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12:04 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
the moon isn't boring
even though it's while I'm snoring
I never write like this
a corny target i hope I miss
this is suppose to be funny
so laugh honey!
keoghz
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12:10 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
THE POOL PLAYER





He came into the room with a smile, 'cause He knew,
He'd show them all what a Pool Player could do.

He took out His cue, so shiny and bright,
It seemed to be made of just fire and light!

He broke the balls hard, spreading them wide,
And the nine ball went in, off the six, in the side.

He cracked them again, then wouldn't you know?
A one-nine combination, three rails (just for show).

He broke and ran out, all bank shots and then,
The nine on the break! And again! And again!

The next game He made all nine balls on the break.
Yet another opponent was left in His wake.

He dropped balls with caroms, and jump shots, and kicks.
The others just watched, then unscrewed their sticks.

One by one they gave up, in awe not in shame.
They had not had a chance, He ran out every game!

He returned to the night and He smiled, 'cause it's true,
He'd shown them all what a Pool Player could do.
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16:06 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Today i won 9ball speed tourny
Im so happy its pretty courny
ha ha ha ha yes im the champ
Im still overwelmed and lil damp

justsumgirl
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16:46 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
keoghz said:
THE POOL PLAYER





He came into the room with a smile, 'cause He knew,
He'd show them all what a Pool Player could do.

He took out His cue, so shiny and bright,
It seemed to be made of just fire and light!

He broke the balls hard, spreading them wide,
And the nine ball went in, off the six, in the side.

He cracked them again, then wouldn't you know?
A one-nine combination, three rails (just for show).

He broke and ran out, all bank shots and then,
The nine on the break! And again! And again!

The next game He made all nine balls on the break.
Yet another opponent was left in His wake.

He dropped balls with caroms, and jump shots, and kicks.
The others just watched, then unscrewed their sticks.

One by one they gave up, in awe not in shame.
They had not had a chance, He ran out every game!

He returned to the night and He smiled, 'cause it's true,
He'd shown them all what a Pool Player could do.


BRILL THAT! More from you defo..

Woooo WD Pit
justsumgirl
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16:48 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Someone Special


Im reciting this poem from my heart
No words planned or where to start
I just have to let somebody know
Just how much he makes me glow

I Laugh all day with others online
And dont get me wrong that is fine
Posting and having a few games
We even call each other bad names

They are mates and make me laff
They cheer me up in this old gaff
And tho they mean loads to me
They dont compare to him ya see

This is the one person that i find
Is constantly roaming round my mind
No matter what the time of day
Into my brain he worms his way

Its now been ages for me and him
Weve been thru things thick and thin
Bad times outweighed by the good
He makes things right, only he could

So here i am after all this time
Declaring my love via this rhyme
Stell, i just need to tell you true
Im still here and I STILL LOVE YOU


3 ~ 8 ~ 1 ALWAYS

YOUR Paula xx
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16:55 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Lovley that is, Weldone
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16:58 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Awwwwwwwww bab.......thats really good or something
justsumgirl
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17:00 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
pitbull_pete said:
Lovley that is, Weldone


Thanks Bab :)


stellaman said:
Awwwwwwwww bab.......thats really good or something


OH! Pmsl ur such a pleb sometimes yano hahaha
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17:02 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
Someone Special


Im reciting this poem from my heart
No words planned or where to start
I just have to let somebody know
Just how much she makes me glow

I Laugh all day with others online
And dont get me wrong that is fine
Posting and having a few games
We even call each other bad names

They are mates and make me laff
They cheer me up in this old gaff
And tho they mean loads to me
They dont compare to her ya see

This is the one person that i find
Is constantly roaming round my mind
No matter what the time of day
Into my brain she worms her way

Its now been ages for me and her
Weve been thru things thick and thinner
Bad times outweighed by the good
He makes things right, only she could

So here i am after all this time
Declaring my love via this rhyme
Paula, i just need to tell you true
Im still here and I STILL LOVE YOU


3 ~ 8 ~ 1 ALWAYS

YOUR Stell xx
justsumgirl
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17:59 Sun 31 Aug 08 (BST)  [Link]  
THATS CHEATING!

Pfffffffft am not good enuff for me own one eh? EH?




XX
vanpersie11
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03:17 Mon 1 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
NUTTERS FC

WE CREATED A CREW CALLED NUTTERS FC
SOMEDAY WE WILL EXPAND EVERYONE WILL SEE
WHEN IM NOT PLAYING FOOTBALL OR GOING TO SCHOOL
HAVING LAUGHS WITH NUTTERS FC ACTING LIKE A FOOL

