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justsumgirl
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09:04 Mon 3 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
SHOES


A little poem i'll do for you's
All about me and my shoes

Diff sized heels and colours galore
All lined neatly along my floor

Flats and sandles, suede or leather
Summer flip flops for nice weather

Trainees for jogging, boots when cold
Some are plain and some really bold

I love my shoes like every girl
I slip them on and give a twirl

Any girl can look really sweet
With great shoes upon her feet



TA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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06:01 Tue 4 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Nice one Paula
justsumgirl
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12:58 Wed 5 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Thanks lol, i thought you'd done a poem then!


Come on ppl...poems!!!!!
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22:16 Thu 6 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
My body clock

I've been haunted now for a month or so,
By a sleepless disease that I do not know.
Not insomnia, for I'm eventually cast,
When the day breaks I hit the pillow so fast.

Mindless thoughts as I lay awake,
Praying to God for sleep, for body's own sake!
The pillow grows restless, my feet toss and turn,
And there's a fire in the mind that continues to burn.

There's no lack of sheep, too many flew by,
What is this awareness that keeps open my eyes?
And then dawn breaks, and the birds start to sing,
By now I'm haggard, and my eyes start to sting.

'Have I taken care of this?, Do I need to do that?'
Questions run quickly around the head that lies flat.
Then I hear Pa, who's up for his work,
And the cat scratching around, for she always lurks.

So then comes the noise, I hear the kettle boil,
By now I'm going through sleepless turmoil.
Nothing on the box, I'm a prisoner trapped,
It's obvious now that the night has overlapped.

And then I'm awoken, I must of gotten some sleep,
Gingerly I crawl out of bed to my feet.
I check out the time, its midday at least,
And my tummy's rumbling, its time for a feast.

I know that this will repeat, I can't have an early night,
I go to bed early, to try end my plight.
But my mind becomes active, at such a late hour,
It's a curse that I can't seem to overpower.

Ctd...
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22:17 Thu 6 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
...

So I post this one late, my first in a while,
And though I cant sleep, I can raise a nice smile.
I hope sincerely, that this script finds you well,
Now I must lay down, and go straight back through hell!


Hope everyone I know on here is good, been a while!
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23:16 Fri 7 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
So i guess this post is finally the time,
Where I post the most important message of mine.
it's not a bump, or a catch up call,
this is something written upon the wall.
Maybe some respect for me is lost,
And I cant blame anyone for this dreadful cost.
Neglective is the word that would best describe me,
Too much time reading books or watching TV.
Some friends on here that I'll never describe,
To the life I have on the other side.
I kept it all secret, my own good fun,
I basked on the beaches of funkypool sun.
Theres just one person to be left in the past,
Someody I hope that I can make it last.
I posted poems alone, only for her head,
And I'd just make them up, to place her in good stead.
I know that she'll read it, she's such a good lass,
A top sort of bird, placed in the top class.
It's wierd coming back, a stranger am I,
I realise its true and brings a tear to my eye.
The past is now gone, I cannot redeem,
And the future is too far gone to be seen.
She knows we were close, her and all my friends,
And the memories I'll cherish right through to the end.
So here's goodbye, unless you want me straight back,
I'm a little apprehensive about all of the flack.
I see this thread as an outlet, a place to express,
And I still regard funkypool as one of the best.

sorry im SLIGHTLY tipsy
justsumgirl
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09:04 Sat 8 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
OMG STE!! Cant believe youve been here!

mr_guevara said:
My body clock


I can so relate to that! Ive been there, done it too haha. Great poem x
justsumgirl
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09:12 Sat 8 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
mr_guevara said:
So i guess this post is finally the time
Where I post the most important message of mine
it's not a bump, or a catch up call
this is something written upon the wall
Maybe some respect for me is lost
And I cant blame anyone for this dreadful cost.
Neglective is the word that would best describe me
Too much time reading books or watching TV
Some friends on here that I'll never describe,
To the life I have on the other side.
I kept it all secret, my own good fun,
I basked on the beaches of funkypool sun.
Theres just one person to be left in the past,
Someody I hope that I can make it last.
I posted poems alone, only for her head,
And I'd just make them up, to place her in good stead.
I know that she'll read it, she's such a good lass,
A top sort of bird, placed in the top class.
It's wierd coming back, a stranger am I,
I realise its true and brings a tear to my eye.
The past is now gone, I cannot redeem,
And the future is too far gone to be seen.
She knows we were close, her and all my friends,
And the memories I'll cherish right through to the end.
So here's goodbye, unless you want me straight back,
I'm a little apprehensive about all of the flack.
I see this thread as an outlet, a place to express,
And I still regard funkypool as one of the best.

