i rate, for i am a fool darn straight
that the following lines
will be a little rhym.
the morning is sunny
we're all off to make money
just never forget
safety is the best bet
cus if you go to soon
you'd let a lot of people doon
if you feel like adding to my verse
please do not make it worse! (pretty impossible)

Edited at 09:30 Thu 29/06/06 (BST)

Not to make things worse
by adding to your verse.
the thread here on
will be a popular one
for one time i did
blowed a bubble so big
that inside my bubble
was a little Boopsey double

:)

Boops we have a poem thread you can post on, its in fun and games, and there are some fab poems on there.......check it out



(gud poem btw)

No justsomegirl, you don't get my idea. I wished for people to continue on my poem, not to create there own, to give an insite to people intelligence and attitude. not to mention sense of humour. If you're reading this and feel like adding to my poem, DO IT! should be interesting.

OH! Am sorry! lol......count me out then i'm crap at poems

thats ok my dear
things became ever so clear
that when justsomegirl
came into the thread with a twirl
that the tension tightened
and the whole room brightened :)

My dear i hear you say
so nice, you made my day.
still my poems are so crap.
But for ur's you get a clap!!!

that rhym was ace
placed a smile on my face
i'd just like to say
that although i am g a y
you could turn me straight anyday
try and beat that for cheese
i'm down on my knees
begging for someone to play me !!

Sitting in anticipation
What will happen who can tell?
Im not alone across the nation
Hurry and release me from this hell!

is that hell from playing me?
we're not very good, can't you see?
this black ball is beginning to annoy me
so after next game, i'm going for a wee

Here we go again
Another rhyming thread
keeping all the words flowing
i'm sure messes up my head
but i do it anyway
to pass away the time
and surely now will some one
carry on from mine

this is my reply
sure to make time fly
i'll say this only once
whilst scratching my bonce
trying to think what to say

thanks for replying Squeezy
this thread makes me laugh, makes me queezy
'cus all in all when i think real hard
this rhyming lark's EASY PEASY

When you wake
Try not to shake
You may get dandruff
In your bran flakes

i wish i was better
at writing each letter
in this peom i am continuing
i shud not really be persuing


hehehehe

All good rhymes so far
But your all stuck on par
So take some more time
when thinking up your rhyme
you'll soon be as good as will dunbar

dunbar was a famous poet incase you was wondering :OP

So this poem's meant to test my IQ?
My reasoning, creativity,
And my attitude too

So better think of something
Cool and clever
A bit contemporary
And boring never

But I can't

to keep these silly poems for failing
il have to tell the creater to start bailing
if u come to our town and act like a clown
we,l ban you like twice daily.