SHE LIGHTS UP THE ROOM WITH HER SENSE OF HUMOR
GOT KICKED IN THE SHIN SHOULD OF SEEN IT COMING SOONER

WHEN I LISTEN TO METALLICA JUDAS PRIEST OR SLAYER
THINKING ABOUT SUMMER AND THE NEXT TIME ILL GET TO PLAY HER

LISTENING TO MY DEFINITION OF REVERSE PHSYCOLOGY
WASTED 30 MINUTES OF HER LIFE I OWE HER AN APOLOGY

BUT SHE LAUGHS IT OFF AND ALWAYS MAKES FUN OF ME
IM DEFINETLY GOING SENILE ILL NEVER COME TO REALITY

LAUGHING WITH SUMMER PUTS A SMILE ON THE FACE OF ME, SHE WILL ALWAYS BE A PART OF THE NUTTERS FC

GOONERS FOR LIFE WITH MY M8 POT THE LOT
STEPH U ARE OLD TOO FIGURES THAT U HAD FORGOT

COME TOURNAMENT TIME SHE WILL TRY TO BE THERE
A TRUE NUTTER FC SHE WILL ALWAYS REMAIN HERE

PLAYING KILLER QUITE TRYING TO PUT MY LIFE TO REST
KILLER AGAINST POT IS ACTUALLY PUTTING MY LIFE TO THE TEST

HOPEFULLY FRAN WILL TALK TO MARK ONE DAY
JUST KNOW THAT IM HERE WE CAN HAVE FUN ALL DAY

WATCHING FOOTBALL ON MY PC THANKING SAM FOR THE SITE, HOPEFULLY WE ARE STILL ON FOR THAT BIG DATE TONIGHT

HOPEFULLY ILL GET TO PLAY KILLER WITH POOLMASTER, IM USUALLY THE FIRST ONE OUT ITS A TOTAL DISASTER

TO THE REST OF THE CREW I HAVENT FORGOTTEN ABOUT U
I CAN ONLY USE SOO MANY WORDS OTHER PEOPLE NEED ROOM TOO

GOOOOOOO NUTTTTTERS FC!
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04:14 Mon 1 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Wow i love it that is well good van.
mufc2008
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04:29 Mon 1 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
well done van lol
ye it still on
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06:46 Mon 1 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
vanpersie11 said:
NUTTERS FC

WE CREATED A CREW CALLED NUTTERS FC
SOMEDAY WE WILL EXPAND EVERYONE WILL SEE
WHEN IM NOT PLAYING FOOTBALL OR GOING TO SCHOOL
HAVING LAUGHS WITH NUTTERS FC ACTING LIKE A FOOL

SHE LIGHTS UP THE ROOM WITH HER SENSE OF HUMOR
GOT KICKED IN THE SHIN SHOULD OF SEEN IT COMING SOONER

WHEN I LISTEN TO METALLICA JUDAS PRIEST OR SLAYER
THINKING ABOUT SUMMER AND THE NEXT TIME ILL GET TO PLAY HER

LISTENING TO MY DEFINITION OF REVERSE PHSYCOLOGY
WASTED 30 MINUTES OF HER LIFE I OWE HER AN APOLOGY

BUT SHE LAUGHS IT OFF AND ALWAYS MAKES FUN OF ME
IM DEFINETLY GOING SENILE ILL NEVER COME TO REALITY

LAUGHING WITH SUMMER PUTS A SMILE ON THE FACE OF ME, SHE WILL ALWAYS BE A PART OF THE NUTTERS FC

GOONERS FOR LIFE WITH MY M8 POT THE LOT
STEPH U ARE OLD TOO FIGURES THAT U HAD FORGOT

COME TOURNAMENT TIME SHE WILL TRY TO BE THERE
A TRUE NUTTER FC SHE WILL ALWAYS REMAIN HERE

PLAYING KILLER QUITE TRYING TO PUT MY LIFE TO REST
KILLER AGAINST POT IS ACTUALLY PUTTING MY LIFE TO THE TEST

HOPEFULLY FRAN WILL TALK TO MARK ONE DAY
JUST KNOW THAT IM HERE WE CAN HAVE FUN ALL DAY

WATCHING FOOTBALL ON MY PC THANKING SAM FOR THE SITE, HOPEFULLY WE ARE STILL ON FOR THAT BIG DATE TONIGHT
Its best not to type in caps


That was a great one keoghz
clooneman
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13:26 Mon 1 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
justsumgirl said:
There was a young man named Cloone
His Poems were as boring as the moon
But normally he's really ok
Just be having an off day
Cos usually he really is a loon!!



My poems are short and sweet
They don't leave you glued to your seat.
But that's of no consequence,
Cos I'm sure you will countenance
A short poem is just as complete!
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17:43 Mon 1 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
lol
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14:57 Tue 2 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Wooooooo, loved that van (response was a day late, hope it don't matter)

And yours wasn't too bad I guess cloon
justsumgirl
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13:31 Wed 3 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
I found this again on page three
And so once again its upset me
Why do i bother or even ask
Is a tiny poem too much of a task
Just a few words are all you need
Its not to much of a bigger deed
Gone are the ppl who posted here
Recited me poems that meant so dear
Fun and games are slipping so fast
They are becoming a thing of the past
But still i try to hold this close
Cos its the thread i love most
So if you can give a peom a whirl
And i will be one happy Girl




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13:51 Wed 3 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Public Speaking
by deuce2


Rhyming was not my specialty
Nor was reading aloud

But when I escape from reality
Suddenly I float on a cloud.

In poetry, I find invulnerability
Into dangers abundant I ploughed.

This feeling was just a novelty
I'm really in front of a crowd.

And what does it mean - undershrievalty?
Because I just screamed it aloud.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I'm not sure if it's proper poetry form and all, but it'll do for my poetry thread debut.

Edited at 18:54 Wed 3/09/08 (BST)
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16:33 Wed 3 Sep 08 (BST)  [Link]  
Oh wow thats gd that is deuce2
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