posts line after line
And rhyme after rhyme
Sometimes long into the night

Ive read all your poems some are quite good
Others dont make any sense
So heres how it goes
You lot compose
And let the competition commence

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Dont paint on a smile for anyone mate
Be who you are destinys ur own fate
We all feel down from time to time
So its ok to pour it out via rhyme
I hope your now feeling okay
Hope today is a much better day

some of my poems dont make sense?
now im on the defence
i have read and your'e right
some of my lines arnt tight
only just found my groove
but feel i can still improve
not bad as ive been trying a few weeks
though funky has harsh critiques

maybe i need a squeeze
and btw the smile puts people at ease
maybe it will make me feel happy
compared to feeling crappy
as i do most days
i feel lost in a maze
no where to go
and no one to show
how i really feel
like my fates got a seal

lies back
needed that once again little touche feely. thanks paula, i write on my ps3 and it gives you word choices sometimes i click on wrong words and it doesnt make sense lol and im new to this as well
this one and last one im really happy with :) think there decent :D

To a friend...

I hope this helps bring a smile
Know you feel u aint had one in a while
Now that you have a bad leg and toe
Hope this helps a little pain go
Try to make you sing happy songs
Not ones sung by mongs

Whether you have a bad toe, shin or knee
Remember..you always have me

if only i could be just me
if only i could flee
if only i could change my name
if only i could change the game
if only i could move without pain
if only i could be insane
if only i could find what im looking for
if only i could have the one i adore
if only i could be taken seriously
if only it could be made right mysteriously

Ya welcome Punk

Good Poem Fry

Keep em coming guys............please

wheres your'e poem ;)
i will do another one tomorrow im all out i think lol

I wasnt plannin on being here long enough to compose one..only here cos of msgs getting sent back and forth lol

I'll do some when ive got more time


Night Night

time to be happy
finished feeling crappy
todays a new day
and im starting to see the way
forget about your'e worries
and eat loads of mcflurry's :D

ole hippes is lost and can't be found,
i guess he's hidin underground,
will he come back proper,
or will he juss pop in and out,
make random posts just visit and spout

I like toast
My fave meal i do boast
I may be able to cook a nice meal
But toast is a nice feel
Really buttery with a bit of cheese
Just as good as fish chips and mushy peas

what to do
i feel like poo
what are you doing yes i mean you
want a game how about a few
you know that thing with the balls and a Que

Where has me mate Hippsville gone
Who graced this thread like a swan

Dont answer that i can see it a mile
I think i know why he's lost his smile

I have a feeling i'll keep to myself
Lock it away and place on a shelf

If its what i think ive been there before
It makes your heart sink to the floor

Hippy if you need a little chat
Im here you can be sure of that

But for now come back we need your wit
Chin up Mr and KEEP ER LIT ! ! ! ! !


~Paula~

trying to look on the bright side
it feels like swimming against the tide
but i take one step at a time
i put my feelings in a rhyme
its away to get them out
it does work without a doubt
as i see my troubles
i wish they would turn to bubbles
but im on the right path
now time to act daft ;D

i don't know what to say
is everything ok
im not sure anymore
life's such a bore
but everyone has rough times
but we have our rhymes
and people to help
if you give them a yelp
so keep your'e up
stop looking so fed up

nearly on the third page
man i feel the rage
am i all alone?
like a dog without a bone
well i will go on and on
until my last words have gone

Keep them coming mr Punk
Give this thread a bitta funk
Lately i just have no time
To be here posting a rhyme

well miss i have the time
to spit a rhyme
i do like my rhymes funky
is it cause im a monkey?
did you see me in my new movie?
its good not very groovey :(
its called rise of the planet of the apes
i wonder if in my movie thers any escapes


ok am i insane or not? paula said funky lol
monkeypoet :)

Oh punky, you cant do owt but try,
To write a decent rhyme,
Keep at it and you shall see,
They'll come together easily.

So dont give in and continue to write,
And the practise shall see you right,
And someday in addition.. (makes no sense but it rhymed )
Might give hippes some competition.

Not a lot has being written
No people by the poetry bug bitten
My hands fallen asleep
I cant cos of the sheep

My T.V is on the fritz
Better start comfort eating some ritz
This is all utter crap
Best give me a slap

I shall step forward, To give fry a slap,
His eyes shall run like a tap.
Awww fry, i must say sorry,
Cuz your face looks like it was hit by a lorry

(I get worse!)