{Look please} the loss (poems)
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13:52 Fri 14 Jul 06 (BST) [Link]
gr8 poem very powerfull and inept about getting the point across very good like to read more of ur work . exquisite ! gre8 realism in the writing very in ur face and cre8's a clear image about the situation in hand
Edited at 18:54 Fri 14/07/06 (BST)
Edited at 18:54 Fri 14/07/06 (BST)
17:23 Fri 14 Jul 06 (BST) [Link]
Nick! Get that confused smilie added pronto!
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13:21 Mon 17 Jul 06 (BST) [Link]
That isn't going to work no more,
seeing through those blue eyes,
All those dirty little lies.
Break from sanity,
living for the insanity.
Break through the door,
push her to the floor,
crushed windpipe,
she can't breath no more.
No more cheating,
no more lies,
i stare now at those blue bloodshot eyes
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a new poem 15 minutes work may need some mor ework on it. enjoy
seeing through those blue eyes,
All those dirty little lies.
Break from sanity,
living for the insanity.
Break through the door,
push her to the floor,
crushed windpipe,
she can't breath no more.
No more cheating,
no more lies,
i stare now at those blue bloodshot eyes
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a new poem 15 minutes work may need some mor ework on it. enjoy
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{Look please} the loss (poems)
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