sorry im SLIGHTLY tipsy



Dont you DARE let that be your last poem Guevara! Ill be having words if so :@
justsumgirl
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09:15 Sat 8 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
I love it Ste, and i love the fact theres parts which were meant for someone..AND.. more than anything, i love that fact you even done a poem and posted here.

I hope to read many more of yours too and i hope to see you back around funky! We cud make a new film! Pits still here...tho he's a bit old and grumpy for directing now


~Paula~ x
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10:16 Sat 8 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Coming back from holiday,
Miles from home and miles away,
Getting back on funkypool,
Is so great and very cool!
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17:55 Sat 8 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Great poem Ste
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18:29 Sat 8 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
SHOES


A little poem i'll do for you's
All about me and my shoes

Diff sized heels and colours galore
All lined neatly along my floor

Flats and sandles, suede or leather
Summer flip flops for nice weather

Trainees for jogging, boots when cold
Some are plain and some really bold

I love my shoes like every girl
I slip them on and give a twirl

Any girl can look really sweet
With great shoes upon her feet



TA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAA



Loving that one paula :)

glad im not only one who lines shoes up lol
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06:23 Sun 9 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
In the sea as blue as the sky,
In the field as green as the land,
In the house as warm as a fire,
In the air as cold as my hand.

In the garden as tidy as a suit,
In the trees as joyful as a clown,
In the poem as words come storming out,
Will be based on a little, quiet town.

Callum, 11 years - I love english at school, especially poetry. I hope you enjoy it.

Edited at 11:29 Sun 9/08/09 (BST)
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06:29 Sun 9 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
As happy as can be,
As playful as can be,
As busy as can be,
The stinging of a bumble bee.

As rich as can be,
As grateful as can be,
As loyal as can be,
The politness of her majesty.

Callum, 11 years - This is a poem made of similes it can easily be done, I hope you enjoy it.
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06:46 Sun 9 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Nice one Callum!
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06:58 Sun 9 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
lewisere69 said:
Nice one Callum!


Thank You!
justsumgirl
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11:03 Sun 9 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
A REPLY POEM


I'm hoping this isnt the last time
You post a poem or a rhyme
Here i give you a catch up call
Get urself posting upon this wall!!

You may feel like an FP ghost
Your someone missed the most
I for one still have that respect
So to see your poems i'll expect

We'll have a catch up act the fool
A laugh a chat and play some pool
Reminise about that young guy
The one who wore a baby blue tie!!

We'll talk about the good old days
In the Garage like we was always
The life you have on the other side
I have too so we'll take it in stride

Or that last person from your past
The one you wanted to make last
From her you can slowly stray
Your secret thoughts locked away

Before you make up your mind
Read between each typed line
Is there codes asking you to stay
Or a hint for you to go away?

Is this the end of a funky era?
A last goodbye to mr_guevara
I think you'll know what to do
And you'll know what i want too

Two last verses before i finish
Dont let these words diminish
I send them with real sincerity
But you'll know that dear Ste

Im sure you'll know what to do
You should know what id like too
This thread, you know cant die
So i'll just wait for YOUR reply :D


~Paula~





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03:23 Mon 10 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Nice One Paula!
justsumgirl
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19:21 Tue 11 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Thanks :)


justsumgirl said:
URA

Knocking games off the page
Looking for them takes an age

We know you want ur posts high
And only god himself knows why

Please consider other users
All your doing is confuse us (lol)

Your a nice friendly lad but URA
On 1st page let good games stay


TA DAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
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04:02 Wed 12 Aug 09 (BST)  [Link]  
Doesnt really have a nice rhythm Paula.
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