...Maybe so far along, in outer space, theres is a world for all the Gods,
They could be really pleasant guys, or a bunch of useless sods.
The pro's and con's of the Earth are certain, with space we are not sure.
This is evidently so, as no-ones breached the universe before.
So many rocks, and stars as such, many places to call home,
But now we sit alone on this earth, a war-ground we call home.
I think the meaning for all this, is that I want to be a star,
Not the one in the newspapers, or the ones with flashy cars.
But one that twinkles, and shines so bright, one that holds hope for others,
Then surely there would be other stars, ones to call my brothers.
I look up on a star tonight, and question so much now,
But the real question I think isnt 'why?' , I really think its 'how'?

--- the start of that poem is on other page---


Sorry.

OMG Ste that was great!! *hugs*

(u ok?? )

Thanks hun...Im great thanks .

It was fab that Ste.......


Title: Nightime........

glad ure ok hun *hugs*...

good title

Nuit (night time)

La nuit est si calme, et je ne peux pas dormir,
Et dans mon propre esprit que j'ose ne pas pleurer. Je suis inquiet, soucieux, mes courses d'esprit rapidement,
Mais avec le poids sur mes yeux, ceci ne
peut pas durer sûrement.
Il y a des autres comme ceci aussi, Paula, Steph et je,
Nous parlons sur ici fatigué, comme les heures grandissent timide.
Il y a un moment là-bas j'étais, posé sur mon lit,
Transpirant comme une rivière dans la chaleur, un fardeau sur ma tête.
Donc le seul relâchement est la poésie, mon seul un vrai ami,
Quand j'ai été trahi par tout, il fera y reste ‹ jusqu'à la fin.
Dormir maintenant mes amis pour c'est dernier, nous parlerons bientôt dans le matin,
Mais j'ai le strenght pour être en haut toute nuit, mais pourtant aucune force pour bâiller.

Edited at 04:07 Sun 17/09/06 (BST)

OMG all in french...do u speak it fluently cos if u do then wow and if u dont then WOW!! ....

tho...i need it translating lol its been 2 years since i did french!!

FAB!!! Just FAB! (if i cud read it Lmao)

Night-time

The night is so quiet, and I cannot sleep,
And in my own mind I dare not to weep.
I am restless, anxious, my mind runs fast,
But with the weight on my eyes, this surely cannot last.
There are others like this too, Paula, Steph and I,
We talk on here tired, as the hours grow shy.
A moment ago there I was, laid upon my bed,
Sweating like a river in the heat, a burden on my head.
So the only release is poetry, my only one true friend,
When I have been betrayed by all, it will stay there 'til the end.
Sleep now my friends for it is late, we will talk soon in the morn,
But I have the strenght to be up all night, but yet no strength to yawn.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Come here *hugs* Fab Ste

awwwww ste i love em both !! *hugs* great poems hun......i dunno how u do em in english nevermind french!

lol there great Ste absoloutly bril !!!!!!!!

Title: Aliens !!!!!!!!

Aliens

When its dark, and i go to sleep
i often wake up to hav a peep
i open the curtains to where they do stand
little green men, on my garden they land
i stare at them for a while,disbelieving what i see
they move and i no that they are the key
My mother sees them and rings up the army
i cant stop her coz when shes angry shes like a Tsunami!?!
she speaks to The captain, Srgent Curt
Where he immediately puts the world on red alert
they come round my house, i hav to think fast
i hide them in a bunker that was made in past
we hear there footsteps coming closer each time
where all of us shiver and giv a little whime
the army starts shooting where they get scared to there soul
so the green men kill the army like a voodo doll
they go in there spaceship when the coast is clear
often to drink stella and lots of beer

(carry on to last one^^^^)

Then they rise up and blow up the world
and its only me and them that had a big felled
then they abduct me in there shiny beam
thats when i wake up to find its only a dream

WOW im really proud of myself *claps himself*

haha ruddan that was brilliant!

your getting better at these, I'll be in your shadow soon haha!

Aliens

On a planet called Zorg, is where I shook its hand,
Stood on the rocky, dusty red land.
They had three eyes, a nose with no ears,
And I offered these beings a couple of beers.
So I got in their ship, for a tour of their place,
And they could see the excitement all over my face.
With one leg they all hop, and their rate is so slow,
And when they are happy their left nipple glows.
The mothers and children, sleep in a bubble,
In case of invasion, or some sort of trouble.
They had their own army, each loaded with a gun,
And the army was run by the sarge and his son.
They also played a sport, which I had never seen,
You had to shoot thin air with a laser beam.
They had technology, far advanced from ours,
And they kept all their belongings in platinum jars.
There was one alien girl, who was apart from the rest,
For she had five bussoms, placed on her chest...

...I asked for a feel, and she wondered why,
And when I reclined she started to cry.
So out of my pocket, I gave her a flower,
This whole day dream I just had, only lasted an hour.
But it seemed so real, I knew it was true,
Their cant just be beings like me and you.
So I've created a shuttle, to fly into space,
With lightning speeds- my so much pace.
We shall find this land, with our alien friends,
And show them our riches, and all of our spends.
We can all survive together, help each other out,
In times of forgiveness, and times of trouble and doubt.

Nice one again ste, though it looks like you've got some competition from ruddan . Seriously though, you're both very good, and i hope for more of the same!

Very good you 2......

If ruddan can do one better about me than Ste has done, then id say yes, he does have comp! lol.....Soz ruddan lol


Title For Ruddan then: JSG / Paula

Title for Ste: Pauline!!