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hippesville
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20:56 Tue 5 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
aww poor fry wot's caused yer woes,
it seems dug right up from yer toes,
so take some heart yer poems are good,
yer a great guy i've never known to be rude.
justsumgirl
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02:27 Wed 6 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
(I'll read back tomorra)

hippesville
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04:16 Wed 6 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
paula oh paula that just ain't so good,
yer not readin poems am thinkin yer rude,
you rant and you rave at us all to compose,
then you ignore us.....amma bust yer nose!!!!!!!

justsumgirl
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15:53 Wed 6 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
:O

Hippes how dare ya, i was tired yano
Yet i still popped on to let ya's know
That i hadnt forgot all about you
And i'll still read the poems ya do
But what do i get when i post here
Abuse of you, its brought me a tear
To think that you was once a mate
Now just a stranger getting irrate!
Well am not having it no am not
I aint coming back thats ya lot!!












Some great poems on prev page too btw
fry06
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19:48 Wed 6 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
halfway through the week
Soon be the weekend so u can wet your beak
whilst you all hav fun
i will be doing what needs to be done
hippesville
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23:05 Wed 6 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
it seems our paula's takin it thick,
am sorry for writin it i am a richard,
no more i'll post don't wanna offend,
i really hope i ain't started a trend.

hippesville
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03:54 Thu 7 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
fry06
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04:09 Thu 7 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
well its the time for bed
finally get to lay my head
get ready for work in the morning
this time not spending all the day yawning
but something stopping me though...
Oh ffs hipps stop licking ma window
hippesville
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22:06 Thu 7 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
fry06
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22:23 Thu 7 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Hey mr dont be sad
im here so u shud be glad
cheer up and watch the box
if that dont work iron your socks
hippesville
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00:56 Fri 8 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
fry06
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02:19 Sat 9 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
ffs you
stop feelin blue
have a smile and a laugh
if ur bored clean your gaff
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05:42 Sat 9 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Its been years since I have seen, a photo of you,
To put a face to the thoughtfulness of the things that you do.
Blonde hair, blue eyes, I'm a sucker for that,
It's like the worlds been struck out, and I'm the last one to bat.

I've had a shiny past, colourful in most ways,
Where the little police men, would chase us day from day.
But strangely enough, there was a girl, somebody built me from small,
From a boy of eighteen, to the twenties I grew tall.

Here I would linger, when the summer ran hot,
A time years ago, that I shamefully forgot.
But its funny how one person, can stick at a task,
To make sure that a friendship of hers, really would still last.

Although I look back now, and though I am still young,
A dear friend here with me, makes it feel like its begun.
We start from the marker, we pick up from where we left,
This woman has a mind that I will never forget.

You know who you are, my life you do know,
It's like a distant love, that belongs to us so.
My nan once said, just before she had died,
A sublime little sentence, that did make me cry.

She said 'Love finds us all, it's just a matter of time,
I waited thirty-two years, until I found mine.
Keep yours eyes peeled Steve, she may be oh so near,
A woman that you'll love and cherish - a girl you'll hold so near.

*****You'll have to excuse me, Im slightly dunk*********
justsumgirl
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16:06 Sat 9 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Awwwwwwww Ste thats fab that....luv the bit about your nan, and yes, we'll (well i will haha) excuse ya for being drunk








I think its high time
That i done a rhyme
Cos i havent done one 'frages'
So here ya go guys
On this feast ya eyes
B4 Hippesville he upstages!!
justsumgirl
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14:11 Sun 10 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
To Writeapoem


For years youve posted your poems on here
Some made us laugh, some have been sincere
An icredible talent, and thats what youve got
To post inner thoughts, sometimes takes a lot

Your verses have some real meaningful lines
About your personal life, and its funny times
Youve created stories that have made me smile
Lots of people think yours are the best by a mile

I know theres not many, of your mates that know
About this gift you have, and post here to show
I know its a haven, for people like me and you
That who via verse, let feelings shine through

I know when you left, we continued conversing
Via email , though i was secretly cursing
Cos our daily chats had become quite bliss
It was your fun company i really did miss

But alas now your back and id just like to say
I hope that were friends til forever and a day
A true online mate, i honestly mean this Ste
You really do mean lots and lots to me



~Paula~
fry06
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23:17 Sun 10 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
How can one 4 letter word cause so much pain
mind and body it does strain
situations happen too change
the difficulties tend to range

What is it about this word?
tell me if you've heard??!!
apparently friends can be lost
such a high price it does cost


fry06
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00:49 Mon 11 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Well i dont know what to do
Everything seems to have gone down the loo
Seem like everythings gone wrong
like my attempt to write a song

Here i am writing the blues
No need to worry i aint got boo hoo's
sat here saying my thoughts
random, but they're caught

Im gunna sit here and enjoy my can
hopefully tomorrow get a tan
let these thoughts go round in ma head
or come post rubbish on ere instead
fry06
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01:45 Mon 11 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Well iv bin ordered too be happy
and try not write cra**y
so here goes
what happens who knows

errrmmmm

Rainbows are big and bright
my poems are really shhh
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01:47 Mon 11 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
fry06 said:
Well iv bin ordered too be happy
and try not write cra**y
so here goes
what happens who knows

errrmmmm

Rainbows are big and bright
my poems are really shhh


wooohoooo gettin better fry ... maybe another happy try needed ??
fry06
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01:53 Mon 11 Apr 11 (BST)  [Link]  
Well i have no clue
be happy or blue
Have i time to think
Or should i just drink

alcohol is best
my brain needs rest
Currently watching american dad
hmmmm now thats sad
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