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08:11 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
Ruddan
He loves this thread reads it everyday,
And PM'd me last night to get his way.
A poem based on my knowledge of him,
But already ideas are running thin.
I guess he likes poems, always here to read,
And the words in my blood I truly bleed.
He seems a fun guy, always up for a chat,
He walks into the room and takes off his hat.
Just over a hundred posts, he's on his way,
And I saw him on a hundred and twelve today.
I have to say he's polite, well I hope so at least,
Underneath he could be a huge boisterous beast.
But no ruddan's cool, has me me laugh here and there,
And he has the presence of a big friendly bear.
I'd have a pint with this lad, if he was in the pub,
And buy him a shot if we were in a club.
So carry on posting, ruddan my friend,
And we shall be laughing til the day comes to an end.
He loves this thread reads it everyday,
And PM'd me last night to get his way.
A poem based on my knowledge of him,
But already ideas are running thin.
I guess he likes poems, always here to read,
And the words in my blood I truly bleed.
He seems a fun guy, always up for a chat,
He walks into the room and takes off his hat.
Just over a hundred posts, he's on his way,
And I saw him on a hundred and twelve today.
I have to say he's polite, well I hope so at least,
Underneath he could be a huge boisterous beast.
But no ruddan's cool, has me me laugh here and there,
And he has the presence of a big friendly bear.
I'd have a pint with this lad, if he was in the pub,
And buy him a shot if we were in a club.
So carry on posting, ruddan my friend,
And we shall be laughing til the day comes to an end.
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08:15 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
The Beach
I found a beach one time, hidden behind a hill,
The sand was just perfect, and the sea was so still.
A nude beach it was, and some people I met there,
One girl stands out, she had long wavy hair.
Not the tallest woman, but a great body at that,
So I asked her to walk, and on a rock we sat.
The wind blew her hair, and I saw here great smile,
And we talked and we got to know each other the while.
Then as we went in the sea, only in the shallow part,
She had me a water fight, and she did touch my heart.
Splashing and laughing, it ended in a kiss,
My heart felt so high, I was in eternal bliss.
So we felt the sand in our feet, the sun on our back,
There was no great thing that this girl really lacked.
So I told her I loved her, right there on that beach,
And now Im so happy, this love cannot be teached.
I found a beach one time, hidden behind a hill,
The sand was just perfect, and the sea was so still.
A nude beach it was, and some people I met there,
One girl stands out, she had long wavy hair.
Not the tallest woman, but a great body at that,
So I asked her to walk, and on a rock we sat.
The wind blew her hair, and I saw here great smile,
And we talked and we got to know each other the while.
Then as we went in the sea, only in the shallow part,
She had me a water fight, and she did touch my heart.
Splashing and laughing, it ended in a kiss,
My heart felt so high, I was in eternal bliss.
So we felt the sand in our feet, the sun on our back,
There was no great thing that this girl really lacked.
So I told her I loved her, right there on that beach,
And now Im so happy, this love cannot be teached.
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08:16 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
awwwww thanks ste, thats really nice ya no
*wipes tear dribbling from his eye*
*wipes tear dribbling from his eye*
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08:21 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
So Was that beach one *also wipes a tear*........ I love It Ste.....
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08:24 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
WOW, ur a natural ste, he should be a famous poem writer shouldnt he paula and jsg
Edited at 13:25 Mon 4/09/06 (BST)
Edited at 13:25 Mon 4/09/06 (BST)
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08:26 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
HA! T.V !!
Theres many better than me mate...you know, pro's...
Theres many better than me mate...you know, pro's...
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09:13 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
Thats a Yes From Me and a yes from JSG.
He is Very good Ruddan
He is Very good Ruddan
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09:32 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
Once upon a time there were three fleas
These fleas had knobbly knees
The knobbly knees fleas flew through trees
When flying through trees the fleas passed bees
The bees and fleas flew with knobbly knees
Through the trees with a chilly breeze
The trees with the fleas where covered in cheese
So the cheese tree's fleas flew throught the breeze by the bees in sets of threes with knobbly knees
Untill they gave up and flew the other way.
Edited at 14:34 Mon 4/09/06 (BST)
These fleas had knobbly knees
The knobbly knees fleas flew through trees
When flying through trees the fleas passed bees
The bees and fleas flew with knobbly knees
Through the trees with a chilly breeze
The trees with the fleas where covered in cheese
So the cheese tree's fleas flew throught the breeze by the bees in sets of threes with knobbly knees
Untill they gave up and flew the other way.
Edited at 14:34 Mon 4/09/06 (BST)
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09:34 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
or gave up trying to make sense of the poem still very good though squeezy, you should post poems more often
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09:34 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
WOW thats more of a toung twister squeezy m8
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09:37 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
PMSL!!!!!! My Eyes was going funny trying to read that!
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09:39 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
An one for the new term...
One more day of school,
One more day of sorrow,
One more day in this old dump
And we'll be home tomorrow!
sing it at school on friday
One more day of school,
One more day of sorrow,
One more day in this old dump
And we'll be home tomorrow!
sing it at school on friday
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10:37 Mon 4 Sep 06 (BST) [Link]
squeezy, i thought ur poem was great
and i couldnt say it really fast
urs was good too stevey m8
and ive enjoyed the ones in the past
ur the king of this thread
and i appreicate the poem u did for me
the only time u dont post poems, is wen ur in bed
same wit urs squeezy, loved the bit bout the bee
Mr.G, me and jsg r ur 2 fans
and weve enjoyed them since the start
u should b a pro, go nation wide in a van
now im off to eat a cream tart
how bout that lolz
and i couldnt say it really fast
urs was good too stevey m8
and ive enjoyed the ones in the past
ur the king of this thread
and i appreicate the poem u did for me
the only time u dont post poems, is wen ur in bed
same wit urs squeezy, loved the bit bout the bee
Mr.G, me and jsg r ur 2 fans
and weve enjoyed them since the start
u should b a pro, go nation wide in a van
now im off to eat a cream tart
how bout that lolz
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